ManVeer Short Scenes - *Short Update - page 25**

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Gosh! Can anyone be as bored as me!? 🥱 So, rather than writing a complete OS, I decided to write some short scenes of them. They have been jumping around in my head like little bunnies for a couple of days but the background of each one keeps on changing a lot. I felt like if I were to write an OS on them, I would break my fingers. They get really numb in winter times...so hard to type 😭 Yeah! So I have done similar kind of writing style before but those were only one sentence fictions and they were based on some prompts. But that was way back in 2009 I think...doubt if I still have that touch in me (total Uday wala "touch" 😍) This is just the slightly extended version of that style. Bear with me, I don't have much expectations from the result of these anyways 😆 They jump from genre to genre...anyways! Here goes! Also, I might turn this thread into my permanent thread for OSs 🤔 Doubt it though...okay! enough with the rambling!!!

1.

Peace. That was the only thing she craved more than anything. Some peace and some time alone for herself. All this going from one place to another, taking lessons to be a proper princess, working on having better relationship with her family; it was really tiring. Her usually bursting energy sometimes refused to help her get along with the business. At those times, she would sneak away from the watchful eyes of the elders and steal some moments from the quiet.

"Hey Princess..."

And at those times, his voice would break the invisible barriers of quiet and she would look back to see him leaning against the wall, his signature smirk plastered on his lips and his eyes glittering with mischief.

Then, she would sigh. And she'd shout at him, blame him, curse him; she'd rip off that princess skin off from herself and be the wild cat that she used to be. And he'd smile and take in everything without saying anything in return.

Because it was the she that he was so interested in and it was the he that she got so annoyed at. And just like that, they were perfect in the most imperfect way.


2.

"Hello Prin-"

"Where are you?! Aap jaante hain hum kitni dair se wait kar rahe hain apka?!"

"Oho! Princess, aap tou janti hain ke hum ek presentation ki tayari kar ra-"

"Hum kuch nahin jante Yuvraj Udayveer! Aadhe ghante mein aap ko mahal pohanch jana hai warna hum apse kabhi baat nahin karenge!"

"Really? Is that a threat that I am hearing Princess Manyata of Devgarh?"

"No, it's a fact that the future queen of Jaigarh is telling to the future king of Jaigarh!"

"In that case, hum 15 minute mein pohanch jaenge!"

"Ab itni bhi jaldi karne ki zaroorat nahin...sambhal ke ayiye ga. Hum kahin ja thori rahe hain..."

"Aur koi hukum?"

"Hmmm...nahin. Bus, aap ajaen."

"Ok! See you soon."

"Suno!"

"Jee?"

"..."

"Me too."

"Kya?"

"Jo aap ne kaha."

"Per hum ne tou kuch nahin kaha?"

"Lekin hum ne tou sab sun liya."

"Uff! Aap se jeetna hamare bus ki baat nahin! Bye!"

3.

He never lost. Simply because he had never learned to. The instinct to win came to him as easy as oxygen. He knew how to twist events to make them work in his favor. And as long as they were, he couldn't care less for those who were hurt due to it.

So, when he saw her crouched in some corner of the palace, crying like a lost child, he felt nothing but pity for her. Pity because she had decided to go against him. Pity because no matter how much she tried, she could never win against him. Pity because she still used her heart rather than her brain.

And amidst that pity, a tiny feeling of hurt breathed. Hurt because he had readily accepted her and she had readily rejected him, again and again. But even within it, no tender feeling existed. The feeling that would urge him to change for her and make her accept him. For change meant like losing to him...

...and he hadn't learned to lose.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX


1-3 - page 1
4-6 - page 2
7-8 (special sadist version) - page 3
9-10 - page 6
11-12 - page 8
1-2 (dhamakha version) - page 10
13-15 - page 12
16-19 - page 14
20-23 - page 18
24 - page 21
25-27 - page 23
28 - page 25
Edited by -Mais- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute scenes
especially the 2nd one " the future queen of Jaigarh is telling to the future king of Jaigarh!"
awww 😍
wish they some day use this dialogue in the serial
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved all 3 scenes :)
"Because it was the she that he was so interested in and it was the he that she got so annoyed at. And just like that, they were perfect in the most imperfect way. "
This line, especially, was so apt. It explains ManVeer's equation perfectly :)
looking forward to more short scenes!!
Edited by prc_fan1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
awww it was so cute i specially liked 2nd scne
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it man!
no words!
so much like Mianh-Biwi!

When are these tracks actually going to kick start in DEK?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved awl d scenes..❤️
Buh mY fav one is scend one..
So cute..😍
Veru Well Writtn..👏
Superb...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the replies everyone! Will write a few more of them tonight and for a change, some might not be on ManVeer. Lolz, don't kill me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 was just 😍 😍😳.

Keep updating!!

TC.
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4.

She was no Cinderella. And he was no Prince Charming. And it was alright; because then no clock struck 12, no magic ended and they danced the night away...

...or as long as the dream lasted.

5.

She loved to talk and he loved to order around. This was their only similarity but still, at some times he would just put his head in her lap and she would gently stroke his hair. And like that, no words would be said yet, conversations worth of centuries would be heard.

6.

"Ice-cream..."

She stopped abruptly in front of a shop, her eyes reflecting the brilliant lights of the shop. He looked back and raised his eyebrows and mouthed the word, "No".

"Sirf ek ice-cream! Please!!" She folded her hands and putting on her mostly pitiful expression, she begged him.

"No Princess, no ice-cream. Now walk." He walked towards her and grabbed her wrist to tug her forward but her feet seemed to be glued.

"Uday..! Ek ice-cream ki keemat tum kya jano!!" She said dramatically as he continued to pull her with him. She kept looking back at the inviting shop as she tried to struggled to free herself from his grip.

"Raat ke 1.30 baje, January ki ais thandi raat mein apko konsi ice-cream khani hai?" He asked as he tightened his hold on her wrist.

"Chocolate..." she pouted as she mentally drifted on to some fantasy land filled with ice-cream.

"No."

"Please!!"

"No."

"Please Uday!! PLEASE!!"

"I said no!"

"Ek ice-cream ka hi tou keh rahi hun...tum kyun it-"

"Ssshhh!"

Just like that, he silenced her with one final look. The pout turned into a frown and she stomped her feet as she continued to walk with him, away from the shop. His hand that was gripping her wrist, gently shifted to hold her hand and she continued to follow him like a little child.

"I hate you, tum jante ho na ye?" she frowned.

"Yes, I do. Aur kuch?" He smiled at her as her free hand held his jacket by the arm. And she walked beside him, on that cold January night in some corner of the world.

Edited by -Mais- - 13 years ago

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