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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

ITS NICE DI😃😃😃 I LIKE THE CONCEPT OF THE STORY👏👏 THIS IS YOUR FIRST STORY😊 SOO WELDONE DI👍🏼👍🏼 👍🏼YOU DONE A WONDERFUL AND AWESOME JOB DI😃... ITS IMOTIONAL👏 AND REALLY SUPERB🤗🤗🤗

Edited by shiva17 - 14 years ago

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

the story sounds interesting..

jaise hi tym milega, will read it nd comment...😊

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.Crystal.

@.Crystal.

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Great story deepz...but it's a bit too emotional type...still u did a great job 👏

Edited by notepad697 - 14 years ago

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

srry di but xams h to abhi nhi padh paungi 😭

jasie hi khatam honge xams tab mai padhke cmmnt karungi

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rukhsar.crazy

@rukhsar.crazy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

nice story deepika!!!gr8 work i think CID can adopt it in place of the slow paced stories they r showing these days👏

LIKES- the concept of the story itself is very good...dosti stories are my all time fav...we are already familiar with abhi daya freindship, but u hav incorporated nikhil sachin freindship also very beautifully...i liked the kitchen scene the most in this story..its awesome...vivek nd freddy nokjhok is very nice since i really miss it these days...the idea of keeping the deepika's freind in daya;s house is cool since mostly we such things in junior officer's house...

DISLIKES- the temple part was not good ,someone like kajal suggesting to go to temple is not convincing ,not like CID people are not religious it just dint suit her...

CID people crying also is not nice...they are someone who are meant to be strong...

u mentioned in your conclusion that u had yo keep it a little emotional but still it was a little exaggerated...

i dont want to tell anything abt the love track...it was neither good nor bad , not coz nikhil is there in it but lovy dovy scenes dont suit CID so much

deeps dear i mentioned the dislikes only because u asked to otherwise the story is really good!!!👍🏼

Edited by rukhsar.crazy - 14 years ago

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zehra

@looooooser

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

hi,, dear very nice story👍🏼🤗 i like at

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

DEEPZZZ... very NICE try👏👏👏... in a different ASPECT👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼... cum up wid sum other in cuming days...

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Great story Deepu.👏

Likes: Wel,the whole story was gud.especially the part wer deepika scrifices 4 naina.it just got tears 2 my eyes.nikhil aur naina ke pyaar ok.the main focus was on friendship.i liked it very much😊

Dislikes: the whole cid team geeting emotinal , the main thing i dint like was Abhijit dreaming abt Tarika🤢(it is my opinion),and Kaajal suggesting Naina goin 2 temple and emotions cud hv been reduced and rate of deductin cn be increased

Otherwise the story is very nice 👏👏👏👏

😊

Edited by reshmaramesh - 14 years ago