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Tannu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

oye hoye!!

awesome,fantastic...aur words mill nahi rahein hai abhi..

u r superb!!

i really felt the pain while reading this..

cont soon

hawtie sauty :D

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DEK_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

brilliant yaar!!!!!i sooo wish it happens in the show!!!

no.go to hell show!!! m having an amzing manveerilicious time here...loved it!😃

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sourmisery

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: a.anu
oh mais,u know i was crying?i could feel her emotion,her pain,her realization.u r amazing.keep writing.luv u.

I read it over and I started crying so I can't say anything if someone cried 😭 Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: Amibaiju
Only one word...Excellent!!!!how perfectly u discribe manyata's heart wrecking thoughts...but please update soon dear just curious to find what's coming next... 👏 👏 👏

Hopefully will update soon once I figure out how to shape things 😆 Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: angelina_angel
good one

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: -Tannu-
oye hoye!!
awesome,fantastic...aur words mill nahi rahein hai abhi..

u r superb!!

i really felt the pain while reading this..

cont soon

hawtie sauty :D

Awww!! Admin Sauty!!! 😳 Are you stalking me? 😆 Chal koi nahin! Thanks for reading and liking! 😳

Originally posted by: DEK_girl
brilliant yaar!!!!!i sooo wish it happens in the show!!!
no.go to hell show!!! m having an amzing manveerilicious time here...loved it!😃

AWWW!!!!!!! 🤗 You made me smile! 😃 Arey no yaar...I so want something better to happen in the show. See, still hoping for it 😭 😆 Thanks for reading and this wonderful comment! 😳

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Loved the update Mais!!! Can't wait to read the next part so do continue soon!!:)

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

oh wow!

loved this to the core..i really reallyyy want uday to say things like this in the show!

waiting to see how manyata proves herself worthy of uday now..

continue soon!

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Simran234

@Simran234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

That was heartbreaking and oh so sad! I really wanna see what she does to get Uday back!

loved it!

Simran :D...

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BlueRobbin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was sad, i had a lump in my throat as well!!!!!!!!!!!😭😉

a superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉

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Nityah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

wow...just one word outstanding...

you made me cry...

brilliantly written chapter...

you have penned down the emotions so amazingly...

really a amazing piece of writing...

continue soon...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

i'am in love with this short story..it is too good...please update soon..😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 13 years ago

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ilvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

you noe u brought tears to my eyes i literally finished a tissue box...but nontheless u deserve this ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️...i vld hv made it bigger if i cld...awesomee...plz upd8 fast

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