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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

@deepika di- you done a fabulous job di👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

keep it up

hats off 2 u👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Parul

@..Candy..

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Hey Dreamy..
Very Nice Story..
👏 ⭐️
and as u wanted,Here is my brief Comment..

Firstly,i liked the Duo scene very much though it was Short bt Was Sweet..
and the Way they Handled the Case was also very well written..
bt I want to say plz use only one language for describing the Scene,Hinglish is confusing at times..
and other thing ac to me,CID people wont ask the Victims to go to any kind of Temple because they Show that they r nt dependnt on God..
Bt the both above things are my personal review and hope u dnt mind at all..

Oh,I thing i forgot,in one parra,u showd ACP sir talking to Nikhil on phone abt going wd Naina to temple and then u wrote sumthing like 'After Nikhil exit or Nikhil k jaane k baad' that line is quite confusing at least for me,bcz if he was on phone,how can he exit??
plz explain it.. 😕

Btw ur story had a new flavour,i really loved that..
again,a gr8 job done ⭐️

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

I want to confess something...And that is, I'm feeling that I have no quality, I mean creativity. See, we have many creative friends here. When I see their creations, I feel like feeling ashamed. But, kya hua agar meri koi goon nahi, meri dosto ki to hain😃.

Very very well written Deepz. You too are gonna rock our forum like GD, Shiva (new comers) are rocking now. Great job yaar.

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Hey Tanni dear, Don't say such words dear. If there are no readers here we writers don't have anything here. Mein yeseh maanthi hoon ki sab mein kuch na kuch qualities hoti hai.. koi bhi bekaar nahi hotha.Mere liye kum se kum mere saare dost special hain ialiye mein kabhi bhi unseh yesi baatein nahi sehsakthi.Seriously meine kabhi socha bhi na tha ki mein kabhi isssh thread pe kahani likhoongi.Aaapsab ka prothsaahan hih hamari shakhti hai dear. Isliye kehrahi hoon Tumhe bhi koi creativity yaa speciality hogi bussh yeh baat hai ki tumhe pata nahi woh kyaa hai... ek na ek din tunhe samajh mein aajayega.Don't mind tumhara waqt bhi aayega.Your day will come.You will get your chance.😊😃

Edited by DreamyDeepz28 - 14 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: TanniSDaya
I want to confess something...And that is, I'm feeling that I have no quality, I mean creativity. See, we have many creative friends here. When I see their creations, I feel like feeling ashamed. But, kya hua agar meri koi goon nahi, meri dosto ki to hain😃.
Very very well written Deepz. You too are gonna rock our forum like GD, Shiva (new comers) are rocking now. Great job yaar.

TANNI... its really HURTFUL comment😭😭... arry yaar agar AUDIENCE... VIEWERS... READERS... LISTENERS na hun tou HUM CREATIVE PEOPLE na ZERO hun... tum LOGUN ki FEEDBACK... WAH WAH... CLAPS... HAPPINESS... TEARS hee humara ASSETS hain... aur WOHI IMPORTANT hain... warna HUM kuch nahi... REMEMBER dis😃!!!

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: gadhadada

TANNI... its really HURTFUL comment😭😭... arry yaar agar AUDIENCE... VIEWERS... READERS... LISTENERS na hun tou HUM CREATIVE PEOPLE na ZERO hun... tum LOGUN ki FEEDBACK... WAH WAH... CLAPS... HAPPINESS... TEARS hee humara ASSETS hain... aur WOHI IMPORTANT hain... warna HUM kuch nahi... REMEMBER dis😃!!!

very well said dada

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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neharaniii

@neharaniii

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Awesum story Deepika👏👏

Daya and Abhi scenes are nice...main aise duo scenes epi me bhi dkhna chahti hu.😊

And yeah,tmhari style ki filmy thi story😆
Nikhil was btr than real CID epi

Deepika and Naina made me emotional😭😭

Decent story,and good scripting.All have equal dialogs.
And hope ki hum dono ki friendship bhi Deepika Aur Naina ki tarah hamesha strong rahegi😃😃

I will edit my review after thinking more on ur story😛

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Chashmish

@VevaH

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

NICE CREATION !

Mind blowing !👏

WOW !

SUPERB DiDi jee!

Hats off 2 u ,👏

Awsom Script 😊

It was full of EMOTIONZ ☺️

All the Dialogues r created so Nicely😊

The Story makez meee Sad at some places😭,but also make meee Laughed at funny situationz

The script linez of ABHIJEET N DAYA r tooo Gud.❤️

The Dialogue Sneyrio btwn Freddy sir & Vivek was Perfect !😎

I thought there is no dislikez in the story ,😊

FIRE WORK PRODUCTION must hav a look at this 😉

THEY REALLY NEED GUD SCRIPTZ TO RAISE THE SHOW😃

THANX 🤗🤗

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zehra

@looooooser

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

👏
ii👏hii,,,, storyyy is sooo nice 👏👏👏👏👏

i am biggg😳 fan of daya he is soo nice

great jobb 👍🏼

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Dislikes :

1. d story luked more lyk a film script dan a CID epi.

2. CID team kab se bhagwaan pe depend karne lag gaye ??

3. how cum ACP support his officers going out 4 bhagwaan darshan ??

4. r naina & neetu d same lady ? i was getting confused.

5. abhi-tarika se jee nahi bhada to ab nikhil ki bhi luv story banwa li tumne ??

6. dont use dat green color in d disclaimer above d story, it hurts d eyes.

7. too much of emotional drama.

Likes :

1. d plot was a strong one & dealt wid a really grave issue.