Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Gamayun

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

And I'm the first one done!!! 👏 😆

GD, I loved it. There was actually a daraar, mind you I didn't really want a daraar, but at least it was true to its title. 😆

Great story GD!!! 👏

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: Chints09

AIN?????😲😲
kya aisa hai kya hum log Nhi PADH sakte????😕😕😆😉
and yup you have to TRY for that..
you have to be much MORE SHOW that FEAR.. TENSIONS.. PAINS for CHANGING something..
and you know what i didn't BELIEVE you that you didn't FULFILL your RESPONSIBILITY..
in fact you FULFILL your RESPONSIBILITY and do GREAT job..
but some what LACK because of RASHNESS..
you know this STORY can be NARRATED only by that PERSON who have GUTS to CHANGE ..
who have GUTS to CUT the WAVES of water...
you didn't do your RESPONSIBILITY of CHANGING.
but you have INSPIRE many PEOPLE.. That is the REAL RESPONSIBILITY.. towards SOCIETY..
because no body wants to be SHEPHARD...

and ABOUT TREAT...
only LEADER has to GIVEN TREAT .. not FOLLOWERS...😉😉😆😆
so where is TREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳

will read the story when i get time...but the above exchange of words is a bit surprising...the style and font of both of you are very very similar. 😆

I thought it was GD replying to someone else's post.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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Sheen

@..Princess..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

very good story DADA 👍🏼

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

This is the aftermath of the Daraar series which actually didn't have any real Daraar. It is nice to see some people attempting a real Daraar story. I am very much curious to know how people create a real Daraar between duo without ruining either of their characters.

I read the first part till the fight between duo happened and it is interesting. I am unable to read everything thru mobile. Will continue tomorrow.

It will be really nice to see all writers of our forum attempt their own version of Daraar. It will be interesting to see how everyone treats this. 😊

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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GIRL_SHERLOCK

@GIRL_SHERLOCK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Nice Story gadhadada !! 😊

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SomethingRandom

@SomethingRandom

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Great Story Dada 👏👏

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Jasmine

@Jeet-cid

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Will read the story soon.. gadhadada..

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

nice plotOF STORY but i hav a confusion...password kis kis ke eye parts ka tha

AJAY+RAMAN+YOGY ...or...AJAY+RAMAN+ABHI

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: sherdilali
nice plotOF STORY but i hav a confusion...password kis kis ke eye parts ka tha
AJAY+RAMAN+YOGY ...or...AJAY+RAMAN+ABHI

SD... its Obviously YOGI...😃

ABHI is DAYA Sir not ABHIJEET Sir... 😊