new ss'THE GAME OF LIFE' chapter 4 pg 16

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Hi guys. Some of you may know me. I write 2 other stories over her. This is my new manveer story. hope you would like it . do give your comments about it. only if you all want me to continue will I write further

So do read now

THE GAME OF LIFE

The person who was in police custody was badly beaten. There were many wounds on his body. The only light in the room was that of an over head lamp. The yellow light of the room was giving it a eerie look. There was complete silence. The person was sitting on a chair, looking so tired like he would drop dead now

DAK

DAK

DAK

The noise that pierced the silence of the room was that of a pair of police boots. The person in the chair looked up weakly. In front of him was a lady officer, she was the CI of police. There was not even a look of pity on her face. Her name plate read manyata kapoor

M: so ramsingh, tell me the truth, who is behind that malhotra killings?

R: i'I ' don't know

M: you fool and then she slapped him hard he fell down from the chair. The next thing he knew was a boot on his neck, its force suffocating him. death came in front of his eyes

Finally he managed to tell.

R: u' ud'. Udayveer singh, he' he'is ' is behind malhotra killings

M:what? You mean the business icon udayveer

R:yes the very soon, I saw it with my own eyes, I swear

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"so he says it was udayveer " said the DGP of police to manyata

M: he may be bluffing too, just to tarnish a persons reputation

Dgp: no manyata udayveer has a tarnished reputation and he is not innocent as he seems. Many lives has been lost due to him If the words of people are to believed he is running a drug business and also some fake currency mafia too

That is why iam assigning you nail udayveer before law

M: but sir

Dgp: no buts you will investigate about it

M: but don't you feel that iam so young to handle such a case

Dgp: what nonsense your 27 years old . your old enough to handle this case

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Udayveer was at his newoffice. his old PA resigned last week.

He was looking for a new one

He was going through some applications when the name shreya struck him. rather I should say her age struck him. she was only 22 years old. A fresh post graduate student. Her face looked innocent and so lovely. He was attracted to her

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It was the interview at uday's office that created the confusion that day. There were a lot of people over there. Shreya too was there, there was a look of tension on her face

The receptionist came forward to call one person after another for the interview. The first person was shreya. Her heart raced hearing her name being called. She moved cautiously toward the room

Uday asked the receptionist to call shreya first as he had already appointed her the day he laid his eyes on her. The interview was just a formality

U: so ms shreya are you ready to work for the company

Uday asked as she entered into the room

S: sir?

U: yes your appointed. Your cv was very impressive

You can join office from tmrw

S: thank you sir

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It is manyata verses uday fight.

Manyata is to find all evidence against uday while uday enjoys his romance with his new PA shreya, who will be his new partner in crime

Will manyata bring uday in front of the supreme law

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So how was it?😕

Do you think I should continue it?

Do tell me what you feel please😃

If you like do hit the like button

Also do comment please and i did not send any pm's yet as i am not sure howmany of you want to follow this ss please do tell me if you want pms

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andy.a thumbnail
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Hi Andy 😊. Another SS from you - that's great! And u know what's even better ... THIS 1 IS GOING TO BE "HEAD-ACHE-LESS" ; because we already know that the killer is Uday😳.
I loved the starting ... the whole scene is in the interrogation room was superbly done! Very well written Andy 👏. U have a flair for writing such stories . I have a new name for you ... Desi Agatha Christie😉!!!
Update was:
Very eager to read more! Manyata's gathering of proof against Uday is going to be 1 heck of a roller-coaster! I'm so excited for this ride😃.
Continue soon Andy😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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character sketch

Udayveer singh: a famous and cunning business man.30 years of age, hansome and the heartthrob of girls. It is rumored that he has connections with the mafia

Manyata kapoor: a police CI . 27 years of age. she is to bring uday in front of the law . she is in charge of the investigation that has to collect evidence against uday

Shreya kunal: PA of uday. 22 years of age. She is a beautifull girl who just completed her postgraduation

Manu Sharma: an associate of uday

Surya kiran: the receptionist of uday, who becomes close friends with shreya

Jaggat sinha: a police officer and a good friend of manyata

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Wow andy nyc concept actually a diff one. Loved it cont soon nd do pm me
Edited by Jarin04 - 12 years ago
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Wonderful Concept Andy!!👏
i really liked the prologue😳!! wondering who will these to opposites get attracted to each other! so it's manyata Vs Udayy fight, who will win...or both will fall in love😳! its very interesting!
please update the next chapter soon!
i would be looking forward to the upcoming chapters! to know the story😃!
pm me when ever you update!!😛
Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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awesum concept... 👍🏼 ...nice character sketch... 👍🏼 ...lakin uday sach may killer ha... 😕 ...cont soon... 🤗
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

Wow andy nyc concept actually a diff one. Loved it cont soon nd do pm me


thanks jarin
will surely pm you
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Edited my comment on page 1😊
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such a different nd wonderful concept dea...!!
luvd it a lot..😃.
plz continue soon nd do pm me if possible...!!

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