ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Prerna

@Lovelydrops

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#461

Nice Update👍🏼...this ff was not boring...I loved it...It was unexpected😲...all was the dream of uday...great...last part was vry funny🤣...manyata with three children... 😛

Quote

Skaliya176

@Skaliya176

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Supperb ss thnks for makng it jst udays dream n giving it a happy endng it ws supperb

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

SUPERB END TO A BEAUTIFUL STORY ZAINUB.. IT WAS ANYTHING BUT BORING...

THANK YOU FOR LETTING IT ALL BE UDAYS DREAM.. PIYA BEING A FIGMENT OR RATHER CONSCIOUS OF MANYATA... AND HIM FINALLY AWAKENING HIS PRINCESS UP WITH A KISS..SUCH MEH EK FAIRYTALE ENDING.. THAT HAD A BEAUTIFUL SONG.. HUMOUR I MUST SAY UDAY CERTAINLY DOESNT WASTE ANYTIME 3 KIDS IN 4 YEARS👏😆...

ONE THING THAT STANDS OUT IN YOUR SS ZAINUB APART FROM HUMOUR THAT IS WAS THE CLOURFUL USE OF LANGUAGE... I LEARNT MANY NEW ONES HERE... 😆😉

THANK YOU.. AND WELL DONE TO THE UNKNOWN TRUTH...👏👏

HUGS..MUUUAAHHH🤗

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30
Hey Zainab hello Vibha😃
pata hai aap mujhse naraz ho der se comment karne ke liye im sorry for that no, not at all😳
anyways coming to the update..it was fabulous, wonderful, amazing and much more.. Thank you Vibha😳
Uday's journey to Hospital wow that was so nicely shown..bechara Uday, 😭nothing could stop him from going to meet his true love even i didn't had the power to do that😆
the last part where Manveer were with their babies, that was so sweet😛 thank you😃
loved the update..👏
Thanks for the PM you are welcome😛
take care n hugs🤗
(PS: why did you think it was boring? it was not boring at all dear😊) aww, thank you yar🤗

Thanks a lot for the Lovely comment🤗

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: serat
wowww
really good
end accha tha
really god

thank you😳

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: sanah12
Awesome update!
Loved it to the core!
Really sad that u ended it.
Thanks for the pm.

thank you dear🤗

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic
Awsome updaye zinu
🤣cricket team 🤣
Awsome end
Thanx for PM.

thanks sweta🤗

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa
Nice Update👍🏼...this ff was not boring...I loved it...It was unexpected😲...all was the dream of uday...great...last part was vry funny🤣...manyata with three children... 😛

Thanks a lot dear!!

thanks for liking it🤗

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: Skaliya176
Supperb ss thnks for makng it jst udays dream n giving it a happy endng it ws supperb

thanks a lot🤗

Quote

zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: Shahista01
SUPERB END TO A BEAUTIFUL STORY ZAINUB.. Thank you Shai😃 IT WAS ANYTHING BUT BORING...really😳

THANK YOU FOR LETTING IT ALL BE UDAYS DREAM..my pleasure😉 PIYA BEING A FIGMENT OR RATHER CONSCIOUS OF MANYATA yeah she was manyata's conscious... AND HIM FINALLY AWAKENING HIS PRINCESS UP WITH A KISS..SUCH MEH EK FAIRYTALE ENDING..Awww, i am flattered THAT HAD A BEAUTIFUL SONG.. HUMOUR I MUST SAY UDAY CERTAINLY DOESNT WASTE ANYTIME 3 KIDS IN 4 YEARS👏😆...Why waste time when you are mine😆

ONE THING THAT STANDS OUT IN YOUR SS ZAINUB APART FROM HUMOUR THAT IS WAS THE CLOURFUL USE OF LANGUAGE lol, thanks a lot😆... I LEARNT MANY NEW ONES HERE... 😆😉 really, i am glad you learnt something from me🤣

THANK YOU.. AND WELL DONE TO THE UNKNOWN TRUTH...👏👏

that's all your best wishes which got me till here😳

HUGS..MUUUAAHHH🤗
hugs and lots of love with kisses🤗