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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreela

Brilliant concept GD, and very well-written.👏👏 btw, I think the title should br Suicidal Pact, isn't it? expected some more cute duo scenes, but it's ok. 😊 loved the story.👍🏼


THANK U KD😳... dekha mujhy malum tha KD koi na koi GHALATI nikal lay gi😆... arry yaar darsal mujhy TITLE mila hee nahi hay.😡.. ye tou bus avayein rakh diya😉... wesay THANK U very much... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read the story on the day u posted itself but commenting now!

I liked the theme a lot.. Really a genuine social problem faced by many girls now a days.. and the team handled it well.. again a bit of GD touch was there but it has to be there otherwise it won't be a GD story.. Only thing is i couldn't visualize this story of yours because you made T to show so many various expressions.. but.. if the character we see is ignored.. i really liked this story of yours.. First of a kind i might add 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late reply Dada

Great Story Dada, great concept and very Well-written 👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snehal.

Read the story on the day u posted itself but commenting now!


I liked the theme a lot.. Really a genuine social problem faced by many girls now a days.. and the team handled it well.. again a bit of GD touch was there but it has to be there otherwise it won't be a GD story.. Only thing is i couldn't visualize this story of yours because you made T to show so many various expressions.. but.. if the character we see is ignored.. i really liked this story of yours.. First of a kind i might add 👍🏼 👏


aby U visualize ANONE ELSE na😉.😉.. Dunt Visualize there TAREEKA... only Visualize the Girl... yup a very Geniune issue... but Thanks to All that U Liked it...😳😳
THANK U so much Yaar... 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dayafan1

Sorry for the late reply Dada


Great Story Dada, great concept and very Well-written 👏👏👏


ohhh baccha Dunt say Sorry...
THANK U very much... 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
SPEECH LESS Dada
U truly Deserve a !
ths is what need 2 be NOTICED for story writting .
wonderful Concept n Fabulous plot
wht else i could say is that U had highlighted a very True n Positive Issue &
@ last a very Perfect Message for all Students
However the girl (Nidhi) lost her life but , an effortz saved other girlz Life from Evils ,that ws Superrb ENDing
story iz az Super duper az alwayz 😳
thts why i say "aap may hay KUCH KHAAS "🤗
abt Sachin n Nikhil ,i'll keep my Comments RESERVE bcz U undersatand n better know My Feelingz towardz them 😉
so keep WRITTING , n all de BEST fr ur Future upcuming Skills😃😳
keep it Up mere Sohna n Pyara sa Gudda 😃😉😳
Edited by vevah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud job dada...keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sherdilali

gud job dada...keep it up


THANK U SD...😳😳
kahan hotay ho aaj kal??😕
UR SIGNATURE LINE is SO mazaidaar... 😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vevah

SPEECH LESS Dada

U truly Deserve a !
ths is what need 2 be NOTICED for story writting .
wonderful Concept n Fabulous plot
wht else i could say is that U had highlighted a very True n Positive Issue &
@ last a very Perfect Message for all Students
However the girl (Nidhi) lost her life but , an effortz saved other girlz Life from Evils ,that ws Superrb ENDing
story iz az Super duper az alwayz 😳
thts why i say "aap may hay KUCH KHAAS "🤗
abt Sachin n Nikhil ,i'll keep my Comments RESERVE bcz U undersatand n better know My Feelingz towardz them 😉
so keep WRITTING , n all de BEST fr ur Future upcuming Skills😃😳
keep it Up mere Sohna n Pyara sa Gudda 😃😉😳


if U are SPEECHLESS how did U Write so much...😲😉
ayey KHAMOSH MUJAHID...😆😆
yup One Sacrifice save most Life...😳
THANK U VIVA and try to Propagate this Msg...😳
agar is Story ko parh ker koi bhi alert ho gaya ya koi Culprit Pakra gaya tou Mujhy lagay ga main nay Kuch kiya...😊
UR Weaving on MY Hairs😉... aby mujhy GUDGUDEE ho rahi hay... 😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


THANK U SD...😳😳
kahan hotay ho aaj kal??😕
UR SIGNATURE LINE is SO mazaidaar... 😆 😆

u welcom
yar yahen hoti hun ghar sy clg or clg sy ghar...pahle exam they phr computer ny chakma dey dia and now gud news i passed my exams and promoted in next class

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