ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59] - Page 45

Originally posted by: beenish248

Awesome end

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm zainiii cricket teamm i mean 3 sorry anni is right 2 and a half baby in 4 year uday iss sooo fast

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Awww it always saddens me when i read last chapter... even i am feeling sad 😭but i hope you will start another ff very soon...amm will try😃

coming to the update it was really unexpected... i thought she might be a ghost or uday might be dreaming but the dream was i guess very very very long... just like some movie:p LOL, i know, actually it was not supposed to be this way, but i had to, to give it a happy ending. or else all the readers would have killed me😆

but i think you might have changed the ending for ur readers...exactly!! 😳they might have asked u to give happy ending...yes, its like that😛

but what i love the most was this specific line...

Tu keu ro raha hai ab, ye tera bara bhai rota hai kafi nahi hai

lol this line reminded me of hulchul movie where the elder brother uses this line when akshay catches him :P Lol, i cheated this line from there 🤣

loved this ff zina till now u did amazing job :) Thank you so much Sarah.🤗

Originally posted by: snowdream

wow great ending zina😊.Thank you Krishna😃.all those was a dream just a dream😳 yeah😆hunh u really fooled us and we were thinking what was all those😆 lol, it wasn't supposed to be that way, i had to change it because of my readers demand, otherwise it would have been a sad ending...anyways it was awesome zina 😊 Thank you...hope u comes up with a new FF soon i will think over that😆

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

WHY DID U END IT ZINA. i am so sorry dear, i had to😭 even i am feeling sad IT WAS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE 😭 awww, really😃 i am so sorry then. i still have one to complete😛

comming to update first part was very emmotional.and last part very funny.

i am very surprised u wrote udays dream in 15 chapters.hats off to u.u r borne writer.beautifully writtern.
Thanks a lot dear, i am not any professional😆 but just a writer by practice😉 but your words are more than a trophy to me.😳
even though uday met wid such a terrible accident he limping and reach d hospital. dat was so emotional.i loved d part where manyatas maang filled wid udays blood. me too, its way too filmy😆

last part was hilarious zina.i was laughing wen manyata said cricket team about their children.
lol, i just wanted my readers too laugh on the last part rather than crying or cursing me for a sad ending😆
loved dis ss so much.

Thank you so very much😳

write more. 🤗

Originally posted by: sehrish216

hehe aws0me end

Originally posted by: Asyalover

haha lol the ending id funny

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

oye hello it wasn't at all a boring ss zina dear...

Thanks a lot mahi😳
I loved all of ur chapters...

you r so sweet
loved them loads...

Thank you😃
end of this story sad.
but I'm very happy to see man veer back together...
perfect ending...

Lol, Thanks again😆
loved it loads deary

Originally posted by: Jane523

awesone dear...
just loved it...it was all a dream...

Originally posted by: pari_vania

OMG😛

AWSOME

Thanks a lot Pari🤗


U STILL AWSOME ZINA

Aww, thanks love😳




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this time for my comment time i know u dont like my comment, nooo i love it to the core of my heart 😛maine kuch likha nai sab pictures dedi to kiya hua, at least you gave me a huge comment ans pictures are more than words to me, its the but i really like this story trust me zainab i know, i can see your love in your lovely comment. n yaar ya pictures dhundhne mai hi buhot time laga han tu aisa na sochna maine acha comment nai diya nai sweety i am not thinking like that any way, its the far best comment i have ever received on my SS ok n ab mai comment deti ho my write comment hope u like my comment i love it soo very much sab chapters mai bad mai pare so sabka sath comment awsome chapters amazing mindblowing my body give me a shivers but u write still awsome n why u so ss is boring this ss is very very very very very awsome amzing rocking belive me it's awsome chapter 15 omaaa loved it lovely nice but i want to read more please but no worries very nice
Aww, so sweet of you, yar meko senti kr rahi hai😭, you are so sweet darling, i just love this comment of yours, Muaaah
n manyata sucide den uday go hospital n reporters question n n uday go manyata hospital room den start love scene n blood forehead scene was fabulouse flawles words nai han mere pass still rocking amazing awsome gorgeous

n den 4 years later

manveer 2 babies n 1 come half baby uday nauty haha but very nice awsome 3 childs😉

n den all babies crying hahaha

cricket team uday is very fast dear 4 years n 3 babies n abhi bhi mr. uday ko sex chaya ufff uska naam tu mr.sex rakhdena hahaha, lol after all he loves his princess a lot na😳chaya hahah n den finally manveer kiss n baby cry 😡
bachay par ghussa😆
vvvv
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niiiceceee...👏

👏👏👏👏

Thank yo soo soo soo sooo soo Much🤗
i hope zina this is a big comment

its the biggest comment.😳
n i think i complete my promise n i give a long comment

yes you did👏
n ya comment ya mat sochna ke tumhare liya tha infacet apke liya tha n ur beautiful written n hands ke liya tha jisse itna beautiful likha

My God, tu muje mil ja , i just wanna hug you the tightest and kiss your chubby cheeks, muah. you are just tooo sweet pari.
thank you
love ya

love you too❤️

hugss

huggies🤗
bubyeee...

bye

love u manveer
miss u aloads

i miss them too😭