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Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

@polly How Dare you??????

If you dont like the story then dont read it and dont comment

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Daydreaming

@Daydreaming

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Hiii... Read the story now. The story was a bit long and some parts seemed complicated, but since it was your first story, i appriciate your efforts. I liked your story.. It was based on friendship and sacrifice!! you said it is inspired by your friends. Is it a real story??
It was really a good attempt .. 👏

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Amna

@dayakhtar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

@POLLY DEAR...

u r pointed out many dislikes... n it was upto u obviously...

but u shud b polite instead of being harsh wid a new writter... cz its our support n feedback dt makes 'em polish tehmselves... so it shud positively enforcing rather than being negatively affecting d skills of d writer to such an xtent dt... one quits...

d selection of diction while giving feedback... reallly matters...

@RASHI DEAR...

calm down dear... everyone hs freedom of xpression... but u shud take it positively...

hope u both ll consider...

regards

Edited by dayakhtar - 13 years ago

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

@ dayaakhtar :

plz dont get me wrong. yes, der r several aspects in d story dat i didnt lyk, but i didnt intend to hurt d writer..knowing dat d person is a 1st timer. i hv just put my observations & opinions in point-wise format. dats it !! i cant lie to people saying ' gud, gr8, brilliant ' etc etc wen i actually dont lyk dem.

@ deepz :

plz dont tk my comments otherwise. i rqst u to take it positively, specially d "mandir darshan " part, cz d kind of personality ACP Pradyuman is , he will never like his juniors going to pray to god to get courage & all. i hope u get my piont.

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: polly_03
@ dayaakhtar :

plz dont get me wrong. yes, der r several aspects in d story dat i didnt lyk, but i didnt intend to hurt d writer..knowing dat d person is a 1st timer. i hv just put my observations & opinions in point-wise format. dats it !! i cant lie to people saying ' gud, gr8, brilliant ' etc etc wen i actually dont lyk dem.

@ deepz :

plz dont tk my comments otherwise. i rqst u to take it positively, specially d "mandir darshan " part, cz d kind of personality ACP Pradyuman is , he will never like his juniors going to pray to god to get courage & all. i hope u get my piont.

Hey Polly dear let me tell you the story i have written is a dream which haunted me in my dreams so i wrote the story the same way which i saw I could have changed the story style... But to calm down the dreams I see I with knowingly wrote such a story just to ward off the dreams I see such as saving my friend . I know what ACP and Team will have in mind because I know what character they have... And I did warn the readers of that, that the Real CID may not behave this way. So it was not at all polite of you to say this way.As i spent at 6 months time to write this story and I knew how readers will comment.But still almost everyone were cool in comments even they criticised about things I loved it.I agree that I did write that there need to be 2 likes and 2 dislikes thinking that everyone will put equal likes and dislikes.But you have insulted me by actually writing more dislikes than likes. I also agree that I did PM you to comment. But I don't agree with your way of commenting . If everyone start doing like this on IF it had be rather harsh ed me on writers like me.If you hated this story that much I would have loved it if you would have rather left the story uncommented.It hurt me a lot. I considered you as a friend just like the others and you treat me this way??? Polly don't feel bad but someone commented on a long time taken written story of your's this way,would you have been able to take it this cool??? I don't think so Polly. Polly you can understand only when someone does such a thing to you.This is difficult for me to avoid or take it cool. I tried to avoid but you have forced me to react. A Sorry feeling won't ward off the pain you gave it. It hurt me a lot... Now I realise how much the actual Creative writer's of CID have to bear. Hats off to them, for the amount of criticism they bear... And as the case of you Polly... Please don't do this to anyone it hurts a lot 😭...

Sorry My friendz Soni,Rashi,Dada,Saakshi,Dayakhtar,Chints,Naomi,Shiva,Shruti,Shreela...

I couldn't take it anymore... (I hope no one has any opinion about my using that crying sign... Because it really hurt me that much)

I agree the mistake is all MINE ... Is that enough for you Polly???Sorry for this type of story writing.I have given the required explanation.See even if you hurt me I am talking softly to you, because I can't hurt anyone with my words.because I am basically a soft person unless or untill someone provokes me.I know as a writer on IF i should have remaines cool ...But I just couldn't take it anymore...I really didn't expect such a comment from any person here... thats why felt really bad... SORRY EVERYONE...SORRY FOR EVERYTHING...

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Dislikes :

1. d story luked more lyk a film script dan a CID epi.

2. CID team kab se bhagwaan pe depend karne lag gaye ??

3. how cum ACP support his officers going out 4 bhagwaan darshan ??

4. r naina & neetu d same lady ? i was getting confused.

5. abhi-tarika se jee nahi bhada to ab nikhil ki bhi luv story banwa li tumne ??

6. dont use dat green color in d disclaimer above d story, it hurts d eyes.

7. too much of emotional drama.

Likes :

1. d plot was a strong one & dealt wid a really grave issue.

Originally posted by: polly_03
@ dayaakhtar :

plz dont get me wrong. yes, der r several aspects in d story dat i didnt lyk, but i didnt intend to hurt d writer..knowing dat d person is a 1st timer. i hv just put my observations & opinions in point-wise format. dats it !! i cant lie to people saying ' gud, gr8, brilliant ' etc etc wen i actually dont lyk dem.

@ deepz :

plz dont tk my comments otherwise. i rqst u to take it positively, specially d "mandir darshan " part, cz d kind of personality ACP Pradyuman is , he will never like his juniors going to pray to god to get courage & all. i hope u get my piont.

Hey polly, I liked your frankness regarding my story. I have written this story in different mood. I put a lot of effort and imagination,Seriously saying this story was a dream which was haunting me day and night about myself trying to save my friend from a dangerous man.This happend ever since I heard the story out of her.So it was my effort to ward off the haunting feelings I had in mind of the dangerous experience my friend experienced.I did mention that this story is different and actually CID may not act this way in real.I also agree that I did mention that 2 likes and 2 dislikes be mentioned about the story.I know very well that CID won't give importance to going to temple and things like that but don't forget they did give it importance when Daya got injured. I know ACP won't react that way but since my dream showed me all this inorder to ward off these daydreams I had to post the story in its original form.I could have edited it but i believed that i keep it in its original form as the dream.Its all my fault I agree..Is that enough for you Polly??!!!But since You have given more dislikes than like it is rather a big insult you have done.I can't take it that cool. You have destroyed all my hard work by just mentioning the dislikes. I toiled atleast 6 months with this dream as I did predict that thiz story won't be liked by any because CID won't have such a character as this.I put extra effort to make it comfortable for readers to be able to read the story comfortably...and I get this for all my strain I took day and night. Sorry Polly but a sorry feeling won't work for me because You said too much about my story... and a sorry type feeling won't ward off the pain you gave me. Hey Polly tell me one thing if someone had commented on your hardworked story such rudely would you take it that cool. I don't think so dear.But if you actually hated my story Iam very sorry.See even you hurt me alot I am talking softly.Itz because I can't hurt anyone,Because I know how it feels when someone talks rudely..I have experienced it.You won't realise polly untill or unless you experience it.

Sorry Soni,Dayakhtar,Shreela,Dada,Chints,Shruti,Naomi,Candy,Rashi. I could'nt take it anymore. As after listening to this comment I realise the pain the writer's after they get criticisms for their story.Hats off to them. I know as a writer on IF i should have taken it cool but I couldn't.Sorry Sorry everyone sorry for everything.Sorry Polly if you felt bad I don't know how to say this more softly...

I felt very bad very very sad too... Never expected such a comment on IF... 😭

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Soonaali

@Soonaali

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

First this comment is restricted to DD not to anyone else...

DD Its ur RIGHT to write a story and post it on IF...

so the others have right to read and comment in the manner they want to...

Its part and parcel of the right of expression ur views on IF...

DD I know how much it hurts when somebody comments in reverse manner... But u needs to be strong to take a lesson from each this type of comments...

and one more thing its upto u... how u take all this comments... take it in possitive manner... it will helps u to be calm and cool...

and also read the comments before that also... u got one this type of comment... but u have so many other comments too...

My all best wishes are with u

and ya no need to say sorry to me... i can understand... 😊

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Calm down everyone please!!

First of all Deepika.. please do not get so much hurt.. Its just opinion of one person.. When you put something on public forum its obvious you will get positives but many negatives too.. This shouldnt mean getting hurt in this way.. See all the people who commented and appreciated your efforts.. Is one negative more important to you than so many positives? Please think about that..

Now coming to the story..

ITs really a great effort!! 😃 👍🏼

A good plot... But many emotional scenes too.. I m not much of a emotional person.. so found it bit difficult..

Overall story is great.. But nikhil is difficult for me to digest. Please go for someone else next time 😆

Keep writting stories.. You have very great idea and very emotional side too.. Just try to convert it into strength and not a weakness (The last line is for both you and your story)