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Poulomi Das

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

yeah yeah i jnow u are a saddist... damn it woman why do.u.write so good? ur words have such an after effect on people... i mean one just cant forget... or keep their mind off it.. it makes u lust for the next chapter.

I BLAME YOU! :/

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: poulomi12
yeah yeah i jnow u are a saddist... damn it woman why do.u.write so good? ur words have such an after effect on people... i mean one just cant forget... or keep their mind off it.. it makes u lust for the next chapter.

I BLAME YOU! :/

How am I a saddist?! 😲 You don't comment! YOU SUCK!! And I don't write that well :P Bus tu makhan hi maar! Don't blame me! Blame your poor heart! 😆

Originally posted by: Khawaunju
continue soon plz😊

will do. Thank you!

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@wendy25

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

ITS DAMN AWESOME!!!
Love this part. You really portray emotions very well through words. I literally felt so bad for manyata. She is so broken. Eagerly waiting for ManVeer's next meeting. Please please update ASAP!
can't wait!

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BlueRobbin

@BlueRobbin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

WOW!!!!!!!!😲

i really can't find the words!!!!!!!!!!🤔 It was sooo, not wait~~TOO brilliant~⭐️👏!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was that good!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sigh🤔, i keep thinking about ur SS!!!!!!!!!🤓👍🏼

can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

thnx!!!!!!!!😉 luv ya!!!!!!!!!!🤗

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

WOW!! loved all the chaps they r amazing awesome writing ur a brilliant writer👏 u hve described manyata feelings so well one can feel her pain wanna see manyata go thru sch realization in show too.. loved uday and manyata confrontation in chap1.2 u hve written it perfectly i wish same would had happened in show uday would had said that... ur SS is fab loved it to core update soon cant wait for nxt update... update soon plz