ManVeer Short Scenes - *Short Update - page 25** - Page 18

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved them Mais, very refreshing!

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

awesome..nice...👏

Originally posted by: nityah

these teasers are so goodd dear...actually they are just simply amazing...
i just can't wait for the day when you post it as ff...
thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: poulomi12

MAIS I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!!!!!😡

But I love you! 😉

WHY?

Mujhe kya pata? :P

Why is there no proper ending? My god my stomach is bursting to know what had actually happened and will happen next. I know u will keep us hanging for a long time. You!!!! @#$%^^&%^$!!!!!😡

Oho! Hahahaha! Sorry Bitchy, but that was kinda the plan 😛 Oye! Gaali deti hai, don't you know I am a shareef minor? 😆 Yaar don't count much on it, I might never complete them. But, I might get inspired so yeah. Le! I do it again, I got you hanging again 😛

Okay any ways, My detailed description of each scene, like u want.

YAAYY!!!!

Scene 25:

Well the tension u created is awesome, 👍🏼 I was biting my lips, and cursing you at the end. Seriously you are a SADIST.😡 Hayyyo rabba! Sadist?! 😲 Thank you! I'll take that as a compliment 😉

What i always like about your writing is the character's uniqueness never gets lost in any situation... unlike our great writer😆... Bus yaar, it was really in my head. Though it looked better in my head but this wasn't that bad.

DAMN it woman, u have to write a continuation to this. Continuation? Hmmm...mushkil hai. I can try but won't promise anything. Dun have a concrete story before this and after this.

This was the terrific of all,

"Mat bhoolo ke main sirf Devgarh ki waris nahin hun, Jaigarh ke Yuvraj ki mangetar bhi hun! Devgarh aur Jaigarh agar tumari aisi harkat pe tumein chor bhi de tou bhi wo tumein kabhi maaf nahin kare ga. Aisi liye behter hai ke tum sambhal jao. Meri jism pe lage ek ek nishan ke badle wo tumari ek ek haddi tor dega."

Udayveer was stunned. How did she know that?

@ red:

YEAH baby! that is our UV!😈

Hahah! Actually, these lines were driving me crazy! They were the highlight of this scene. I sooo want Manyata to say something like this someday but *sigh*, I wish. And yeah, that is our UV and my ManVeer! They are connected so well they don't know it themselves. Uff! You are making me dream of them again.

Scene 26:

The childish fight is quite amusing! <3

the way Unnati took a picture silently, was sooo CUTE!

But what happens next,😕

tell me WOMAN TELL ME!!!!!!!!!

i am dying out here.

What do you mean what happened next? Last lines nahin parhi? 😛 The process of marriage sped up. Aur kya? :P

Scene 27:

Hmmm... interesting FF i have to tell you, here Yudi and Manu have a past? did he try to molest her or something?? 😕😲 or did he do it with her???😕 and UV knows about it thats why he is so protective of her?

My god! Mais, this FF is so DAMN interesting!

Plz publish it quickly...

I mean for me the Teaser worked!<3

Oh, they have a past. A very huge past. Hmmm...what Yudi did to Manyata, well that is one of the main parts. Lagta kuch hai but it is something else entirely. I have thoughts of publishing it so I actually might. But this I can tell you, UV was not angry because of what Yudi did to Manyata, at least not that much, he was just angry because Yudi pushed Unnati and hurt her.

Fav job Yaar.

Thank you so much my Bitchy!! 🤗

Originally posted by: poulomi12

MINOR my foot! Jo gaali tu nikal ti hai na main tou uski censored version de rahi hun.😆

Oh no the LONG wait! i will manage some how!

about scene 26,last part, did they do something😳? i got a little confused at the end.

About you FF teaser, Yudi and Manyata have a huge past, but UV didnt defend M, so he doesnt even care about M,..okay this is getting interesting...😃