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Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️OMG⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️... this is the sweetest dream😃👏👏👏👏👏... sorry 4 late reply di... loved it👏⭐️😳😃... i jus imagine this wowww... thanx 4 sharing ... chho chweetuuu😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 i cant explain my feelings...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Sakshi23Sasha

@Sakshi23Sasha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

oh mymy...dats wonderful...lovely...i love him tooo...3rd sept ko jo episode aaya tha...usme daya ko kofen me dekhkar meri to saas hee ruk gayi thi...i thought dat i wont watch CID any more...i was literallly in tears 😭

But den i thought ki agar unko CID aage badhani hai toh Daya ko zinda rakhna hi padega...uske bina cid...cid nahi hai...he's awesome...isiliye suspence me daya shayad aajaye...and my guess was rite.!!!!!!!

It was jst lyk getting my breath back!!!!!!!!😃

U guyzz wont believe me...i literally day dream abt DAYA...😍...skool me dhyaan bhi nahi lagta...

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

@ Padmapriya Thanks for the comment 😳.

@Rashida its ok for the late reply 😳

@Polly sapne dekne mein kyaa burayi hai 😉 kyaa pata kab sapna sach ho jaaye na 😃

@ Rashi thanxxzzz dear your comment was the cutest and sweetest here 😊😃

@ Saakshi thanxxzzz for comment. Waise maine toh hamesha daydream karti hoon 😉

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.dream-catcher.

@.dream-catcher.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

It was so sweet dream!!
Nicee

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

it's so nyc... to read...

sapno me hi sahi daya sir se baat to hui..

u r lucky 2 have such a dream...

gud...

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

OMG Wowww😳😳😳😳😳 deeps di 😳😳😳😳... WHAT a lovely Dream MAI TO ISME KHO HI GAYI SACHI😳😳😳 I LOVE DAYA SIR 😃😃😃😃😃 ... DI ITS JUS awesome and awesome and awesome👏😃😃😃😳😳😳. ... wonderful job di⭐️⭐️...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 lovely dream😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳...

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kelly32

@kelly32

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

hey deepz you have written it wonderfully..I can actually imagine this scene..so sweet😳

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SomethingRandom

@SomethingRandom

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Wow Wonderful story,👏👏👏 im a big fan of daya sir and i loved it and i hope that you get a chance to meet them personally and your dream come true 😊

Edited by dayafan1 - 14 years ago

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Yeh Kahani meri khaas dost ko mein dedicate karthi hoon and offcourse to my favourite duo Abhijeet and Daya. Meine yeh kahaani apni dost ke real life se thoda liya hai.Jab mein usseh milli aur uski kahaani suni i was shocked 😲 ki yese bhi insaan ho sakhthe jo pyaar mein paagal ho sakhthe hain.I dedicate this to all the brave people all over the world jinhone apne doston ke liye khaaskar apni jaan diya ho.Meine iss kahani mein poora importance DOSTHI pe diya hain.I have tried to create every khas moments joh every viewer chahtha hai ki woh CID mein dekhe.Agar yeh kahaani padkar ek bhi insaan ko lagega ki useh bhi yese bahadury dikhaani hai toh yeh mein apni success maanthi hoon .Without wasting much time iam giving you my first story Read it and ENJOY !!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊

PAGAL ASHIQUE KE KHOONI KISSE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeh jagah ek puraani building hai waha
A girl lying in a pool of blood shot with gun on her heart.someother girls are sitting beneath her and crying out loud around her and 2 of the girls lift and try to get lift from the strangers on road. Another one girl calls CID.

At bureau:

Fredericks: Hamesha mujhe apni wife se sunna padtha hai gaali

Vivek : Kyaa hua Freddy sir Bhabhi ne phir jhagda kiya kyaa??

Fredericks: hmmm too toh baat hi mat kar...

Vivek : Sir bataayiye ne kyaa baat hai...

Abhijeet Daya bureau aathe hai saath saath...

Daya : Kyaa hua Freddy phir se shuru tumhare jhagde??

Fredericks: Sir iss Vivek ne meri wife se kaha ki mein kuch kaamhi nahi kartha yahape sirf apni wife ke baare mein complaint kartha rehtha hoon...

Abhijeet : Vivek tumne yese kaha humare Freddy ke baare mein aisa kahaa??!!!!

Vivek : Arey nahi sir mein toh aise hi...

Fredericks: Aise hi ...

Suddenly ACP sir enters on the scene:

ACP : Kyaa ho raha hai yaha??

Daya : Kuch nahi sir yeh aam jagde freddy ke apne wife ke saath

Bureau mein call aatha hai aur Vivek receives the call:

Vivek : Hello Kyaa Goli laagi!!! Kahaan pe??? Hum aathe hain abhi..

Vivek to All:Sir Malad mein ek purane building mein ek ladki ko goli marke ek aadmi bhaag gaya hai sir..

ACP :toh chalo malad chalthe hai...

Jise goli lagi hai uska naam Deepika hei aur doosre ladki ka naam Naina hai. joh Naina ke saath hain unka naam hein Heena and Manju. ACP, Daya,Abhijeet,Fredericks, Kaajal, Sachin ,Vivek aur Nikhil aa jaathe hai waha pe.
so they come and see the conditon of the girl.

ACP : Oh my god Daya.. Ahijeet itna khoon behgaya ambulance aayi ki nahi..
Daya : Nahi sir pata nahi itna dher kyun ho raha hai.
Abhijeet: Sir yeh sar se bhi khoon nikal raha hai.Daya tumhare paas handkerchief hai? Isske sar pe rakhne keliye... khoon thoda rokne keliye...
Daya : Haa yeh lo Ahiijeet. Naina(crying): Koi kuch karo meri dost ko bachao... meri wajaah se woh iss halat mein hai...(weeping).. 😭.
Fredericks : Sir ambulance aa gayi
ACP : jaldi jaldi utao ladki ko .Kaajal,sachin aur Nikhil tum Naina ke saath jao
Kaajal, Sachin & Nikhil : Ji sir.

Till then the ambulance emerges and Daya and Fredericks help them to carry away the girl to the van.still everyone is crying and the scene gets tense.
So now CID goes into usual investigation about how the girl Deepika was shot.

ACP : Daya yeh 4 ladkiyaan iss sunsaan jagah par kyaa kar rahi thi?
Daya : Kyaa Pata sir. Ho saktha hai koi gunde peeche pade ho Abhijeet ,Vivek and Fredericks enquiring Heena and Manju
Abhijeet : Kyaa hua tha yahaan?? yeh Deepika ko goli kaise lagi???
Heena : Baat bohot puraani hai sir mein kahaa se shuru karoon.
Fredericks: Kuch bhi ho bolna toh padega hi.

Heena and Manju ek doosre ko dekhthe hai
Vivek : Arey aap dono humein batavoge nahi toh pata kaise chalega?

ACP and Daya Sir jo doorh pe hai baatcheet sunkar paas aa jaathe hai.
ACP : Kyaa hua Abhijeet?
Abhijeet: Nahi Sir yaha yeh donoon ek doosre ko dekh rahe hai
ACP: (Unke chehra dekh kar woh aur pyaar se baath karte hai) Aaap toh bohot dareh hue lag rahe ho.. Chalo koi baath nahi aaram se bureau chalte hai aur waha pe baath karthe hai... chalo

At bureau
A call comes on ACP's phone
ACP : ha kaho Sachin kyaa hua?
Sachin: Sir yahan hospital mein Doctor keh rahe hai ki Deepika ke bachne ka chance kam hai..
ACP : Kya?!!!!? Achcha aisi baath hai... theekh hai tum mujhe ek ek minute ki baatein phone karke bataana theek hai...ok..ok ACP Heena aur Manju ki taraf mudke kehthe hai
ACP : dekho Heena aur Naina Deepika ki condition serious hai aur iss halat mein tum donon humein kuch nahi batavoge toh hu m aageh kaise jaa payenge... gunehgaar ko kaise pakdenge...
Heena and Naina rone lagthe hai...
Abhijeet: Dekhye hum aapki madath karna chahthe hai ...toh please...
Vivek : Aaap paani peejiye... leejiye... befiker hoke batayoye
ACP sir vivek ko ghoor ke dekhthe hai 🤓
ACP : ha ha bataao...
Heena : (rothe huve) 😭Sir darasal baath bohot puraani hai... ek ladka tha sundar Manju :woh Naina ka relative tha woh Naina ko paagalon ki tarah pyaar kartha tha...ek din usne Naina ko bada sa chitti bheja parcel ke dwaara... yeh dekh ke Naina uss chitti ko ghar leke gayi aur apne dad se shikaayat ki
Heena : Tab uske dad'ne Sundar ke parents se shikhayat ki aur kaha ki aayinda woh yese harkatein na kare...
Manju : Uske parents ne toh agree kar liya ki hai hum sambhaal lenge ...
Heena : lekin woh apni harkaton se baaj nahi aaya sir
ACP : Kyun ? Kyaa kiya usne??
Heena : woh fir se Naina ko pareshaan karne laga tha... isliye usne sundar se kaha ki woh kisi aur se pyaar karthi hai...
Abhijeet : Phir kyaa hua??
Heena : Buss Phir kyaa tha... usko gusssa aa gaya tha... aur woh Naina pe nazar daalne laga tha...
Manju : woh uske class ke sabhi ladkon ko Naina ke naam pe ashleel sms bhejne laga ...
ACP : Ashleel matlab kis tarah ka asleel...
Heena : (ek bohot badi silence ke baadh) yese messages... jaise... jaise...
Manju : Jaise...ki...ki... 🤔
Daya : Sharminda hone ki koi baath nahi hai tumhe... khulke kahiye...
Manju : jaise ki ... mera badan pyaasa hai... mein pyaasi hoon ...aaj raath... (rone lagthi hai)... 😭
ACP : Darinda jaha bhi hoga chodenge nahi usko#**** 😡 uske baad kyaa hua!!
Heena : Sir uske baadh toh Naina ko yeh sab pata nahi tha ki woh uske yese sms uske naam pe bhej raha hai ...
Manju : Uske classke boys kitni bhi sims change kare unko gande message aathe rahe sir... toh ek din ek ladke ne Naina ka insult kardiya sir...
Heena : Toh uss ladke sab logon ke saamne Naina se kaha ki woh ... yeh sab business college ke baahar ...rakhe andar yeh sab na kare...
Manju : Tab Naina ko pata chala yeh sab aur usne uss ladke ko sab samjhaaya...
Heena :uske bohot baaad bohot police ko batake usse pitwaaya sir toh woh theek hua lekin... dhamkiyaan nahi rukhi sir...
Manju : Deepika aur uski dosthi bobot time baadh hua... aur yeh kahaaniyaan baadh mein pata laga...
Heena : tab ek din Naina ne khulke apni madath karne ke liye unke ghar gayi aur unse madath maangi
Manju : Pehle toh parents ne mana kar diya lekin Deepika unke advise ke khillaf gayi aur ghar se nikal kar Naina ka saath dene ka decision.
Heena : tabse Deepika ne apne parents ko thyaag diya sirf apne dost ke liye sir...
Daya : yeh sab baatein toh theek hai... lekin yeh bataao ki yeh haathsa kaise hua??!!!
Heena : Sir ek din hum sab ne yeh pareshaani hamesha ke liye khatam karne keliye advertisement diya ki Naina weds Nithin.
Manju : tab kyaa tha woh paaglon ki tarah aa gaya jaha bhi chupkar baitha tha... woh aaya aur Naina ko maarne ke liye badha...
Heena : tab Naina ko bachaane keliye jaanboojke Deepika saamne aa gayi sir... (phir se rothi hein)...😭

Donon ko rothe dekh aur kahani ko sunke Daya, Abhijeet,Vivek emotional ho jaathe hai... Lekin ACP sir kehthe hai

ACP : Hmm Deepika ne toh apni dosth ko bacha liya ab humein kuch karna padega .

ACP sab ko ek side pe bulake poochthe hai
ACP : Kyaaa lagtha hai tumko ???
Daya : Sir humein Deepika aur Neethu ko protection dena chahiye sir... kyaa pata woh unhe khatam karne ki koshish kare...
ACP : aur inn dono ka kyaa??
Abhijeet: Sir endono ko hum yaani mein aur Daya saath rehke daya ke ghar pe rakhthe hein sir... kaafi dari hue lagthe hai...
ACP : kuch baath ho toh mujhe batana
Daya: nahi sir hum dekh lenge.
ACP :ok

Yaha hospital mein:

Naina : Mein kyaa karoon... meri dost... 😭
Kaajal: Naina sambhaalon apne aapko...

Naina yeh kehthe kehte behosh ho jaathi hai toh kaajal Sachin aur Nikhil waha bench peh usse litake rakhhte hai aur paani daalke uthaane ki koshish karthe hai

ACP sir saari kahaani Sachin ko bataathe hai aur Sachin Nikhil aur Kaajal ko...
Sab baatein sunke unko ek bohot proud feeling aa jathi hai Deepika ke liye... ki aaj kal koi apnon keliye ye sab nahi kartha toh Deepika ne apne dost keliye ye sab ...

Yaha Daya aur abhijeet Daya ke ghar pe Heena aur Manju ko le jaathe hai:

Usual jo unhe comfortable karne ke liye unse kuch baatein karni ki koshish karthe hai..
Daya : Aao andar... aao ... isse apne ghar hi samjho ... 😊
Abhijeet: Hey Daya... sirf baatein keh rahe ho ki khana waana bhi hai!!!! 😛
Daya : Arey yaar tumhe toh pata hai ki mujhe khana waana banana nahi aatha toh ... meri madath karo na yaar...
Abhijeet: Chalo kuch banathe hai..
Tabhi dono Heena aur Manju kehthe hai: Sir hum kuch madath kare.
Abhijeet: arey nahi nahi aap humare guest ho.
Daya : Excuse me yeh mere ghar hain aur yeh mera dialogue cheen liya tumne yaar..(hasthe hue)
Abhijeet: Kyaa farak padtha hai tum kaho ya mein ek hi baath hai na...

Heena aur Manju muskuraane ki koshish karthe hein lekin udaasi mehsoos hoti hai unhe... ek tarah se unki achchi dost ki yaadein unhe 😍 pal pal yaaad aane lagtha jaise uski muskurahat... 😊 uska hasna sharmaana... 😳

Tabhi Abhijeet kehthe hai:

Abhijeet: kyaa hua kaha khoye hue ho ❓... baitho na hum abhi aathe hain...
Guest ko hall mein chodke woh kitchen ki taraf jaathe hai...

At kitchen

Daya : kyaa yaar abhijeet unke chehre dekha tumne? Kitni dard thi ghabraahat thi... abhi bhi... hai na??!!!
Abhijeet: haa yaar, ladkiyaan hai aakhir... aur waise bhi goli khaatey hua dekh aam insaan ek dum ghabrajaayega... lekin inn ladkiyon ne toh bohot bure din dekhe...
Daya :Hmmm sahi keh raho hao yaar... lekin yeh ladka paagal hain yaa ashique khoon karne pe utar aaya yeh toh
Abhijeet: yeh paagal kabhi aasique nahi ho sakthe aur ashique ko paagal nahi hona chahiye... Pyaar mein kurbaaniya kathe hai apni jaan dete hain... kisika jaan khud ke matlab keliya lena toh nafrat hai pyaar nahi...
Daya : Tum bohot jaanthe ho pyaar ke baarein mein... Taarika ne sikhaaya kyaan tumhe??!!!!! 😉
Abhjeet: Meri taang kheechne mein badi khushi milthi hai tumhe 😃... waise koi toh hein mera jiska taang keech sakhthe ho...
Daya : Ha ha ... bolo apne man ko kholo... udavo mere mazak... 😳🥺
Abhijeet: Arey tum toh serious ho gaye main toh mazaak kar raha tha yaar.. 😆.
Daya : Ha ha tumko toh mazak soojhtha hai...
Abhijeet: Achcha chalo tumhari zindagi mein bhi koi na koi aayegi... don't worry.😛..

Then woh saari khane keliye dining pe laake rakhte hain...aur Heena aur Manju se baatein karthe hai...
Daya : Arey Heena... Manju... aao na khaana khaathe hai...
Heena aur Manju aake dining pe baithte hai...
Abhijeet: chalo Daya tum bhi aajavo yaar bohot bhook lagi hai...

Daya athe hai aur dekhthe hai ki Heena aur Manju kuch kha nahi rahe...
Daya: kya hua... tum log kuch lete kyun nahi... ❓

Heena aur Manju ghabrahat mein rothe dekh 😭 daya kehthe hai:
Daya : Gahbrao mat tum dono ko kuch nahi hoga iss bath ka hifasat hum kaarenge
Heena : Sir humein iss baat ki chinta nahi lekin hum agar yen waqt par himat karthe toh goli chalne se rok sakthe theh... ab toh..😔.
Abhijeet : Chodo yeh sab baatein issse ab kyaa faayda... buss Deepika theek ho jaaye is keliye prarthana karo... ab khana khao theek hai..

Sab dinner hone ke baadh sone nikalthe hai aur Abhijeeth aur daya ek room mein aur Heena aur Manju ko alag room dete hain.
Lekin yeh sab kuch kehne ke baadh bhi unko tasali nahi hoti aur woh yeh sab sochth huve newspaper padthe hain ... dono front page dekhke upset hojate hai aur... woh sochte hai ab kuch nahi bacha except sucide ...
Usi waqt raath mein abhijeet ko pyaas lagne ki wajah se woh paani peene keliye utha hai tab woh light mein bati bhujthe dekh useh kuch gadbad lagtha hai aur seedha andar gus jatha hai aur dekhthe hai ki dono ek rasi pe thadap rahe hai tabhi. Jaldi bhaagke donon ke pair pakadtha hain aur jor jor se daya ko bulatha hai...tabhi daya awaaz sunke bhaag ke aathe hai aur donon ko rasi se nikaal ke bistarh par sulaakar doctor ko phone karthe hai.

Uske baadh ACPsir ko phone karthe hai:

ACP : Kyaa hua daya itni raatko phone kiya.. sab theek toh hain?!!!!!!
Daya : Sir baath yeh hain ki Heena aur Naina ne suicide karne ki koshish ki...
ACP : Kyaa????!!! 😲 Lekin kyun... 😲

Daya sab baatein kehthe hain ACP'se
ACP : teek hai daya mein abhi aatha hoon...

Yeha doctor aathe hain daya ke ghar pe.Aur dono ko check karne ke baad daya aur abhijeet ke paas aake bolthe hain
Doctor : Unke gale ke aaspaas bohot jyaada strangled ho gaya hai... agar thodi derh aur ho jata tho maut hi ho jaathi... kher achcha hua aap ne jaldi hi bacha liya unhe... kher main yeh dawaayiyaan likh deta hoon... time pe ye de deejiye... theek ho jayenge donon... aur haan yese depression phir se ho sakhtha ...khayaal rakhyega... ho saktha hain phir se woh yesi harkat karein...
Daya aur abhijeet: Hum dekhlenge Doctor saab,Thanks Doctor.
Doctor : Thanks ki kyaa baat hain yeh toh mera kaam hai. 😊

Tab tak ACP sir aa jathe hai..
ACP : Kyaa hua Daya 😲 woh dono theek hai na..
Daya : Haan sir Lekin..🤔...
Abhijeet: Sir agar mein waqt pe jaake nahi pakadtha toh maut ho jaathi sir.
ACP : Oh my god.!!!!.. ab kahan hain woh... unko hosh aaya ki nahin??!!
Daya : Nahin sir abtak nahin Doctor ne injection lagwaya toh hai... shayad thodi der baadh aajayega...

ACP seedhe unke room mein jaathe hai aur waha ladkiyon ke paas baithke unke maateh pe haath pherthe kehthe hai:
ACP :Bichari ladkiyaan... inko yah sab achi tarah grasp karna mushkil hoga... pehle toh sundar ki dhamki aur phir kofnaak tarike se goli chalathe dhekna woh bhi apni dost ki ore aur apne aap ko jimedaar sochke toh aur jyaada bura laga hoga... Daya .. Abhijeet agli baar yesa na ho paye khayaal rakhna...
Abhijeet: Sir aakhir ye dono ladkiyaan hain sir thoda ajeeb lagega agar hum unke kamre mein unpe nazar rakhe toh...
ACP : ok toh yeh Kaajal ko bulalo yaah phir nayi officer Purbi'ko...
Abhijeet: Sir yeh Tarika ko... (a sweet boyish grin)

Daya tries to hide his smile behind... 😈😆
ACP : (looking at both Daya and Abhijeet with a grin) theek hai.. theek hai... bulalo...

Waapas jaathe hue ACP ko hasi aathi hain yeh sochke ki Abhijeet ne Tarika ka naam liya... 😆

Forensic Lab mein:

Saalunkhe: Yeh goli se ab woh Sundar ko kaise dhoondega ACP???!!!!
Taarika : Sir aap toh hamesha hi ACP sir ko challenge karne mein lage rehthe ho...
Saalunkhe: Kyaa matlab ... mein koi kaam nahi kartha sirf Pradyuman mehnath kartha hai mein yaha araam kartha hoon...
Tarika : mera kehna ka matlab yeh nahi tha sir...
ACP : Arey Saalunkhe kyaa chal raha hai??!!!!
Saalunkhe: Aaayiye aaphi ka inteaar tha...
ACP : Tum... aur mera intezaar... ho hi nahi saktha... kher yeh chodo batao kyaa pata chala...
Saalunkhe: dekho yaar yeh goli ek pistol se chali hai... waise jyaada bolne ke liye gun toh mila nahi jisse fingerprint mille... Aur Deepika kaisi hein boss??
ACP : arey yaar tumhe yeh naam kaise pata?
Saalunkhe: woh Sachin ne bataaya yaar.
ACP : achcha woh bohot serious hai... hosh nahi aaya useh abhi tak...
Tarika : Arey sir bohot dukh hotha hai jab yese case aatha hai ki dost dost ko bachane keliye aage aajaye aur woh hi iss halat mein...
ACP : ha tarkia hum kar bhi kyaa sakthe hai... jab mujrim yese ho toh...

At Hospital:

Yaha pe toh Naina hosh mein aathi hai par bohot dull aur beemar si dikh rahi hai... kapde khoon se sane hue aur roh roh ke bura haal ho chuka hai... Deepika ko woh ICU mein dekh dekh ke apne aap ko rokh nahi paa rahi hain...Tab Naina ke haaton mein nurse uske dress aur baaki cheeje thama deti hain usmein ek chitti milti hain useh... Sachin,kaajal Nikhil bohot gaur se ek saath chitti ko padthe haain usmein likha hota hai:

Naina,

Mujhe bohot pehle laga hi tha ki kuch aise hi hone waala hai... mein toh apni family ke ya kisi aur ke kaam nahi aa saki lekin meine bohot pehle socha tha ki jab mauka milega toh tumhare liye jaan bhi doongi... agar jaise mein soch rahi hoon waisa kuch ho jaata hai toh marne se pehle meri ek aakhri khwahish hai ki mein apne mata-pita se ek akhri baar milna chahthi hoon... meri taraf se mere ghar pe call karna Naina aur unko bula lene meri taraf se...

Tumhari dost

Deepika...

Yeh sab padke Naina ko bohot aasu aathe hain... tabhi Sachin,Kaajal aur Nikhil samjaathe hai ki woh useh uska ghar ka number de... aur Sachin call kartha hai Deepika ke ghar pe...

Sachin:Hello main Sachin bol raha hoon CID Mumbai se
Parent:CID???!!!!! Kahiye kyaa seva kar sakhtha hoon aapke liye??
Sachin: Ji aapki beti Deepika ko yaha city hospital mein seriously admit kiya gaya hai... toh uski ichcha thi ki woh aapko mille isliye call kiya aapko
Parent: Dekhye Sachin'ji mere liye meri beti mar chuki hai... jab woh iss dehleez paar karke Naina'ke liye ghar chodke gayi thi... uski yahi sajaa hai ki woh hamara moo dekhe bina hi mar jaaye... aur iss baat ko leke yaha call mat keejiyega aayinda...
Sachin:Lekin suniye hello...

Phone cut jaatha hai... Kyunki phone loudspeaker pe rakha tha toh sabne sunliya... aur Naina phoot phoot ke rone lagthi hain 😭 aur Kaajal useh gale laagake useh samadhaan karti hain... 🤗(yeh sochke Naina ko bura lagtha hai ki woh Deepika yeh khwahish poori nahi kar sakhthi hai) sabki aankhen namm ho jaathi hai yeh sab sunke... lekin woh apne aapko rokhte hain...

Kuch derrh baadh Sachin Naina se bataate hain...

Sachin: Dekho Naina kab tak aise baithe rahogi yeh kapde badal lo Kaajal kuch kapde laayi hain... aur kuch kha lo Naina... aise baithe rehne se ya khaana na khaane se kuch nahi hone wala...
Naina : Nahi mujhe kuch nahi khaana... mein kahi nahi jaoongi ... jabtak Deepika hosh mein nahi aathi tab tak yese hi baaitoongi...
Kaajal: Dekho aise rehne se tum beemar ho jaaogi... aur mujhe poora yakeen hai agar tum shraddha aur bhakthi se yahaan maata vaishno devi mandir jaoogi vahan toh tumhaari dost ko tumse koi nahi cheen saktha...
Naina : Sach????
Nikhil : Muchch... Ab agar Deepika hosh mein aaye toh humse complain nahi karegi ki humne uski dost ki theek tarah se dekhbhaal nahi ki... chalo kuch khalo... mandir hum kisina kisi ko bhejenge tumhare saath...
Naina : Theek hai maine chalthi hoon 😊.
Sachin: Kyaa hua yaar Nikhil usne tumhaari baat phat se maan lee 😈...
Nikhil : Arey nahi sir aap khamakha baath ka batangad banaa rahe hai Embarrassed

Nikhil looks glaringly into Naina's eyes... 😛 when she turns back...

Yeha Daya ke ghar pe Tarika bhi aayi hue hai:
Heena aur Manju ko hosh aatha hai aur Daya aur abhijeet unhe dekh kar kamre mein aathe hai
Daya : Ab kaise ho tum dono??
Heena aur Manju chup hain...
Abhijeet: (Pyaar se) dekho Heena... Manju... Jo bhi hua useh bhool javo yeh davawi kaho...
Heena aur Manju phir chup hai... Toh Abhijeet Aur Daya Ishaaro se Tarika ko donon ke saath baath karne ko kehthe hai... aur kamre se baahar jaathe hai..
Tarika :(Pyaar se) Hello Heena, Manju... Kaisi ho tum dono aaj?!!!
Heena : Theekh hai... Aaap kaun?!! 😕
Tarika : Mein aapki dost samajh lo... Dekho Heena Manju tum donon ki dosth jinda hai aur hum sab ko uske liye prarthana karni chahiye ... lekin tumne toh ...kyaa sirf yehi baath thi tunhare suicide karne ki?
Heena : (thode time ke baadh) Nahi Tarika'ji sirf yehi baath nahi hai humari suicide karne ki wajah...
Tarilka: Toh phir?
Manju : Tarika'ji darasal baath yeh humne CID ke officers se nahi bataaya... actually humein kuch saal pehle ek bacha road pe se milla tha... aur Naina ne ussi time usss bachhe ko uthaya aur usse apnane ka faisla kiya...
Tarika : Phir??!!
Heena : Tab se Naina uss bache ko apne bache ki tarah pala tha... Deepika aur humsab ne bohot kaha usse ki usse kahi aur orphanage mein dete hai yaa phir advertisement deke uske ma-baap ko ddondhte hai lekin woh apni jidh pe adi thi isliye ussne humare ek bhi nahi suni...
Manju: Phir yeh baatein Sundar ko jab pata chala toh uska khoon kholne laga...kyunki usse jyaada agar kisi aur se woh pyaar kare woh Sundar hargis bardhaash nahi karsaktha tha... isliye ek hafthe pehle ussne uss ladki ko kidnap karliya...
Tarika: Aapne kyaa naam rakha uska?? umr kitni hai bachi ki ab?
Heena: Hum usse Meena bulaathe theh aur ab uski umr 6 saal hai...
Tarika:phir kyaa hua??
Manju:Phir woh dhamki pe dhamki le aaya ki woh usse maar daalega... isliye humne milke tarkeeb banaaye ki Naina ki shaadi ki jhooti advertisement dete hai... tab yeh sab ho gaya...
Tarika: Toh abtak woh bachi uss Sundar ke haath mein hain..?!!!!
Heena: kal raath jab hum akhbaar pad rahe theh toh humari nazar ek news item pe padi ... jisme ...jisme...(rothe huve) 😭
Manju: Jisme ek bachi ki boiler mein maut ki khabar likhi thi... uske deeldol ke description se yehi laga ki woh Meena hi thi...
Tarika: Achcha... tumne yeh sab CID'se kyun nahi bataaya?? 😲
Heena: sach kahain toh hum dharam sankat mein theh aur humne socha bhi na tha ki woh yesa kar saktha hai... yeh toh tab pata chala jab usne Deepika ko goli maari...
Tarika: Acha... tumhare paas uska photo hai, Meena ka?
Manju: Haan yeh leejye...
Tarika: Ghabrao mat... ho sakhtha hai woh Meena nahi thi... mein dekhthi hoon ki tumhaari kya madath kar sakhthi hoon... theek hai...
Heena: Ji Tarika'ji...

Tarika seedhe jaake Abhijeet aur Daya se jaake bolthi hai saari baatein..Yeh sab sunke Abhijeet aur Daya shocked ho jathe hai aur ACP ko saari baatein batathe hain...Aur ACP kehthe hain ki woh seedhe bureau aaye..

At bureau:

ACP, Vivek and Fredericks ko pata chalne lagtha hai ki Nikhil is falling in love...
Vivek : Sir mein soch raha tha ki waise ki Kaajal ne achcha idea diya hi hai toh Vishno devi mandir jaana chahiye Naina ko...

ACP : Nahi nahi vivek akele nahi bhej sakhte useh yese kaise...
Vivek : Mein kaha keh raha hoon ki akele jaaye sir...
ACP : (busily looking files) toh phir ❓
Vivek : Maine toh yeh keh raha hoon ki...
ACP : Kya... ki??!!!!
Fredericks: Sir Vivek yeh kehna ...chahtha hai ki ...Nikhil ko bheja jaye sir...
ACP : hmmm... samjh raha hoon sab...

ACP speaks on phone to Nikhil

ACP :

Hello Nikhil kab jaa rahe ho vaishnodevi mandir??? Ha theek hai theek hai... jab bhi ho... tum jaoge Naina ke saath samjhe...jyaada khush hone ki baat nahi hai... uski protection ke liye bhej raha hoon tumhen...theek hai...ok ok...
Nikhil : jee ok sir...

Nikhil ke waha se nikalne ke baad ...

Fredericks: Heh bhagwaan yeh Nikhil ka pyaar toh kabool karwa doh ...is baar uso bhi niraash math karna bhagwaan...
Vivek : Arey Freddy sir iss baar bhagwaan sab kuch theek kardega...
Fredericks: Vivek too toh baat hih mat kar tum jab mooh kholthe ho tak kuch ap shakun hojata hai...
Vivek : kyaa sir aap bhi mein achi baat keh raha hoon aur aap apshakun bol rahe ho..
Fredericks:bohot acha kehte hon tum...(ghuse se)

Daya, ACP and Abijeet aathe hai bureau pe ek saath

ACP :Kyaa ho raha hai yaha pe?? 😡
Fredericks: Kuch nahi sir...
Daya : Nahi kuch toh huva hoga Vivek aur tumhaare beech mein tabhi toh tum ghussa ho...
Abhijeet : Sir humein jald se jaldh yeh Meena ki body hai kisi aur ki hain yeh dekhna chahiye sir...
Vivek : Ab yeh Meena kaun hain sir??
ACP sab kuch batateh hain unse...
Fredericks : Sir iss Sundar ka toh mein kachoomar banadoonga... ek baar haath toh aaye...
Daya : Haa Freddy ek baar uski gardaan aa jaye mere hath mein... Sir humein us bachi ki body ko hospital se yeha forensic lab ...se mangvaathe hain sir...
ACP :Kyaa hua Daya tum itne toothke baatein kar raho ho...
Daya : Sir itni choti bachi ke saath... ye sab..😔.
ACP : Mein samajhtha hoon Daya... jab apraadhi khatarnaak ho toh yeh nahi issse jyaada hi karjaata hai...

ACP Abhijeet se kehthe hain ki woh Hospital se body ko Forensic bhejne ka procedures kare...

ACP :Fredericks tum hospital...
Fredericks:Sir iss baar mujhe baksh deejiye sir..😔. mein nahi jaa sakhtha...
ACP : Toh kaun jaayega hospital ...Vivek... tum
Vivek :theekh hai Sir mein jaatha hoon ...

Sabke chehre pe ek mayoosi hai 😔 yeh sochke ki itni choti bachi ke baare mein sochke...

At forensic lab:

Yaha body ko lab pe pahoonchane ke baadh Vivek waha pe intezzar karta hain. iss baar Tarika ke absence pe Sonaali aayi hain Saalunke ko help karne ko...
Saalunke:Yeh forensic lab mein bhi kyaa kyaa karna padtha hai...
Sonaali : Saalunke iss nanhi si jaan ka scan karthe huve bohot bura lag raha hain
Saalunke:haan Sonaali, ab kyaa kare yeh hamara kaam hain na...
Sonaali :Saalunkhe meine sab test karke DNA test ke liye bheja hai...
Itne mein ACP,Daya,Abhijeet,Fredericks aathe hain...
ACP : Kyaa hua Saalunke?? Pata chala ki yeh laash Meena ki hain ya nahi??
Saalunke: Nahi yaar, DNA test aane ke baad pata chalega...
ACP : yeh khopdi se pata nahi chal saktha kyaa??
Saalunke: Haan main samajh gaya wahi kar raha hoon yaar...
ACP : Achcha...

Toh saare waha pe khade hoke Saalunkhe ko chehra recreate karthe huve dekhthe hain...aur last mein Saalunkhe ka mood down ho jatha hai

ACP : kyaa hua Saalunke??
Saalunke:Boss buri khabar hai ... yeh laash Meena ki hi haain...
ACP : laash kiski bhi ho dard toh ek hi hain... lekin ab un ladkiyon se lagaaav ho gaya hai ki aur bura lag raha hai... kher ab iska antim sanskar karna hai toh... unko bataana padega...aur Naina se bhi...
Saalunke: useh mandir waapas aane toh doh tab bata dena...

Itne mein hospital se sachin ka call aata hain ACP ko:
ACP : Ha Sachin bolo kyaa huan??
Sachin: Sir buri khabar hai ki Deepika ki haalat kharaab ho gayi hai sir aap jaldi Naina,Heena aur Manju ko khabar keejiye
ACP : Achcha ok...

Next scene mandir mein hain:
Naina aur Nikhil ek saath mandir mandir ke dwaar pahoonchne ke liye seediyan chadrahe hain peeche bhajan gaathe hue bohot saare bhaktjan aarahe hai...bohot jyaada chalthe chalthe neethu thakh jaathi hai usne dostke jaldi theek hone ke liye mannat ki hothi hein ki bhagwaan ke dwaar pe pahoonchne ke liye chapal nahi pehnegi... thabi chote chote pathar ka tukda pairon mein ghuskar khoon nikhalne laga yeh dekhke nikhil kehtha hai.

Nikhil: arey Naina tumhare pairon se toh khoon nikal raha hain..chalo chalo yaha baitoh mein dekhtha hoon...

Naina baith ke sochchthe rone lagthi chupke😭 se...
Nikhil khoon ko handkerchief'se pochthe hue aur pani dalte hue Naina ki aur dekhta hai aur poochtha hai...

Nikhil: Kyaa huan ❓... bohot dard ho raha hai kya???!!!!!
Naina: Haaa par chott lagne se nahi apni dost ke baare mein sochke... woh mere liye yese... aur mein...
Nikhil: Hum bhagwaan ke darrh pe hai aur yesi baatein mat karo... waise kehthe hai ki yaha joh apne sache dill se muraadh kartha hai uski ichcha poori hoti hai... tumhaari bhi ho jaye ki...
Naina: Sach 😲
Nikhil: Muchch... 😃

Dono haste hue... 😆
kehthe kehthe woh upar mandir pahoonch jaathe hai aur waha mandir pujaari kehthe hai...

Pujaari: Yeha ddheron bhakht apni parishaniyon ka hal nikhalne aur shaanthi pane ke liye aathe hain... tum apni joh bhi pareshaani ho maiya sab pareshanniyaan theek kar degi... Poori shraddha se apni mannat maangoh Maaiya sab poori kardegi...

Naina emotionally apni ankhen bandh karke... prarthana karthi hain... lekin Nikhil uske aur hi dekh raha hai...

Pujaari: Yeh kaun hein beti tumhare saath tumhara boyfriend hai kyaa????!!!
Naina : !!!!!!?????? 😲🤔
Nikhil : Haan mein uska...
Naina : Arey nahi pujaari'ji..🤔. yeh mere saath aaye hain busss...
Pujaari : Phir bhi tum dono ki jodi khoob achi hai...😊

Nikhil blushes... ☺️ Naina thodi sharmajati hain sunke... ☺️😳

Mandir se waapas aathe hue car mein Naina poochthi haain
Naina: Tum pujari se kyaa kehne waale theh???
Nikhil: yahi ki mein tumse bohot pyaar katha hoon...
Naina: kyaa??? aap yeh kyaa keh rahe hain?? Mein ... aap mere baare mein kyaa jaaante hain???
Nikhil: Mein kuch nahi janna chahtha tum jasi bhi ho mein tumse bohot pyaar kartha hoon... shaadi karogi mujse...
Naina:Mein bhi aapko pasand karthi hoon par meri ek sharth hain...
Nikhil: sharth kaisi sharth???
Naina: Deepika'ne mere liye apne ma-baap ko chodke mera saath diya mere khaatir bohot saha aur goli bhi khaayi ... jiss tarah aapne baataaya agar bhagwaan ne meri dost ko maut se bachata hai toh mein chahoongi ki mein uska saath doon... phir chaaye uske parents ne useh apnane mana hi kyun na kiya ho... mera farz banta hai ki mein uska saath doon ...
Nikhil:Mein samaj gaya Naina... ab tumhe kuch kehne ki jaroorath nahi...Deepika bohot khushnasib hain jo tum jaise dost mila..😊. Mein intezaar kar sakhtha hoon ... koi jaldi nahi hain Naina... Agar tum chaho toh mein bhi madath karoonga uske liye ladka doondne ke liye...
Naina: (muskurathe huve) Thank you so much ki aap...
Nikhil: Aaap nahi mujhe Nikhil kehke bulao mujhe Naina...
Naina: Ok.Thank you so much Nikhil...😊

Tabhi Nikhil ko phone aatha hai aur ACP saari baate baatate hain ki meena aur uske dost ke suicide ke baare mein bhi... aur kehthe hain ki jab tak woh waha nahi pahoonchte woh yeh sab usse na bataaye...

Nikhil: Ok sir theek hai sir...
Naina: Kyaa hua???
Nikhil: Humein hospital jaana padega Deepika ki haalat kharaab ho raha hai...
Naina: (jor se rone lagthi hain) 😭 jaldi chalye Nikhil ...

Sab hospital mein intezaar kar rahe hothe hain ,... naina jaise nikalthi hai ACP sir sabse pehle Meena ke baare mein kehthe hain aur kehthe hain ki Deepika ko kuch bhi na bataaye...Naina rothe rothe hi Deepika se milne ke liye bhaagthi hain...waha Andar dekhthi hain ki Deepika bistar par baiti hain...Naina bhaagke Deepika ko gale lagaathi hain...

Naina: Deepika...

Paagal itna rulaya mujhe tumne mein kabhi maaf nahi karoongi...(kehthe kehthe jor se rone lagthi hain) 😭

Yeh bohot emotional moment hotha hai sabke liye...

Deepika: Tumhare liye toh meri jaan bhi...
Naina : (Deepika ke moo pe haath rakhkar) yesa kabhi math kehna... mein ab tumhare bagaair zinda nahi reh sakhthi...

Heena aur Manju bhi khushi se rone laghte hain 😭...aur unke saath CID bhi...

Deepika se saab baatein karne lagthe hain :
Naina : Yeh lo Deepika tumhare liye maine yeh prasaad laaya hain vaishno devi mandir se...
ACP : Achcha Deepika ek baat batao tumsab ne Police'se complaint kyun nahi ki.
Deepika: Sir humne toh complaint kiya tha par koi response properly nahi milla toh akhir hum kab tak police station ke chakkar kaattheh sir... isliye humein majbooran khud yeh kadam uttaana pada...
Daya : Acha toh tumhe kaise pata tha ki Sundar bhaag'ke aayega yeh sunkar ki Naina ki shaadi honewaali hain?
Deepika :Sir aakhir woh Naina ko paagalon ki tarah pyaar kartha hai mujhe andaaaza tha ki woh jaroor ghuse se paagal ho jaayega aur aayega jaroor ... aur socha tha woh Meena ko layega... waise Meena aapko mili kyaa??
Naina :Nahi Deepika Meena ko woh dhoondh rahe hain...
Abhijeet:Tum abhi araam karo... hum baadh mein bhi baath kar sakhthe hain...
Deepika: Ji...

Sabhi CID team waha se nikalthe hai...

Deepika:Kyaa baat hain Naina... sab ke chehron pe maayoosi hain...
Naina : Aisi koi baat nahin hai yaar... tum araam karo mein Doctor se milke aathi hoon... tum Heena aur Manju se baatein karo...

Aur Deepika aur woh baatein karne lagthe hain...

Yaha Naina Doctor se milthi hain:
Doctor: Humne toh umeed hi kho diya tha ki Deepika bach paayegi... Anyways itz a miracle. 😊..iss waqt Deepika ko jyaada dukh bhari baatein na sunaya jaye toh achcha rahega... usse jitna khush rakha jaye utna acha hai..
Naina: Theek hai ... Thank you Doctor..😊

Ussi shaam ko CID ke sabhi Meena ki antimsanskar ke liye upasthith hothe hai... aur sab apni akhri widaai karne keliye khade hai...lakdiyaan meena ke upar rakhe jaathe hai aur ACP aake kehthe hai Naina aur doston se ki woh akhri baar . Meena ka chehra dekhti hain..tab sab aake dekhte hain aur uske upar Naina ,Heena aur Manju apne aap ko rokh nahi paateh 😭 aur Meena ...Meena kehke chilane lagthe hai. .. tab Kaajal aur Purbi aake unhe doorh lejate hain aur unko santhwana dene ki koshish karte huve gale lagaathe hai .Chita ko jalaaya jaatha hai aur sab door khade rone lagthe hai.🤗.. Lekin Naina ki cheeke sunai pad rahi hain..... tab Nikhil jo bohot derr se door khada usko dekhraha tha useh aake gale lagatha hai... 😲🤗

Aur Naina jore jore se karaahne lagthi hai aur behosh ho jaathi hai 🥱. ..Nikhil uspar paani daalke usseh hosh mein laata hain aur Daya sir ke ghar pe chodtha hai aur Sachin,Nikhil,Purbi aur Kaajal hospital jaathe haain Deepika ki security keliye...

Lekin Deepika iss sab baaton se bekhabar hospital mein leti hoti hai ... useh iss baat ka ehsaas bhi nahi hotha ki Meena mar chuki hai... 🤢..
Deepika Kaajal aur Purbi se poochthi hai ki Naina aur baaki dost kaha gaye tab Woh kehthe hai ki Naina sabke saath Daya sir ke yaha gaye hai aur agle din aa jayenge...

Purbi: waise kyunki woh vaishnodevi mandir gayi thi toh uske pairon se khoon nilkal raha tha toh useh humne hi majbooran rest karne keliye waha bheja hai
Deepika:Yeh baat mujhe pata nahi tha...
Purbi aur Kaajal Nikhil ko dekhke muskuraathe hain aur Nikhil starts blushing.

Ek do din baad At bureau:
ACP aur poora team bureau mein baaiteh yeh soch rahe hai ki Sundar ko kaise pakada jaaye...
ACP : Iss darinde ko kisi bhi haalat mein pakadna chahiye...lekin kaise...???
Daya:Sir hum Deepika hi tarkeeb phir se karthe hain
ACP: Yes,... Chalo Nikhil tumhaari shaadi karvadethe hai Naina se

Nikhil bohot khush ho jaatha hain and also blushes...😳☺️ 😃

Naina aur Nikhil ki shaadi ka ek aam advertisement diya jaatha hai ki kal shaadi hone waali hain 12:30 ko...aur Naina Daya sir ke yaha baithe pareshaan ho jaathi hai...

Daya : Kyaa hua Naina bohot pareshaan lag rahi ho??!!! 😕
Naina: Nahi Sir, Mein actually Deepika keliye bohot pareshaan hoon... woh waha akeli ... mujhe uske paas hona chahiye tha... 😔
Daya: Itni phikar mat karo woh Deepika se kahenge ki tumhare pairon se khoon nikalne se tum rest le rahi ho...
Abhijeet: Waise bhi wahan humare officers bhi haan aur Nikhil bhi hain waise...
Naina sharmajaathi hai ☺️... aur Heena aur Manju yeh dekhke muskuraane lagthe hain...😉😊

Next day shaadi ki tayaariyaan ho rahi 🥳hain yese lag raha hai ki aski shaadi ho...Nikhil bohot saj dhajke taiyaar ho raha hai aur Daya sir aur Abhijeet uski khoob khichai kar rahe hain...

Daya: Arey Nikhil tumhaari barbaadi hone jaa rahi hai aur tum khush ho rahe ho...😆
Abhijeet: haan haan Nikhil yese mauke sabko nahi milthe shaadi ke jode mein naam ke vaasthe ghusne ka... warna asli shaadi hoti toh ladke ka mooh shaadi ke baadh bandh ho jata hai 😆
Nikhil:Arey sir yahaa mein iss ek problem mein hoon ki Kahi woh sachmuch Naina ko chot na pahoonchaye... aur aap hain ki... mazaak sooj raha hai... 😡
Daya: Arey Nikhil tum toh serious ho rahe ho hum toh majaak kar rahe theh.. 😛
Vivek: Lagtha hai Sir ki Nikhil sach mein bohot pyaar ❤️ kar baitha Naina se...
Sachin: Haan Sir Pyaar yesi cheez hai ki kisi ko bhi ho jayega 😍.

Yeha dulhan ke yaha:
Naina:Kaajal'di mujhe toh bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hain...
Kaajal:Ghabrao mat Naina hum sab hain yahaan aur tumhare dost hain Deepika bhi aayegi...
Naina:Deepika,woh kaise?!!
Purbi: Useh wheelchair par layenge kyun ki woh abi chal nahi sakthi na... isliye...Deepika aur tum sab mandap pe hoge taaki hum sab tumhari aur dhyaan rakh sakeh...
Naina: Kahi aapsab suchmuch mein meri shaadi toh nahi karvarahe hain... 😉
Kaajal: Kyun tum pyaar nahi karthi Nikhil se ??!!!!! 😲
Naina: Yesi baath nahin hai didi... lekin mein Deepika ki shaadi ke pehle nahi shaadi kar sakhthi... 😔
Purbi:ghabraane ki koi baath nahi hai... tunhaari shaadi se pehle hi Sundar aayega jaroor aayega 😳

Deepika, ACP aur Fredericks aajathe hai mandao meinaur hall mein suchmuch bohot khachakach log bhare hain jaise satchmuch shaadi ho rahi ho... Daya aur Abhijeet sir bohot handsome lag rahe hai kurthe pyjame mein bohot chamak rahi Hain saara CID 😎.Kaajal aur Purbi bhi kuch kam nahin hain achi chamak damak saadi pehna hai unhone. 😎..Dulha Nikhil mandap mein aake baait jaatha hai
Panditji:Kanya ko bulaayiye...
Naina bohot sajdahjke aathi hain poori tarah se sundar dikh rahi hain Laal joda pehne hue hai, joor jor se dill thadak raha hai ❤️ aur Nikhilki nazre Naina ki aur jaathi hain.. 😛. aur woh apni nazar hataa hi nahi paa raha hai...

Pandit:

Mangalam bhagwaan vishnum mangalam ... mangalam kundali...mangalaye tanohari...om...
ACP sir aur saari CID ki nazreen charon aur idhar udhar dekh rahe hain
Pandit: Ab pheren leejiye...

dono war wadhu pheren lena shuru karthe hein... 4... 5...6...7 ...

Pandit: Ab var dhahini aur aur vadhu baayi aur khade ho jaaye ... ye leejiye mangal soothr...

Nikhil mangal soothr letha hai aur pehnane ko aage aatha hain tab Daya dekhthe hain ki koi khada goli chalaane wala hai aur woh jaldi bhaagke Nikhil aur Naina ko neeche giradete haain aur baaki sab log Sundar ke peeche bhaagthe hain...
bohot bhagam bhaag ke baadh Sundar pakda jaatha hai...

At bureau:
Daya sir ek laafa maarthe hai Sundar ko aur poochthe hai..
Daya : Tumne uss choti bachi ko kyun maara...😡
Sundar: Mere sar par khoon sawaar tha aur mein hargiss bardaash nahi kar saktha ki meri Naina kisi aur se pyaar kare... isliye maine usse maut ke ghaat utaar diya...
Abhijeet: Pyaar baantne ka naam hain cheenkar paaneka nahi... aur tumhara naam Sundar nahi Badsoorat hona chahiye tha...😡
ACP : Kitni badsoorati se tumne bachi ko maara... aur toh aur Naina ki izzat pe daag lagaaya sms se aur Useh maarne ki koshish ki... Tumne toh Deepika ki bhi zindagi daav pe daali...
Daya : Tumhain toh maut ki saza milni chahiye... par afsos aajkal maut ki saza jyaada diya nahi jaa raha,..

Sundar jor jor se paagalon ki tarah hasta hain...

ACP : Fredericks le jao isse...
Fredericks: Ji sir... Chalo...

2 months ke baad:

Deepika baisakhi pe aathi hai...Naina,Heena aur Manju ke saath hain...😊

Deepika:Sir kyaan mein andar aa sakthi hoon 😃

Tab ACP,Daya,Abhijeet,Vivek,Kaajal,Purbi,Sachin,Fredericks,Kaajal ki nazren bahar hoti hain...

ACP : Arey aao aao Deepika,Naina,Heena, Manju...aao baithe...
Daya :Deepika tum abhi tak theek nahi huvi...
Deepika:Nahi sir abhi poori tarah theek hone mein time lagega... ab Hospital se discharge ho gayi hoon busss checkup keliye jaana padtha hai...
Abhijeet: Achcha...

Heena : Sir waise Tarika'ji kaisi hain??

Abhijit Blushes ☺️

Daya : Woh Forensic Lab mein hain..

Manju : Forensic Lab Mein ??!!!!!! 😲

Abhijeet: Haan woh Foreignsic Doctor haain... hamaari...

ACP looks at Abhijeet's Expressions...

Daya : Waise humne as a friend waha Tarika ko laaya taaki aap joh humse chupa rahi hain woh bhi bataaye...

Manju : Oh!!!!

Abhijeet is in his own world now... 😍🤪

Daya:(Disturbs in between) Aham aham... 😛

Abhijeet comes out of his dream

Deepika: Sir meine suna ki aapne bulaya kyaa baat hai sir???
ACP : Dekho Deepika humne decide kiya hain ki tum sab Daya ke ya abhijeet ke ghar ke paas rahoge taaki aayinda yeh haathse tumhare saath na ho...
Deepika: Lekin Sir hum... kaise...🤔
Daya : Kuch nahi bologe tum log ab tum humari family jaise ho humare liye ... toh humara kehna nehi manoge kyaaa... 😕
Deepika: Sir ab aap itna kehrahe hai toh na kaise kar sakhte hain 😊
ACP :Toh apna saaman nikaalo aur yeh Nikhil, Kaajal aur Sachin jao inke saath...
Sab kehthe hai: Ji sir..

Deepika,Naina, Heena aur Manju CID ke saath jaathe hai aur samaan pack karne keliye madath karthe hai...

Tab Nikhil Sachin se kehtha hai
Nikhil:Sir mein Naina ke saath bahaar jaana chahtha hoon.😛..
Sachin: Hmm tum shuru ho gaye... acha khayaal rakhna agar ACP sir ko pata chala woh mera kachoomar bana denge... jaldi aa jana Nikhil...

Nikhil gaadi shuru karthe huve Naina ko aageh bithake poochtha hai...😉

Nikhil: Toh Long drive pe chale kyaaa... 😉
Naina Hasti hain... 😆 Aur yahaan se shuru hoti hai ek anokhi prem kahaani 😃

My Conclusions on my story:(Sorry i used BIG font to emphasise the importance)

Meine issh kahani mein bohot saare different twist aur turns laaya hai.Yeha ho saktha hai ki yese scenes CID mein na dikhaayi padeh.Jaise Nikhil pyaar mein padraha hai... Kaajal aur baaki CID emotional hoteh hai...etc.yeh isliye kyunki har CID ke artist ko apne chance milna chahiye mere hisaab se... Mujhe bhi pehle woh pasand nahi theh... but now they are a full fledged part of CID so i think keeping of our partiality sab ko chance diya hai kyunki jab har chahracter pyaar mein pad raha hain toh why not Nikhil. ??😛...Mein yaha pe bohot emotional aur filmy huvi hoon 😭 i hope aap woh sequences dislike na kare... Kyunki yeh thodi sachi kahani hain... i had to include some more emotional scene. Aur sach kahoon toh yeh sab meine apni dream mein dekha jab mere friend ne apne saath huve yeh sms incident bataaya... baaki baatein kaalpanik hai aur sach se koi vaastha nahi.Kyunki meine sapne mein apne aapko bhi dekha isliye Story mein khud ko include kiya hai.Mujhe apni usss dost pe naaz 👍🏼👏 hai jisne bohot bahaduri se uss paagal ashique kaa samna kiya... Isliye iske jariye mein unsabhi bahaduron ko salaam karna chahoongi jo pal pal apne saahas ka pradarshan karthe hai. Mere hisaab se hum sab mein ek hero hain aur hum sabko usse jagaane ki jaroorat hoti.I hope ki meri kahaani aapmeinse kuch logon ko zindagi mein bahaduri se aage baddne ki prerna mille.Kyunki meri zindagi mein bhi mein asli hero toh nahin lekin koi film ya iss dost ke baare mein sochthi hoon toh ek himmat milthi hai mujhe... Umeed karthi hoon woh ek energy aapko bhi mili hogi.Mein agkli baarh sapna dekhoo toh jaroor kahaani likhoongi.Tab tak ke liye... Alvida... Keep dreaming kyaa pata kabhi na kabhi aapke sapne sach jo jaaye... waise sapney dekhne mein kyaa jaata hai...

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woh iss story ki 3 likes 👍🏼 aur 3 dislike 👎🏼 ke baare mein bataaye... agar jyaada like and dislike aspect ho toh bhi koi problem nahi... Please give me something more than i loved the story comment and ofcourse.

Please keep aside your dislikes for your characters on CID.

Thank you 😃 ... I hope you all liked the story 😊

Edited by deepz28888 - 14 years ago

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Chintan

@ArRoGaNT-CHINTs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

At firstly Deepy i would like to tell you...

Likes :-
Because the way you have described , then your emotions and most importantly. in which color you have written itself said too much then script..
Your color choice is quite good...
And You have smartly shown the real friendship.

Dis likes :-
CID With emotional attachment its a big barrier...
Ultimately temple part is out of CID's world..
Detection level is so much minor...

I would like to tell you keep it up...👏👏👏

Edited by Chints09 - 14 years ago