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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

vey nice attempt Deep!👏 I really enjoyed the story. expecting many more stories from you. keep writing.👍🏼

Edited by shreela - 14 years ago

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

nyc deepika... u had written the story in a different aspect...

i liked one thing is i liked ur dosti section bt that temple part is so different...

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halfbloodprince

@WindsOfHeaven

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Really very good story Deepika di.👏

Very well written, keep it up.👍🏼

I like the way you portrayed the friendship part and it was just lovely😊. Also, I enjoyed Daya-Abhi and Freddy-Vivek bonding. I liked the way you paired Nikhil with Sachin.👏

I too say that emotional sequence could have been a bit less because all the officers must be strong. The temple part was a bit different because kajal was never shown religious.

Edited by Shruti_HR - 14 years ago

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Naomi

@Naomi.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Deepika di...u know what, me was very angry during Abhi-TARIKAJI part...why adi sir had to dream 4 that lady n blush 4 her????😡😡😡

But overall the story was different n Superb👏👏👏👏👏

Me loved the Nikhil-Nayna part n sacrificing 4 frnd part😃😃😃

Edited by Naomi. - 14 years ago

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Amna

@dayakhtar

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

hey DEAR...

hope u ll b doin' well😊

😊on ur 1st STORY... DEAR😊

😊OVERALL CONCEPT of d STORY is juz😊

😊in CHARACTERIZATION n PLOT WRAPUP😊

😊u hv done a😊

n U tried 2 BROADEN d SPECTRUM by...

😊 ENHANCING d SIGNIFICANCE of d TEAM MEMBERS odr than TRIO😊

😊being ur 1st TRY... d STORY is😊

😊

😊in FUTURE😊

😊WARM😊

😊hv sum😊

😊juz 4 u😊

😊hope... i hv NOT DISSAPOINTED U😊

take care😊

gud luk😊

keep smilin'😊

regards😊

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: dayakhtar
hey DEAR...

hope u ll b doin' well😊

😊on ur 1st STORY... DEAR😊

😊OVERALL CONCEPT of d STORY is juz😊

😊in CHARACTERIZATION n PLOT WRAPUP😊

😊u hv done a😊

n U tried 2 BROADEN d SPECTRUM by...

😊 ENHANCING d SIGNIFICANCE of d TEAM MEMBERS odr than TRIO😊

😊being ur 1st TRY... d STORY is😊

😊

😊in FUTURE😊

😊WARM😊

😊hv sum😊

😊juz 4 u😊

😊hope... i hv NOT DISSAPOINTED U😊

take care😊

gud luk😊

keep smilin'😊

regards😊

Thank you so much Friend😊

For my sweet friend😊

Edited by deepz28888 - 14 years ago

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: dayakhtar
hey DEAR...

hope u ll b doin' well😊

😊on ur 1st STORY... DEAR😊
😊OVERALL CONCEPT of d STORY is juz😊
😊in CHARACTERIZATION n PLOT WRAPUP😊

😊u hv done a😊
n U tried 2 BROADEN d SPECTRUM by...

😊 ENHANCING d SIGNIFICANCE of d TEAM MEMBERS odr than TRIO😊
😊being ur 1st TRY... d STORY is😊
😊

😊in FUTURE😊
😊WARM😊
😊hv sum😊
😊juz 4 u😊
😊hope... i hv NOT DISSAPOINTED U😊
take care😊
gud luk😊
keep smilin'😊
regards😊

wow its so nice yaar👏👏⭐️

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

congo dear
for ur successful completion n inaugration of first story
ya its too cool********
d way u showed every emotions was awesum
n dat lady officers assuring d female victims as how we hav seen in asha era cases.
nowadays they just r show ...
all d best
keep writting