ManVeer Short Scenes - *Short Update - page 25** - Page 5

Aww...just loved them...❤️
again...great work dear...👏
First one cutely romantic...
Uday helped her wit her sandal strap...that was adorable...
and second one is sooo chweeet...
the way Manyata shut his mouth was again so cute...
looking forward for more like these...

awww dat waz sooo cute and adorable❤️

😉Lovely updates..

loved the updates those were so cute Mais!

This was sooo cute :) :) :) Awwwiiee...Loved these scenes to the core :) :) Continue writing soon :) :)

Fabulous OS ...the last line of OS 10 by Komal just make me 😆 yeh kambakt ishq cheeze hi aisi hain

Originally posted by: poulomi12

Waise, humein aisi cheezen bandhne se zyada unhen kholne ka experience hai.

what did u mean by that?

Uday laughed at this and kept looking at the spot where she had turned and disappeared. Then slowly, he put a hand on his chest where is pounding heart seemed to be racing. If only she knew what her careless actions did to him...

yaar this is what i love about your writing...you always capture the emotions so nicely...

Bang on!

Genuine nok-jhok wala scene! haye yeh dono humesh aisi hi larte rahe!

But before anyone could hear what he always told her, she put a piece of orange in his mouth.

haye this one scene will give me sweet dreams throughout the night!

Komal just stood there and shook her head at this scene.

"Since when did Uday start liking oranges?"

BEST PART!!!!!!

i love u so much for writing these scenes!!!

P.S.:Abse kabhie bhi reserve nahin karungi!

It means what you think it means...didn't Manyata's blushing face tell you that? Itna bhi masoom mat bann Polo! 😉 You know, I really want these scenes to be included in the show that's why I kept them closest to the "reality" 😆 And oye, I love you MORE for always commenting so sweetly! 🤗