ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59]

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

WHY DID U END IT ZINA.IT WAS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE 😭

comming to update first part was very emmotional.and last part very funny.

i am very surprised u wrote udays dream in 15 chapters.hats off to u.u r borne writer.beautifully writtern.

even though uday met wid such a terrible accident he limping and reach d hosipital.dat was so emotional.i loved d part where manyatas maang filled wid udays blood.

last part was hilarious zina.i was laughing wen manyata said cricket team about their children.

loved dis ss so much.

write more. 🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Hey Zainab , comment edited on pg59. THANX😊.

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

haha lol the ending id funny

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

oye hello it wasn't at all a boring ss zina dear...
I loved all of ur chapters...
loved them loads...
end of this story sad.
but I'm very happy to see man veer back together...
perfect ending...
loved it loads deary

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Jane

@Jane523

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

awesone dear...
just loved it...it was all a dream...

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pari vania

@pari_vania

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

OMG😛

AWSOME

U STILL AWSOME ZINA

1 CHAPTER

2 CHAPTER

3 CHAPTER

4 CHAPTER

5 CHAPTER

6 CHAPTER

7 CHAPTER

8 CHAPTER

9 CHAPTER

10 CHAPTER

Stylish Awesome Glitter

11 CHAPTER

Awesome Pic

12 CHAPTER

13 CHAPTER

14 CHAPTER

Everything On It, Extra Awesome

15 CHAPTER

Five Hearts With Awesome Colours

this time for my comment time i know u dont like my comment maine kuch likha nai sab pictures dedi but i really like this story trust me zainab n yaar ya pictures dhundhne mai hi buhot time laga han tu aisa na sochna maine acha comment nai diya ok n ab mai comment deti ho my write comment hope u like my comment sab chapters mai bad mai pare so sabka sath comment awsome chapters amazing mindblowing my body give me a shivers but u write still awsome n why u so ss is boring this ss is very very very very very awsome amzing rocking belive me it's awsome chapter 15 omaaa loved it lovely nice but i want to read more please but no worries very nice

n manyata sucide den uday go hospital n reporters question n n uday go manyata hospital room den start love scene n blood forehead scene was fabulouse flawles words nai han mere pass still rocking amazing awsome gorgeous

n den 4 years later

manveer 2 babies n 1 come half baby uday nauty haha but very nice awsome 3 childs😉

n den all babies crying hahaha

cricket team uday is very fast dear 4 years n 3 babies n abhi bhi mr. uday ko sex chaya ufff uska naam tu mr.sex rakhdena chaya hahah n den finally manveer kiss n baby cry 😡

vvvv
eee
rrr
yyy
niiiceceee...👏👏👏👏👏
i hope zina this is a big comment
n i think i complete my promise n i give a long comment
n ya comment ya mat sochna ke tumhare liya tha infacet apke liya tha n ur beautiful written n hands ke liya tha jisse itna beautiful likha
thank you
love ya

hugss
bubyeee...

love u manveer
miss u aloads

Edited by pari_vania - 12 years ago

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Awesome update😊
The ss was very interesting, it wasn't boring
Thank god it was just a night mare
Aww n the Uday ran for his princess was so sweet
This was one of my favourite ss's
Thanks for such an amazing ss, it was mind blowing
⭐️

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

FIRST THING WHY U CALLED IT BORING...😡 UPDT WAS BRILLIAT.. IIN STARTING I THOUGHT UDAY PSYCHO BAN GYA HAI...ND AFTER 4 YRS STORY WAS HILARIOUS...🤣 BECHARI MANAYATA ..UDAY TO EMRAN HASHMI KA BHI BAAP NIKLA...😆

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#439

hey nice update

the end was awsum

thanks for keeping the promise

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Res😊

edited :

Hi Zainab . Hello Navina😊

Brilliant end to a beautiful ss . Thanks a lot love😳 At no point in this story , did I ever feel it was boring . aww, that's your love deary😳 It was 1 of the most interesting stories that I read !! really, i am flattered😆 Well , all along I knew that Piya was not real ... and Manyata's soul was looking for closure .you are so intelligent 😆Lol, Nice graphic😃

After your last update , I was certain that Uday had dreamt the entire SS😆!!!!! And ... I was right . Wow, i would like to get some intelligence classes🤣

Now - to todays update ... it was superb👏! Thank you so much😛Uday's determination in getting to Manyata was . The way he stormed into her mansion and then racing to the hospital ; then the traffic ... of-course , not to forget how he got knocked by another car ... and then how he had to limp the rest of the way Hailla, ye Kitna funny budha hai, oye ye mera uday nahi hai, haha😆 to get to the hospital was sooo dreamy and filmy😉! OHH, i love films and such filmy scenes.

The kiss was so pure and romantic .Thank you 😃 I loved that Uday's blood fell into her maang 😳; and he made her his then and there😃! Yes!! i love that too. way too filmy😆

Lastly ... after 4 years ; Uday was a very busy guy there😉. Indeed😆 2 and a half kids already ...yeah🤣 MY MY , did he ever hear of family-planning😆? Actually No😉just kept on banging.☺️ Could just picture Manyata trying to control her kids ... poor girl🤣 this picture exactly matches to the scene😆 and her "over-enthusiastic" husband ! Woah, nice graphic lol😆🤣

Truly loved this update Zainab ❤️.
thank you soo soo Much🤗

Wish I could say : "UPDATE SOON" !!!!!!!
but you cannot😭 even i feel sad now😭

Thanks for the PM .

you are welcome😃

Bye now ... .
ba bye