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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

res keušŸ˜†
abi update nai kr rahi🤣


menei socha tum chappy update karogiii
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18


menei socha tum chappy update karogiii


lol, abi kr rahi hun 15 minsšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

All for encouraging me till the end!!
Love you all a lot
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scroll down for the last chapter.
Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter--15

The End

&

A New Start



The doctor left and after a while uday woke up all sweating. What happened uday beta? Asked a worried father. Dad! Dad you are fine, he was talking all nonsense. Dad I thought I had lost you after that accident. What are you talking about son? Which accident? And why would I leave you. O My God Princess''he got out of the bed in a hurry. Where are you going uday. Dad, My princess' she is in danger, she needs me, I have to go..

He made fast arrangements, he tried calling manyata's cell but it was switched off, that made him more scared, he was very restless and left to India with the first flight.

As soon as he reached India, he raced to devgarh palace. Manyata Manyata screaming on top of his voice, but no answer the palace was deserted, a servant tried telling him about them but in haste he did not pay heed to it and rushed to manyata's room.

On reaching the room he did not find her there, where are you princess he cried out, bad thoughts were coming to his mind. Was it all a Night mare? or it happened in real. Did she leave him forever. He was so busy thinking when a servant entered in and informed him about everyone.

He told him that everyone was in the hospital, because Yuvrani Manyata committed suicide and she is in critical condition. A night before yesterday this happened, she is still in hospital and the whole family is with her.

Why didn't you tell me before, barked uday. Sir' I tried to but you weren't listening. Okay go. Uday was baffled, she committed suicide and that's what he had seen. Was it all the TRUTH? God what's happening.

The servant had told him where the family was and he rushed to his car. he sat on the driving seat, pushed his head back, holding the staring. *sigh*

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi skte

Tere bina kiya wajood mera. (x2)

Little Manyata running behind a little uday & suddenly she falls down. Ignoring their tom & jerry fight he rushes to him & sees her crying, Picks her up and cleans the wound while crying himself.

Tuj say juda agr ho jaen gay to

Khud say hi ho jaen gay juda.

Uday got to know that how much he loved Manyata, but he was blinded by the luxuries to see it.

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho


He started the car, it was heavily raining and he couldn't see anything already his eyes were puffy due to tears.

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

he remembered when he was leaving to forever and Manyata was looking at him with teary eyes. He was too young to understand her and his love.

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera


And the Dream he had, it seemd like he lived those moments with Piya or we could say Manyata. The way she swears at him, and makes childish faces, irritates him to death and shows him the reality of life.

He wanted to kill himself for making fun of manyata's love on the phone. Now things were getting clear to him. What he did with manyata, happened with him. But the DREAM was still a Question mark?

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

The rain was pouring harder and harder. And the traffic was jammed he was getting late and had no other choice rather tyhan going by foot.
he left the car in the traffic and started to run in the rain. The rain had blinded his eyes he couldn't see any thing and while running, he stepped in front of a moving car. The care hit him and he flew in the air landed on another car and rolled down on the road. His nose, head , arms every part was bleeding but he managed to get up and ran with a injured led. It was hurting him a lot but he did not care after the pain he had given to Manyata his pain was nothing.

Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Limping he finally reached his destination. The hospital was surrounded by reporters, everyone was keen to know what had happened to Yuvrani. After seeing a limping uday they all ran to him. Doctors and nurses gathered and helped him, the reporters were asking him non-stop questions and he wasn't in a condition to answer.

Reporter: Yuvraaj sa" what has happened to Yuvrani & you, weren't you in London? Is it some sort of a combined accident. How did you came to India?

Uday got some courage to answer the questions.

Uday: Its is said if one is in true love and one of the partner gets hurt, the gets or feels it to. And yes I was in London, but came hear to Wake Up My "Sleeping Beauty" . he answered with the royal pride. And shut the reporters mouth.

He walked past the doctors, nurses and reporters who were staring at him. He saw Manyata's family standing there, ignoring all, he opened the door of the room where she was lying unconscious.

The doctors who were inside looking at him left the room and the Prince and his Princess alone. He sat beside her, leaned in and kissed his Sleeping Beauty gently. With the gentle touch of his lips on hers, her eyes opened slightly and then fully. He felt something drop in her forehead, when she touched her forehead, she found her maang adorned with his blood, which was dripping from his fore head.

Leaving her lips he looked at her, deep into her eyes.

Forget everything what happened, forget the past & look at me, its just You and Me. Us forever. Look at your prince who woke you up with loves first Kiss, who says fairy tales cannot be true. See I made our own Fairy tale. A tale of Love. A tale of emotions, a tale of Us together forever & always. You were mine, you are mine and you will be mine and only mine.


Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho.

"Authors Note"

What ever happened till now was a just a Dream of uday, this all happened after Manyata had called him and he had made fun of her.

They got a second chance in love.

I cannot explain more than that, but if still confused PM me.

--4 Years Later--

Manyata was shouting at her babies. She was holding ones hand who was 3 years old boy and one she was holding who was a 1 year old boy and the third one was yet to come who was in her and she was 6 months pregnant.

Shut up sushant, she scolded her 3 year old baby.

God!!! This Halkat Veda gave Me a whole cricket team.

Chup krr ja meray baap. Hayye mein pagal ho jaon gi.

Tu keu ro raha hai ab, ye tera bara bhai rota hai kafi nahi hai. She scolded the other 1 year old boy Arav.

Arey Princess keu meray bachoon ko dant rahi ho.

He took both of them in his arms and pacified them.

Uff, uday No more babies. You gave me 3 babies just in 4 years.

Awww, princess itne mein hi bus hogya.

Bus kay bachay, ye truck hogya. She pointed towards her tummy.

Lol, you are so funny love. Truck!! Haha.

Tujhe bohat hasi a rahi hai na, sambhalna to muje parta hai. Ek ko chup krao to dusra rota hai. Uff Uff Uff.

Okay okay no more babies. But we'll still have sex.

Uurrgghh. And I will kill you if you don't use protection next time. Ye jo itna sara condom cupboard mein rakha hua hai wo kiya bechne k liye hai.

No Princess, wo actually last time I forgot to use it, in a hurry.

And before that? Han iski dafa, she pointed towards Arav.

Ohh' ya tab bhi. He grinned and leaned in to kiss her.

But

But

But

Oaainnn"""" the little one cried. Dekha ab hat yahan sey.

A rahi hun meray Baap chup kr ja. She murmured continuously.

And uday chuckled on his cricket theam & their coach.

*~*THE END*~*

Pheewww,,,, Finally Finally I have ended this Boring SS.

Firstly, I want to thank all the members who liked and commented throughout.

I had never thought to complete it any way.

Okay now being a bit serious. I want each and every person who reads it. Silent or active to LIKE and COMMENT for the last time.

Please please please.

Well it was supposed to be a sad ending but on the request of many people and my promise I had to turn the whole story.

So if still any kind of confusion contact me for that.

So please like and comment for the last time.

& I don't want those one line comments, if any one cannot give a comment more than a line, its better if u don't comment, because I have always given the largest and the most colorful comments to every one on their stories.

and i don't want any RES😔 here.

Thanks for reading

With Love

--Zinay--

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Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yah first to comment
that was just awesome
thank god it was just a dream
awn uday did so much to reach his princess
indeed the first kiss of love bought his princess
aha the naugthy father
already got his wife overloaded with two and a half kids in four year
it was nto boring
instead it was one of my fav ss
thank you for giving it a happy ending
thanks for the pm
Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res😊
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Hi Zainab .
Brilliant end to a beautiful ss . At no point in this story , did I ever feel it was boring . It was 1 of the most interesting stories that I read !! Well , all along I knew that Piya was not real ... and Manyata's soul was looking for closure .
After your last update , I was certain that Uday had dreamt the entire SSšŸ˜†!!!!! And ... I was right .
Now - to todays update ... it was superbšŸ‘! Uday's determination in getting to Manyata was . The way he stormed into her mansion and then racing to the hospital ; then the traffic ... of-course , not to forget how he got knocked by another car ... and then how he had to limp the rest of the way to get to the hospital was sooo dreamy and filmyšŸ˜‰!
The kiss was so pure and romantic . I loved that Uday's blood fell into her maang 😳; and he made her his then and there😃!
Lastly ... after 4 years ; Uday was a very busy guy therešŸ˜‰. 2 and a half kids already ... MY MY , did he ever hear of family-planningšŸ˜†? Could just picture Manyata trying to control her kids ... and her "over-enthusiastic" husband !
Truly loved this update Zainab ā¤ļø.
Wish I could say : "UPDATE SOON" !!!!!!!
Thanks for the PM .
Bye now ... .
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm zainiii cricket teamm i mean 3 sorry anni is right 2 and a half baby in 4 year uday iss sooo fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww it always saddens me when i read last chapter... but i hope you will start another ff very soon...
coming to the update it was really unexpected... i thought she might be a ghost or uday might be dreaming but the dream was i guess very very very long... just like some movie:p
but i think you might have changed the ending for ur readers... they might have asked u to give happy ending...
but what i love the most was this specific line...
Tu keu ro raha hai ab, ye tera bara bhai rota hai kafi nahi hai
lol this line reminded me of hulchul movie where the elder brother uses this line when akshay catches him :P
loved this ff zina till now u did amazing job :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18

yah first to comment
that was just awesome

Thank you so much Anni😃
thank god it was just a dream
i changed my mind after a lot of persuading😳
awn uday did so much to reach his princess
he had to after all, he had hurt her a lot
indeed the first kiss of love bought his princess
yipee, i thiught to copy Sleeping beautyšŸ˜†
aha the naugthy father
already got his wife overloaded with two and a half kids in four year
yeah, i wanted to make the last part funny😳
it was nto boring
aww, thanks😊
instead it was one of my fav ss
really anni. love ya. muahšŸ¤—
thank you for giving it a happy ending
you Are most welcome😃
thanks for the pm
its okay😊


Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment anni, you really made me happy.šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great ending zina😊..all those was a dream just a dream😳 hunh u really fooled us and we were thinking what was all thosešŸ˜†...anyways it was awesome zina 😊 ...hope u comes up with a new FF soon

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