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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Amazing start Andy, ch1 was excellent 👏.thanks so much navi😃😃 Poor Ramsingh ... talk about being trapped between a rock & a hard place😔 . One side , he has the police behind him ... on the other side , he will incur the wrath of Uday. But , i expected him to be killed in his jail cell.the police will only prosecute him but udat will kill him foe sure. so he ran away fearing his dear life U turned Uday into a Mafia-type of underworld don 😡 ... but I still find him so appealing😳. really you have a taste for bad guys first mr shark now this uday. only you will like them I could just imagine him in that suit & tie , with a revolver in his hand ... attaching the silencer to the gun and then pulling the trigger to finish off Mr Malhotra 😈. Awesome scene👍🏼. ah so you liked it 😳 happy about it Manyata & 2 other agents have been put on the case ... 1 is Jaggat , could the other 1 be Shreya 🤔?the second agent is rehman, i forgot to mention him in the update, will mention in the next update. shreya is udays pa Great update Andy , thanks so much navi😃😳 thanks for the Pm😊. your welcome

one more navi thanks so much for this comment
love you
andy

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

loved t
by the way ur concept is great
do pm me

thanks so much dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: milhan

ummm...so where shall i start??????

its a nyc start to a nyc story...thank you milhan😳
wow...uday a killer thats sumthng pretty interesting and i am damn sure that shreya is manyata...i wont be that sure, their ages are different
and well whose the other officer u forgot to mention that r u did that deliberately????????its rehman forgot to mention it. will do in the next chap
want more of it soon... in 2 weeks time
thnx for pmwelcome

thanks so much for this comment😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awsm😊
cntnue soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: harika04angel

awsm😊

cntnue soon!!!!


thank you so much dear
will update in 2 weeks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Chapter 2

" uday this is becoming too much. What do you see in that girl?" asked manu, his friend

U: come on manu. She is an angel. I really like her

M: or her body eh?

U: you are so wicked. (he smirks) Yes it is one of the reasons

M: the famous uday wants a girl when millions of girls are waiting for him daily and he does not have the courage to talk to her. There are many who are better looking than her

U: it's not like that. If I really want her then the next moment she will be in my bedroom. But everything has its own time. He winks

U: oh it's getting late

Saying this uday drove his car away

He soon reached the park where she always came daily to jog. He parked the car and looked out. There she was jogging. Always at the same time without delay, she was punctual. Her face had a genuine glow; she wore a sleeve less top and loose pants. The dress was not tight, nor did it look sexy. But she was comfortable in that dress. Uday loved the way her body swayed as she jogged away. There were tiny drops of sweat on her forehead that glistened in the morning sun. They were some on her neck and some on her hands. It made her angelic. She stopped and took her towel to rub the sweat on her body. She then folded the towel and placed it in her bag. Yes she was systematic in her life. She then stopped and talked to some kids over there, she was talking animatedly to them. There was a genuine glow in her eyes and he loved it. the way her lips moved drove him crazy

He remembered the first day he saw her. He was as usual driving on his way to his office, when he spotted a bright flower among a bunch of dried grasses. There she was jogging so carefree and innocent. He stopped his car to stare at this beauty. Not all would say she is a beauty. But to him she was the most beautiful craft of god. Since that day he came every morning to get a glimpse of her.

And one day she will be his. The others were just for an hour or two. Maybe this girl will last more time than that. Say for a week or so. But there was a time for everything. And as usual what uday wants comes to him. He never went behind anyone or anything. She will come one day to him.

The Fates always was on his side. He was a born winner and he will always win.

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Manyata reached her office and asked called jaggat and rehman to her office. Jaggat was around 29 and rehman was around 25. They were the 2 officers the DGP had send to assist her to trap udayveer

M: good morning guys. Today we three are going to start a new journey together. But this journey is not an easy one. The enemy in front is not any ordinary person. He is really powerful and smart. The master of crime- udayveer singh. The famous business magnet. Last day we captured a man who was burying mr malhotra's body. He did say the killer was udayveer and the next day he was found hanging in his cell. This can't be any coincidence. It was a planned murder. Even this place is full of spies. We do not know who is a friend and who is a foe. Total secrecy is needed in this case. We don't have any evidence against him and we really need evidence to pin him down

Now we three will split here. Rehman you wil infilterate uday's organization by finding a job there

R: yes I hear there is a post of driver over there. I will apply for it

M: and jaggat you are good in computers. Hack their systems

J: ok will start that soon

M: and rehman you are on paid leave for 3 months and jaggat you are talking 2 months sick leave. I can't leave the place as it will make the people around us suspicious. I will deal with the legal issues in the case. In the eyes of others I will be investigating a drug case.

But we will be meeting regularly. Is this clear

j/r: yes

m: the files in front of you contain some basic details of udayveer. Go through them it will give you an idea about the person we are dealing with. He is a extremely smart fellow who evaded law all these years. We have to collect all details soon a nd catch him. but this is a life and death game. Be really careful

this is the summary of uday's life

the only son of giriraj singh and naandini singh, age 30. His mother died when he was 6 and his father when he was 17. Since then he built his business empire single handedly.

He studied in the morning and manged office in the evening. Soon he developed contacts with the underworld. Drugs and black money started flowing through his hands. On the way to success he made many enemies. He eliminated all his enemies as he climbed the ladder of success. He does not forgive anyone and if a person does any mistake, he kills them. That's what happened to Ram singh. He failed his duty so he was killed. He does not spare anyone. So make sure you trap him before he finds that an investigation is going against him. or we may not return home in one piece

All of them soon left the place and wnt to do their respective duties

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Uday was resting in his office. His new PA shreya came in with a cup of coffee. She looked cute, but there was another reason why he took her. He smirked at her

S: sir your coffee

U: call me uday, shreya you have joined her for about 10 days. So how do you like this place? Any problems

S: no sir, I mean uday. It's really a lovely place to work. I really learnt a lot from here

Uday came towards her and told her seductively

U: if you want I can give you some private classes on some things you don't know

S: oh that would be lovely uday

U: then meet me here after office

She just smiled in reply

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It was 2 weeks since the investigation had officially began. Rehman joined the uday's company as his private driver. His new name was shahil. There he was a Bengali who did not speak English. Uday gave instructions to him in hindi

Jaggat successfully hacked into the company's computers. He had gone over there in disguise of a computer mechanic and managed the mischief. He was literally in front of his computer nowadays

Manyata used her time gathering all previous cases in which udayveer's name had appeared, but he had successfully escaped. She looked for all the loopholes in the cases which helped him to escape. she wanted a foolproof trap that would send uday to jail for ever. She would make sure that she got one

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Manyata was really tired after her work. She wanted to call her younger sister, samira, who had just completed her journalism degree and was employed in a local daily. Their parents died in a car accident when manyata was 20 and since then she was like a mother to her younger sister. Samira was her life.

It was 2 weeks since samira had called. Manyata dialed her number. The phone rang and after 2 rings samira picked the phone

S: ah!! Jiji how are you? You don't even remember that you have a sister alive

M: oh sami, you said the dialogue I wanted to ask you. How is your job going on

S: jiji, presently my only work is to edit the news. Its rather boring

M: don't go for any risky jobs. Is that clear

S: jiji you are the CI of police, and you can go behind all sort of risks and I should keep myself safe, comeon jiji its not fair

M: don't argue I have only you in this world. I know what the world is. But you . you leap in the well and then only begin to think whether it was right or wrong. Be a good girl ok. Jiji loves you

S: I love you too jiji. I think I may have some interesting news for you soon

M: what is it?

S: patience jijji. Everything has its own time. When the right time comes I will tell you

M: ok, but be safe

S: ( looking at her surroundings and smiled) yes jiji

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Rehman , jaggat and manyata was sitting in a park far from ordinary eyes giving their weekly analysis

R: and this one is the latest. It was udayveer and mohan Sharma and they were discussing about shipping 10 crore worth 500 litres of spirit into the state via the sampur district boundary

J: smpur? But why?

M: sampur is a place where there is minimum police checking. Only one or two police officers are there on duty. It would be easy to take the spirit into the state without much risk.

J: that's clever of him. When are they planning to ship the container?

R: on the 21'st in broad daylight

M: I agree that they have good guts, but I wont allow it to happen

J: how?

M: I and jaggat will be visiting sampur that day. Then we can catch that shipment. Let it be the first defeat to mr udayveer

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Promo

" hallo young lady. It would be good for you to mind your own business. This police job is not for ladies . for ladies there is always a better job.- to please a man in his bedroom"

" you"

" calm down darling. Don't make me meet you again "

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant update Andy👏. Really interesting. Manyata's investigation seems to be moving at quite a pace ... I like it😉.
So ... who is the girl Uday eyeing😕? I'd like for it to be Manyata , but I think it might be her sister!
Again .. I have to mention - I don't like Shreya😡. She sounds like an over-achieving "I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR MY BOSS" kind of girl.
Precap is excellent ... can't wait for it!
Do continue soon 😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
i think samira and shreya are same
and alover it was nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Nice chapter ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome andy... a new ss. I just came across it now.
And I am loving it. I must say you really have a knack 4
Suspence thrillers..detectives and killers... lol. U give us
A totally different concept of manveer in all ur stories and
It is awesome... loved it. Why is it no matter what uday does... find it so hard 2 not like him... lol... and I think manyata's little sister is the new pa that uday is keen on giving lessons after work and she being the journalist is trying 2 scoop dirt on him which might not go down very well when uday finds out... as 4 the lady that uday admires jogging.. think manyata... like he said what he wants he always gets... lol.. love it andy... great going and continue soon. muuaahh.

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