new ss'THE GAME OF LIFE' chapter 4 pg 16

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huma

@huma12.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awsssmmm concept andyyy love ittt 👏 par tujay uday say kaya ENIMITY hai 🤔 EK ss main Mr SHARK or dusryy main DRUG DEALER 😲 but humaray liyeee EAST OR WEST UDAY IS THE BEST 😎 and love u yara love ur all ss to the core muuuaaahhh 🤗all the best 👍🏼 continuee soonnn 😛

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hey its a very diffrnt concpt and i like it😊😊 do cntinuee and pm me dear😊😊

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Great character Sketch Andy👍🏼. Jaggat being a cop , reminds me of an SS , i was planning on writing ... but that never materialised😔. I don't like Shreya😡. I know that it's too early to give a statement like that .. but , I REALLY DON"T LIKE HER😡😡😡!!! Don't keep her around too long😈! Oh Yeah ... almost forgot 😆 - comment edited on first page!

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@ITV_Loverr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very nice concept andy. Update soon.

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andy.a

@andy.a

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ...navina...
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edited :

Hi Andy 😊. Another SS from you - that's great! And u know what's even better ... THIS 1 IS GOING TO BE "HEAD-ACHE-LESS" ; because we already know that the killer is Uday😳.dony worry the heaache is on the way😆

I loved the starting ... the whole scene is in the interrogation room was superbly done! Very well written Andy 👏. U have a flair for writing such stories . I have a new name for you ... Desi Agatha Christie😉!!!my !!!! that is a very huge complement to me. thank you so much navi😳

Update was:

Very eager to read more! Manyata's gathering of proof against Uday is going to be 1 heck of a roller-coaster! I'm so excited for this ride😃.so am i. even i am looking forward to see how the story develops

Continue soon Andy😊.i will

navi that pic was sooo nice

😃 loved it sooo much😳

thank you so much navi

i will be there always to give you new new headaches😆

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Zina-
Wonderful Concept Andy!!👏
i really liked the prologue😳!! wondering who will these to opposites get attracted to each other! so it's manyata Vs Udayy fight, who will win...or both will fall in love😳! its very interesting!
please update the next chapter soon!
i would be looking forward to the upcoming chapters! to know the story😃!
pm me when ever you update!!😛

thank you so much zainab

opposites surely will attract

if they do not then i will nake them

love is a big question mark over here😕

dont know if they will ever fall in love

will sure pm you😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Roze12
awesum concept... 👍🏼 ...nice character sketch... 👍🏼 ...lakin uday sach may killer ha... 😕 ...cont soon... 🤗

thanks so much roze

yes uday is a don here😛

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: manisha98
such a different nd wonderful concept dea...!!
luvd it a lot..😃.

plz continue soon nd do pm me if possible...!!

thanks so much

will pm you😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm concept andyyy love ittt 👏 par tujay uday say kaya ENIMITY hai 🤔 EK ss main Mr SHARK or dusryy main DRUG DEALER 😲 but humaray liyeee EAST OR WEST UDAY IS THE BEST 😎 and love u yara love ur all ss to the core muuuaaahhh 🤗all the best 👍🏼 continuee soonnn 😛

thanks huma

i dont have any enimity against uday

he is even my hero

but only uday can potray these roles to perfection😃