SS| Redemption| chap 2; page 8 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

I am incredibly impressed! One the start is fantastic- I am completely pulled in. Two you wrote this on your phone? I am pretty skilled with my phone, but I could have never done that!!! Kudos! I hope you continue this soon!

Awww! 😳 It was just a case of inspiration threatening to flood the room. It wasn't my PC time so mobile was the only option for me 😆 I am so happy you liked it...though it's only half of then intended length.

In Sha Allah will continue/finish SOON!! 😃

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

it was awesome...brilliant...amazing...

👏👏👏

i loved it...loved it to the core...omg...amazing writing...i can feel their pain...super awesome...👏

Awww! You are too sweet! Itna bhi acha nahin tha 😆

Glad that you liked it and could connect to it! 😳 Thank you!! 😊

This was AWESOME Mais 👏
Loved it to the core. I so want Uday to say all this to Manyata in the show too. But that idiot is such a lovesick puppy at the moment. It frustrates me --___--
Anyway great job Mais. Would be waiting for the next part. Eagerly 😊

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Awesomeee...I wish same Scene happens in real DEK to dumb Manyata...very well written...specially bcaz written on PHONE...I couldn't think of that...thanks for such a nice ss...please update soon... 👏 👏 👏

Hahaha, dunno when or IF it will happen to Manyata in show hence trying to twist things in my own way. This phone thingy is really getting me a lot of praise 😆 But enjoying it since people liked my efforts, it hurt a lot while typing on the phone 😭 😉

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: sim1623

Wow! That was amazing! It actually hurt ME when he said those words! Loved it! Please update soon :)

Simran :D...

Awww! No! I didn't want it to hurt anyone in real life 😆 But as they say, words can be a pretty harmful weapon if used wisely. UV did that 😃 Sach karwa hi hota hai! 😉

Originally posted by: AKlover101

AMAZING START!! I LOVED IT!! Plzz continue soon n plzzz pm me when u update:D

Thank you! I am sorry, I won't be PMing anyone

Originally posted by: namrocksss

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: princessnia

Awesome start.loved it.cont soon n pm me if u can.

Thank you dear! I am sorry, I won't be PMing anyone. Check it out after 3 days for updates 😆

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

Brilliant job...omg it was sooo good...I just read the whole update without blinking my eyes once...awesome...loved it to the core of my heart...the start was flawless...plzzz update soon and pm me as soon as u update...!!!

Oh wow! I am glad you enjoyed it that much! Yups...the update is on the way! I am sorry but I won't be PMing anyone. It's a tiresome job for someone as lazy as me Please keep on checking the thread for updates 😊

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: Khawaunju

heyy loved it i wonder wat M wil do nw?

Wait and watch! 😉 Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: fia21

This was AWESOME Mais 👏
Loved it to the core. I so want Uday to say all this to Manyata in the show too. But that idiot is such a lovesick puppy at the moment. It frustrates me --___--
Anyway great job Mais. Would be waiting for the next part. Eagerly 😊

Hahaha! Fia! Even I am dieing to watch UV say something like this to Manyata...per karta hi nahin! 😭 Khair chaddo! If not in the show, I can make him say things in my imagination 😈

Thank you! Next part will be updated shortly! 😳

its freaking awesome mias...

Originally posted by: -Mais-

Hahaha! Fia! Even I am dieing to watch UV say something like this to Manyata...per karta hi nahin! 😭 Khair chaddo! If not in the show, I can make him say things in my imagination 😈

Thank you! Next part will be updated shortly! 😳

Hahaha. Exactly chaddo. We can fulfill our wishes through your SS 😉
That just makes me wonder, you guys that write SS/FF/OS's on IF are not even professional or anything and yet we have such brilliant writers and stories here. Why the hell can't the writers of DEK manage to come up with such ideas? 😕 . Shouldn't be that hard. Ughh.
Now your SS is my burhapay ka sahara Mais. Don't let me down 😉
Okay, will be waiting for the next part palkain bicha ker 😍