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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Wow, nice, amazing, fantastic update 👏
Very unique story n thats why it is totally amazing 👍🏼
Loved Manyata's plan, wonder who that lady was that helped her, I think its his secetry
Really eager to know whats going to happen next 😃
Plz pm n plz continue soon 😊

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Hi Andy , I just realised ... I didn't give u a comment for this SS! Don't remember why 😕 , but I did read it on the first day😃. Great update (as usual)👏. There is a mole in the police-force and poor Uday is in deep trouble. YES _ I SAID "POOR UDAY" ... because after those income-tax people finish with him ... he'll be "POOR" 😭! Manyata's meeting with that young lady ... seemed as if Manyata knew that girl personally. Could it be Manyata's sister that's working in the office with Uday? I hope Shreya is not Manyata's sister ... because I hate Shreya😡. I wish Uday's cronies at the police-station give him some sort of lead about what's going down! (YEP ... I'M ON UDAY'S SIDE!) They must alert him before Manyata gives her next blow😉. Very interesting chapter ... want to read more😳. Thanx 4 the scrap😃.

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

hey!
read all the updates
its just awesome
the concept of the story is totally different from others
but i loved it to the core
also u have written it simply superb
manayata's planning is very nice
i'm eagerly waiting to read more
please update it to soon
also do pm me if poosible

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Awesume update andy
i hope nxt time sme manveer scene
do pm me n update soon

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

HEY ANDY PLS UPDATE THIS STORY PLSSS

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: roopali15
HEY ANDY PLS UPDATE THIS STORY PLSSS

hey roopali, i am nt updating this ss, because the plot i had in mind does nt fit here anymore, more over my new ff is inspired from this ss. So the game of life will continue through my new ff

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