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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nityah.oberoi

Aww...just loved them...❤️
again...great work dear...👏
First one cutely romantic...
Uday helped her wit her sandal strap...that was adorable...
and second one is sooo chweeet...
the way Manyata shut his mouth was again so cute...
looking forward for more like these...



Awww!! Thank you so much! Funnily enough even I loved these scenes 😛

Originally posted by: jasmaan

awww dat waz sooo cute and adorable❤️



Originally posted by: salekh1

😉Lovely updates..

It was soo cute
PLEASE WRITE more..! 😛



Originally posted by: rsk16

amazing update.loved it.



Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the updates those were so cute Mais!



Originally posted by: ..Ananya-kmh..

This was sooo cute :) :) :) Awwwiiee...Loved these scenes to the core :) :) Continue writing soon :) :)



Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

damn damn damn cute...wow!!!!!i have a huge smile plastered on my face😃



Originally posted by: pri01

Fabulous OS ...the last line of OS 10 by Komal just make me 😆 yeh kambakt ishq cheeze hi aisi hain



Thank you so much guys!! 😳 Your feedback and comments, like I always say, mean a LOT to me!! Inshallah will update soon! 😳

Originally posted by: Manahil192

Intoxicating- breathless-Speechless- LOvely- Beautiful- These words JUst Merely describe Your Scenes LOve them and PM me too!



awww! Thanks!! Will do so dear, please like the Index list on page 1...makes things MUCH MORE easier for me! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

since when did uday start eating oranges? 😲 going into 100 best ending lines ever.😍🤣 seriously, i think sony TV should make you the CV for their 'kahaani main twist' episodes 😎 trp's badh jaayenge, and no pakaash.🥱

so effing cute!!😳 update fast haan!😡 i'm getting addicted to your one shots now. 😳

megz.😳



Awww! Megzzz!!! I'm not that good to be a CV 😆 I'm so happy you are addicted to them 😛 It pleases the silly girl in me 😆 Wish I could permanently throw Pakaash out dude... Anyway! Thanks a lot for your SO SWEET comment! Means a lot! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
OMG!!!
Superb scenes...
Read it so many tymex😆
Hope dey will show smthing lyk dis in Future..
Keep Writing..👍🏼
LUV Whateva u write..❤️
Thanx 4 d PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
UDAY KO KABSE ORANGES PASAND ANE LAGE besttt line i really loved it do write m0re
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Very beautiful scenes Mais👏 Very believable and true to the onscreen characters. Do write more please (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56


11.

Being with her, he had learned to expect a lot of unexpected things. Each time she did something he thought this couldn't get anymore surprising. But every time, she proved him wrong.

Like now.

He was just going in the hall, walking innocently just to greet Dadi Saab and rest of the family when a soft hand wrapped around his arm and pulled him backwards. The grip of the hand wasn't that strong but because he wasn't expecting it, his whole body moved backwards and he almost tripped. Well, he would've if his back hadn't hit a small body.

"Hayye! Meri naak!"

The muffled voice came from behind him leaving him confused but before he could say or do anything, the voice broke into a laughter.

"Princess, aap...?"

He could barely complete his sentence when that small laugh started to increase its volume. More than confusion, worry started appearing on his face. He made to turn around to see if she was alright but she held him still from behind by grabbing his arm.

"Chup! Khare raho!" She said in between her laughter. Being the taller one, he had the advantage to move his head backwards and see her. And what he saw worried him like nothing else.

Her face was bowed, her open hair shielding her face. Her body seemed to be shaking from laughter. Taking his chance, he turned around and tilted his head to take a good look at her. He touched her arm and at his touch, she looked up.

She was laughing, silently. Tears were streaming down from her face. She was biting her lower lip to stop herself from laughing but in vain. The laughter seemed unstoppable.

"What's so funny?" He asked just to give her company but it was the wrong question. At his question, her silent laughter erupted and a loud voice of laughter escaped her mouth which she stifled with her hand.

"Mat...poo..cho..." She was talking with difficulty and he was smiling at her childish behavior. With one hand on her mouth, she put another hand on her stomach. It had started to ache.

"Rajkumarian aise nahin hansti. Daadi Saab ne aapko mana kiya hai na." He tried reminding her to stop her laughter but no use. She was still laughing.

And that's when it clicked in his mind as to why she had pulled him back. Sighing, he shook his head and smiled. He moved closer to her and wrapped his arms around her small body, hiding her face completely in his well-built one. On some other day, she would've pushed him back and call him by some colorful words but not today. Because she had intended to use him to cover her up until she stopped laughing.

And she did! Hiding her face in his chest, she laughed like a carefree child at some joke which he didn't know. And he stood there, shielding her from the judgmental eyes of the world. He was a Prince but for her, he'd always remain a Knight...in dashing designer suits.

12.

They were a very funny pair.

To them, everything was like war. Always, they were in some kind of never ending competition where one had to win from the other.

Like right now. All this running around the garden, the taunts, the bickering was being done only for one bar of chocolate.

"Ye hamara hai! Daadi Saab hamare liye layi hain!"

"Nahin! Daadi Saab hamare liye layi hain! Humein do ye!!"

"Udayveer!"

"Manyata!"


Well, they were just kids; royals or not. And like all the other kids, their fights had a loser and a winner. Sometimes the younger girl won and sometimes the older boy won. But unlike other kids, the end of the fights was unique.

Like now, she stood with her head held high and the chocolate in her hand. And at a few feet from her, he stood there sulking. She struck out her tongue at him and opened the chocolate. Silently, she offered him the chocolate and in equal silence, he refused and turned around to let her enjoy her chocolate in solitude.

"Tom & Jerry dekhen?"

She walked up to him after few moments and offered him. This time he accepted, his anger at his lose forgotten because being a royal he knew when to let go. Just like that together they ran inside to spend their time together doing another activity.

Both of them were aware of the uneaten chocolate bar hidden in the grass and both of them didn't say a word about it. Because they both knew, if they aren't in it together, then it doesn't exist. Be it anything; the fight, the victory or the reward.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Gaaah! Great as per usual Maisy! LOVE LOVE LOVE!

the Little kid moment. I have a soft spot for childhood Flashbacks!
And THANK YOU for using Tom and Jerry.
You think if we push it hard enough, the CVs will catch on😃😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Rightfully said, Amazing as always
Loverd it
Thank you so much for the PM
PLease conitnue soon😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Wow!

Seriously, I tell you...this is what i love about your writing!

the endings...

He was a Prince but for her, he'd always remain a Knight...in dashing designer suits.

Maisy that 12 th scene GENUINELY made me cry!
Excuse me people...*Sniff*

Edited by poulomi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
awesome update loved everyone found it today loved it but one request please put english translation for the hindi used thank you loved it and please pm
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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