Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Hey dada hats off to u
U handle this plot very well

What ever i want to say its really said by neeme

Keep writing on such plots

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: p.rvaidya
Very Gud work dada!!! 👏...Superbbb!!! ...
Nw I m also added in ur fan list... 😉 😃

THANK U very much P.RVAIDYA...😳😳

also THANK U for PROLONG My Fan List... 😉😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Naomi.
@Dada:

THANK U... 😳 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: 42Hercules
DADA lumbi story. Phir bhi parh li mene. Bechare Bhai se KALAKARI... Hmmm. Acha kiya Sachin ke saath.
Tussi great ho DADA. Very good story.

Tussi bhi Great ho Baccha...😉😃

THANK U very much...😳 😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

I second you Neeme. 👏

Great story GD. 👏👏 Like always you've rocked again.

Great Feedback SHERYA...😃

Thank U...😳😳

I think after Rocking so much😉... mostly I m Shaking...😆😆

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Forfriends
Hey dada hats off to u
U handle this plot very well

What ever i want to say its really said by neeme

Keep writing on such plots

yaar I have that Fear that may be I did not Handle that Issue but trying alot...😃

wesay Where are those HATS which U off...😉😆

THANK U so Very much... 😳 😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: neeme
GD I love The concept... Claps for ur Thinking abt this Kind of story 👏👏👏. These Kinds of stories are really needed to show on Tv..To Give lesson and awreness to the peoples..Todays World is Very much Non Secure Place for Girls Specially... I really Want that CID also show These kinds of Cases..So that Peoples will be more alert and also Tell the Solution to deal with such kinds of situations.. But CID creators are Busy only to show Murder Cases and sometimes Non Sense Series ..they are just making this Show Sucessful now By showing Emotional and Few Action Scene in the each episode.. They have to show Such kinds of cases Too..

I always like ur Story concept..But this Time, the concept was so gud... this time Its Not abt Investigation abt the loopholes are cast dustribution..This time it was all abt ur Concept..Which was Great...Investigation Style was also so Gud..i really Like The way u added Daya's Sensitivity touch in the story👏👏 At that time i feel that there is going to start Darrer between Duo 😆😆..But Very Well u managed.. we readers are very Small to Appreciate ur Work.. U are Too Gud Always😃👍🏼

GD Try To Write One Detailed Story on Darrer Concept also..if u can... Gud Luck!

First of all THANK U so much DII😳😳... I have This Plot in my mind so long but always had a Fear not to Handled it Properly but after discussing it to AANDROMEDA DII... she encouraged me alot to WRITE😊... even the COPY CAT IDEA was HER.👏.. but really after that Discussion... I reviewd My Plot... its Quite Difficult to get the College at Mumbai which Provided all facilities... but I tried...😊

NO not DARAAR DII.😆.. cz if U knew a Person from 15 years... U did not get Him Wrong or make Lame arguments... thatswhy I Managed it in quite Proper way... cz there only INTENSIONS count...😳

but yup after long time... I came up with a Social Evil of Society... THANK U VERY MUCH DII...😳😳

abt DARAAR... No Comments...!!!😆😆

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Hello Dada!

I'm speechless. At first it appealed to be a story of your usual style but got carried out differently after sometimes. It's a truth and very common nowadays. Students really need to be alert and it's never easy to compose a story on such serious and controversial issues. The beginning was great and after that team parts were written brilliantly. I loved how that Sachin got scolded by Abhijeet. Funny parts of duo always add light moments to stories and the same happened here. I was a delight to read how Acp and Abhijeet sir were concerned for Daya sir. Daya sir was just amazing throughout the story and Purvi's role was well handled at last.

Overall, a great inspiring story which reflects the truth of society. Ab aapki tareef main kya kahun? Agar aapke saamne woh 'HATS OFF' ka mauke mil jaye toh duniya ke saare hats aapke kadmon mein daal doon.

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Shruti Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Brilliant concept GD, and very well-written.👏👏 btw, I think the title should br Suicidal Pact, isn't it? expected some more cute duo scenes, but it's ok. 😊 loved the story.👍🏼

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: -Shruti
Hello Dada!

I'm speechless. At first it appealed to be a story of your usual style but got carried out differently after sometimes. It's a truth and very common nowadays. Students really need to be alert and it's never easy to compose a story on such serious and controversial issues. The beginning was great and after that team parts were written brilliantly. I loved how that Sachin got scolded by Abhijeet. Funny parts of duo always add light moments to stories and the same happened here. I was a delight to read how Acp and Abhijeet sir were concerned for Daya sir. Daya sir was just amazing throughout the story and Purvi's role was well handled at last.

Overall, a great inspiring story which reflects the truth of society. Ab aapki tareef main kya kahun? Agar aapke saamne woh 'HATS OFF' ka mauke mil jaye toh duniya ke saare hats aapke kadmon mein daal doon.

Hello Baccha... ohh yaar U made Me speechless with Ur so much appreciation, Praise and True Luv🤗... ya I tried with a Fear that might be This story of mine creating any Fight and raise a Conflict but still RELAXED😆... arry Tum wo saaray HAT mein say ek BHAI n ek BARAY BHAI ko day do... yehi kafi hay😳... aur meray tou SEENG CHUP jayein gay na HAT say😈... tou phir MERI BEAUTI kaun dekhay ga...😉

meray PYARAY, SOHNY, GUDDY, CHOTAY, SHINNY, SHARP BACCHY...😳😳

Luv U alot...🤗

Tons of THANK U... 😳😳