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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: manisha98
superb update andy...
luvd it a lot...

thnx 4r d pm nd do continue soon😉!!

thanks so much dear😃

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@ITV_Loverr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Very nice update dear. Good job. Update soon.

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

gr8 update...
btw thnxs for the pm

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Archi02
Very nice update dear. Good job. Update soon.

thank u so much
next update after 2 weeks

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: edward123
gr8 update...
btw thnxs for the pm

thnks so much

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Great Part Andy.. great concept soemthing different

Maybe Shreya is also an undercover agent working for Manyata and her team

Cont Soon

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great Part Andy.. great concept soemthing different
Maybe Shreya is also an undercover agent working for Manyata and her team
Cont Soon

thanks so much anam
you are almost right abt shreya
but lets hope uday does not find abt her

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Amazing start Andy, ch1 was excellent 👏. Poor Ramsingh ... talk about being trapped between a rock & a hard place😔 . One side , he has the police behind him ... on the other side , he will incur the wrath of Uday. But , i expected him to be killed in his jail cell. U turned Uday into a Mafia-type of underworld don 😡 ... but I still find him so appealing😳. I could just imagine him in that suit & tie , with a revolver in his hand ... attaching the silencer to the gun and then pulling the trigger to finish off Mr Malhotra 😈. Awesome scene👍🏼. Manyata & 2 other agents have been put on the case ... 1 is Jaggat , could the other 1 be Shreya 🤔? Great update Andy , thanks for the Pm😊.