SS| Redemption| chap 2; page 8 - Page 4

That was really brilliant! Very well written! loved it 👍🏼

You almost cried?? I did!!! Ack! I totally started tearing up and had to snap myself out of it! That was so wonderful! Her pain is amazingly well written! I love all this angst! Please continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: princessnia

Omg i m speachless.brilliant yaar.so touchy n nice update Mais.Cont soon.egarly waiting for the next update.

Thank you! Hopefully the next update will be soon 😆

Originally posted by: Shals9

That was really brilliant! Very well written! loved it 👍🏼

Wish we could have even half of it in the show! there Manyata never realizes and UDay never makes her realize.. phew!! When we will get to see what we want!!

Loved it! Pls udpate soon

Allah jane whether it will happen in the show or not 😆 Oh anyway! I am glad at least you enjoyed it in my terrible attempt at emotions :P Thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

You almost cried?? I did!!! Ack! I totally started tearing up and had to snap myself out of it! That was so wonderful! Her pain is amazingly well written! I love all this angst! Please continue soon!!!

I would've cried if my brother was sitting on the bed at a four feet distance beside me. You know, this is the first time I completely got drowned in the character so I was a little shocked afterwards. Nonetheless, I still feel heart broken over what I wrote 😭

Happy that you liked it! Thank you! 😳

mais u were so brilliant yaar

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

mais u were so brilliant yaar

i just shivered on reading this

this almost made me😭😭😭

awww! It wasnt that good :p thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

very nice..😊

thank you! :D

Originally posted by: nityah

its freaking awesome mias...

beautifully written...

i have always wished that something like this should happen in dek...where Uday would show Manyata what she actually does and behave with him...

please continue soon...

yups! Even i wish for something like this to happen in the show. Thank you for liking and commenting! Replying u so late, sorry for that! The next part is up :p

oh mais,u know i was crying?i could feel her emotion,her pain,her realization.u r amazing.keep writing.luv u.

Only one word...Excellent!!!!how perfectly u discribe manyata's heart wrecking thoughts...but please update soon dear just curious to find what's coming next... 👏 👏 👏