ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59] - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry zinu please start season 2 this story please i want manveer n manveer childss see moree😉😉
Edited by pari_vania - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserve for now ZAINAB 🤗BT DONT WORRY WILL UNRESERVE IT SOON. 😃

Hey ZAINAB !!!

GUESS !!!!! WHO IS IT ????

Its me !!!!!!🤗

See i m here to give my "SPECIAL GYAAN" on the last chap of this story😳

Oh sorry sorry, WHAT ???? 😲
u dont remember me ???😭 😭

well thn let me reintroduce you to myself. 😛

I m the same girl who had reserve ur post on 13th may with a promise to 'UNRESERVE' it soon 😃,
but still dint manage to edit it early till this day 😡 😡

i knw ur very very very very angry with me ZAINAB but trust me deary i was really preoccupied with some stuff..
I knw u must be thinking tht i m giving u some lame excuse but trust me zina swwetheart Sachchi i ws really busy.

Ab plz tum maan jao varna mai ro dungi haan vo bhi phoot phoot ke 😭 😭

Kya kha maan gayi,,,,,
haaye, thn come gimme a nice huggy.🤗 🤗

😉
Jokes apart, i m really sorry zainab fr replying this late.
Actually i read the last update the day u posted it but thn i thought tht i will comment on it tasalli se but thn really couldnt make it yaar.
so m sorry😛

Coming to the update, though i m really sad nd a bit angry tht u ended this story 😔

but thn it was completelly nd totally a "SURPRISING 😲 😲 yet 'BRILLIANT' end to this story. 👏 👏 👏 👏

I still cant beleive tht Right frm starting whn Uday met MANYTAS' lookalalike "PRIYA in his office after he returned to India",,, it was all his dream.😲.

i really took some time to digest tht all their meetings, the way he flirted her in his office, thn tht rape scene, their proposal, their trip to SOUTH AFRICA, the jungle scenes, was all in all just a dream sequence of Uday.

But tell me one thing Zainab Kya Uday, "MR KUMBHKARAN' se inspire ho gaya tha ki aisa soya aisa soya ki last update mei jaakar ankh kuli.😆

i knw u wanted to end this story on a happy note thats y u took such TWIST but trust me dear it was really an interesting and an amzing TWIST.👏 👏👏👏
kudo s to u fr tht.

thn last update it was a combo of DHAMAKEDAAR nd MASALE DAAR

The firdt half was really heart wrenching episode. Realising his mistake , Uday straightforwardl;y went to meet his PRINCESS nd after after facing such difficultied he finally gotta meet her.😳

The Scene wher he wake his SLEEPING PRINCESS with a Subtle kiss was really ROMANTIC😳 ND thn how Her "MAANG" got smeared with his blood was so so so


nd thn reading the other half update, i fell down onto the floor laughing hardly.🤣 🤣 🤣
i really loved it alot.The punches tht u had used in the second half were damn hilarious man. Too good 👍🏼😆

Specially all these -

- This Halkat Veda gave Me a whole cricket team. 🤣

- Chup krr ja meray baap. Hayye mein pagal ho jaon gi .Tu keu ro raha hai ab, ye tera bara bhai rota hai kafi nahi hai. 😆

-Awww, princess itne mein hi bus hogya. Bus kay bachay, ye truck hogya. She pointed towards her tummy.🤣 🤣

-AUR ye wala puch to ksam se mindblowing tha ji.

Ye jo itna sara condom cupboard mein rakha hua hai wo kiya bechne k liye hai.🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


the last one was AWWW.😛

And uday chuckled on his cricket theam & their coach.


So all in all it was rea;lly a dhamakeddar nd fabstastic update. I loved reading it alot thugh i m a bit sad tht u ende dit

nd ma'am btw who told u tht this story was "BORING' ??????

it was really an interseting nd intriguing story.👏😛


Loved it alot.❤️


Luv you ZAINAB

huggs 🤗

Saloni


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Posted: 12 years ago
heyy i am sorry i am so late,bt mera pc bigar gaya tha!!!! thaank uu fr giving it a happy ending,and thank god it was jst a drmmm!!!!! wooww suchh a fairy tale love storyy,hawww naughty udayy footbalteam banane ka irada hai shayad😉😉 awesomeee!!!!!!!!

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