Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 22

Originally posted by: PROMKING12

Pyar ne ye kaisa tohfa de diya,
Mujhko gumo ne pathar bana diya.
Teri yaadon main hi kat gayi ye umar,
Kehta raha tujhe kab ka bhula diya'

Originally posted by: sirilikesdaya

liked the concept GD..Grt story!

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

sorry for late commenting😳
bt i read on the same day u posted
i liked the theme a lot.. u mentioned a geniune problem faced by girls
realy really ur dis concept is best till u hv written..
honestly few lines pinched me a lot🤢
bt its cruel truth...
great job dada👏

Originally posted by: Chints09

Wow..
Great one DADA...👏👏👏
Great PLOT and nice NARRATION of PLOT...

But DADA your STORY is some what LACKING in END..
i think ENDING PART was not as much CLEAR as the WHOLE STORY..
in END you should be much more CLEAR ...
you gone RASH in END...
else your PLOT and STORY both were Real as in this SOPHISTICATED SOCIETY...

once again its really AWESOME but as well CRUELTY of this SOCIETY...

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Hmmm... First I m bit Shocked that U read it after knowing the Plot... About UR Point... CHINTS the first thing... I will try to inoculate the HOPE cz yes I wanted to be RASH because how did I showed that Fear, Tension, Pain of Victims tolerated these Scenarios... I knew I did not once think to try to do sumthing to change the Views, Society so how do I give my responsibility burden to others... I did not fulfill my responsibility so ho do expect it from all... I just tried to give sum parts of that Hope... Yaar sach... Main kuch Nahi ker saka... Tou Dusrun ko kyun apny hissy ka kaam dy ker jaon aur phir chahun Kay wo usay poor a bhi Karen...

But yup thank U... It's really a Big achievement cz I knew Girls like it because they dealt it although by different aspect... So a FB from a GUY is really a BIG TREAT...

Chalo ek GRAND DINNER do...😆

Originally posted by: Chints09

AIN?????😲😲
kya aisa hai kya hum log Nhi PADH sakte????😉
and yup you have to TRY for that..
you have to be much MORE SHOW that FEAR.. TENSIONS.. PAINS for CHANGING something..
and you know what i didn't BELIEVE you that you didn't FULFILL your RESPONSIBILITY..
in fact you FULFILL your RESPONSIBILITY and do GREAT job..
but some what LACK because of RASHNESS..
you know this STORY can be NARRATED only by that PERSON who have GUTS to CHANGE ..
who have GUTS to CUT the WAVES of water...
you didn't do your RESPONSIBILITY of CHANGING.
but you have INSPIRE many PEOPLE.. That is the REAL RESPONSIBILITY.. towards SOCIETY..
because no body wants to be SHEPHARD...

and ABOUT TREAT...
only LEADER has to GIVEN TREAT .. not FOLLOWERS...😆
so where is TREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳