ManVeer Short Scenes - *Short Update - page 25** - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Hey Mais.. Just came across ur thread.
Loved it loved it very much. So cute Manveer scenes.
Could u pls me the next time u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Two very IMPORTANT notes before you scroll down to read this update!

(1) - This is a very DIFFERENT update of sorts! It has NOTHING to do with ManVeer AT ALL! So all those ManVeer diehards, you can safely hit the back button and save yourself from possible harm.

(2) - For all those lovely people who comment and want me to PM them about the updates, KINDLY hit the "LIKE" button on the Index post on the 1st page. I'll only PM the people who have hit Like. It's not that hard people. Kindly understand my situation here.

Ok! Here we go!!


*1*

"Laal duppata, urr gaya re bairi hawa ke jhonke se..."

She hummed to herself as she stood in front of mirror, getting ready. Her hands moving through her long wet hair. She wanted them to dry soon so she could become the Indian version of Chun Li.

"Mujh ko piya ne dekh liya, haaye re dhoke se..."

Just as she sung this line, a reflection appeared behind her. Shocked, she turned around to get a better look at the person. But he was standing so close that her hair whipped on his face. At the touch of her long, wet hair on his face, his eyes automatically closed and he tilted his face on the face instinctively.

"Aakash...tum?" Her breaths were heavy. Her seemed to be racing and threatening to come out of her chest. He was standing so close to her and she realized, for the umpteenth time, just how angelic he was.

"Haan woh, tum ne jhoot kyun kaha tha ke tumare ghar tamatar khatam hogaye the?" Getting over his entranced state, he cleared his throat and asked her with the tube-light of interest shining on his face.

"Jhoot...?" She, unlike him, hadn't gotten over her breathless state. His cologne was doing crazy things to her respiratory system.

"Haan! Kyunke main tou tamatar dekh raha hun!" He said with a very all-knowing look on his face, a smirk plastered on his face. She got confused at his statement and started looking here and there to see the tomatoes that he had seen.

"Kahan?" Curiosity got over her breathlessness. Moving her head left and right, she searched for the tomatoes while he stood there with his arms crossed looking at her and enjoying her childish and innocent actions.

"Yahan." He poked her cheeks which had gone red. She stopped like a statue at his touch. For the first time, he had not only been so close to her but he had touched her in a more than friendly way. Before she could react, he winked at her and walked away.

Her red cheeks went redder at his wink and she could hear the pounding of her heart in her ears. She struggled to breathe.

"CHIKKI!" Soni came running in and seeing her friend in a very unusual state, she got worried and rushed to her.

"Kya hua?!" Soni shook the statue Chikki who was feeling like she had been hit by a club over her head.

"Kuch nahin..." she managed to whisper before fainting straight into Soni's arms.

*2*

"Chikki! Chalo!"

"Aakash nahin!"

"Arey, chalo na!"

"Nahin Aakash, mujhe darr lag raha hai..."

"Darr? Kis baat ka?"

"Wo...nahin bus! Choro na, tum jao dance karo. Main yaheen khari hun."

"Akele dance karne mein kya faida? Main yahan tumhare saath aya hun tou tumare saath hi dance karunga."

"Nahin, tumare dost tumara mazaak uraenge..."

"Kyun?"

"Kyunke main tumare laiq nahin hun!"

"Chikki, bhool ke bhi dobara aisa mat kehna. Tum mere liye dunya ki sab se khoobsurat larki ho aur main puri dunya ko dikhana chahta hun ke Chikki kitni khaas hai mere liye."

"Aakash..."

"I love you Chikki. Ye kabhi mat bhoolna."

"I love you too Aakash."

"Really?! Tou chalo, let's dance!"

"Tum mera saath kabhi nahin choro ge na?"

"Mar jaounga lekin aisa kabhi nahin karunga!"


(more updates coming soon. till then, throw away your jootas and chappals!)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awww..!! Maisy gimme a hug!! A big one!!! Yeah!! I was laffing all through it!
Edited by tiger_lily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

I LOVE YOU MAISY!!!

and this was a VERY Dhamaka installment indeed!

LOL. LOVE LOVE LOVE!
We need to create a CHIKASH Appreciation thred, just so everyone can see how they are simply MEANT FOR EACHOTEHR!!!!
...M is getting in the way. Someone Saaf her Patha😎...in the sense that she becomes a MANVEERIAN
(Did I do good🤣?)
Edited by reeha...k - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
i know you hate reservers..but cant help it!

You guys are so desperate about CHIKASH! 😆
>>>>>throw away your jootas and chappals!

okay me first then!


You should have ended it with "i LUVHHH you Chikki"!🤣


Edited by poulomi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Hey Mais I won't throw jhootas and chappals at you because you make me 🤣🤣🤣 and I love you for that.
Enjoy reading this update and really Akash and Chiki are made for each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
okay as you said... ignored...
aur in last you have said throw your jootas and chappals..
here i go..

🤣🤣🤣🤣
jokes apart..thats so funny...
loved reading them...



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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Mais Awesome post.. 🤗This one's for you
Edited by limbu.simmy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
hey gal!! thnks 4 the PM!!😉
🤣🤣🤣
i couldnt stop laughin to funny n really well done love it!!!👏👏
after readin ur post tht made my day too good got give it really well done!!!👏⭐️
Edited by Angel_20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
"Tum mera saath kabhi nahin choro ge na?"

"Mar jaounga lekin aisa kabhi nahin karunga!"

CHIKAASH, FTW!

...I cannot stop giggling over the fact that I read three OSs on Chikaash tonight. Gosh, I must be high or something... 😆


TC.

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