new ss'THE GAME OF LIFE' chapter 4 pg 16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Awsomeee...update
love it
plzzz...update soon thanx for PM.

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

mysterious
but seems interesting
updste soon
pls pm me

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

OMG!!! u started a new bt mujhe pm kyu nhi bheja[:'(] I noe ki mai cmnt unres nhi krti bt still😔sorry dear will pm you next time for sure
Awesome prologue ⭐️
Manyata is an officer 😉 Or uday bda sa kamina 😛
Loved d first chap❤️
Update ASAP and do pm me😊

Originally posted by: pia.raha

itss veryy interstingg!!!! i also think dat dis shreya mayb manyata to invstgate dis cse,hhmmm waitng to read mre😊😊😊

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

Hey andy😳hi saloni😃

it was awesum yaar,,,, i really loved the prologue nd chapter 1 alot...👏thanks so much

great work,,, u have written it in such a manner tht i m seeing myself getting hooked to this story like nething

must say you really have flair fr such writings...i like writing suspence stories

nd this time m gonna read it frm the beginning so as to avoid any further headaches in future like it happened to me whn i started reading "the second shadow"😆 during my exams...second shadow was a bit violent earlier now it has calmed down, and regarding headaches, there are going to come soon😈

coming to the cahpeter,,,must say it was really intriguing specially this girl "shreya"

i knw she is 22 nd has been appointed as udays pa nd mayta is 27 but i dont know y i feel like this tht shreya will only be manyta...i dont think so. maybe the next chap wil clear this doubt

i mean to get proofs against uday,,,manyta might have forge the documents to show herself as... shreya😕😆uday does know who manyata is. she is a police officer and a well known person . so it would be difficult for her to hide in the pretence of another person.

bt whatever it is ???????all will be revealed , but only after some time

i m so looking forward to reading ur side of story...so am i 😉

plz update next part soon iam updating cyclically, so this update will come in 2 weeks time

thnx fr the pm nd welcome😃

do pm me in future as well fr this storysure will do so 😃

P.S yaar, i really ove ur this story "love to hate each other "...plz uski jaldi jaldi updates de dia karo...muje itns wait mat karaya karo😳the update of love to hate each other will be this week itself.you will not have to wait more

ok...love yaahlove you tooo

bye

Saloni

thanks so much saloni for this comment

happy you started reading this from the beginning itself

dont worry headaches will come soon😉

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks...fabulous