CHANDRA'S NANDHINI CHAPTER IX updated in page 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatshweta




My thoughts on Chandra was Ditto Ditto .
So, I am not going to repeat.

So far, he has been point blank in putting his emotions on display - he has not been able to either Forget Her or Forgive Her.

There is no revenge taking seen from Nandini side. She is repeatedly escaping the situation. So, it does not appear that she is an innocent victim - that she is bearing it all to repay only her father's debts. Else, she would have back-answered him long back.

She dint answer any of his direct questions about her husband. No records submitted during employment regarding her marital status. Nor Jagan able to find the secret details about her past.
May be, that's where Chandra still has hopes of reviving his relationship with her ?




MAY BE ...wait yaar
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VI chapter getting ready..do not miss it
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CHANDRA'S NANDHINI

Chapter VI


Nandini was arranging flowers in a vase in one of the rooms, heard a sweet voice behind her

" What a lovely flowers..aunti..."

She turned and saw a chubby faced beautiful kid of three years.

She was so surprised to see a child there

" Oh dear who are you..in which room you are staying..where is papa and mamma"

" Aunty I am Shravan,,what is your name?"

" My name is Nandini..come...mamma will be worried..I will take you to your room"

" no aunty.Chandra uncle is there"

By the time they reached Chandra's suite, he came out and saw them together

She turned to get away from him in the earliest possible..but he called her

" Miss Nandini..why are you in a hurry..if we would have got married, a boy like him would have been yours..do you feel jealous..by the way you don't have any children of your own with that 2 lacks bride groom...tell me where is he?"

" My husband..his whereabouts...it is none of your business sir"

Like a roaring lion, he got hold of her"

" is it none of my business...you have guts to talk to me like that..you..you are a fake..made my life miserable"

" Not me..you made my life miserable..leave me now..made me clean your toilets..what do you want me to do further"

. She retorted.

Hearing the voices, Mallika came there and with false concern asked

" Chandra..what is this..hei Nandini..I know people like you..you want to charm him by your looks..Chandra..send her away..she is a disgrace here"

" alright Baby...she is not cleaning my rooms properly..I got angry..you know every thing should be perfect for me..she often misplaces my things"

" Oh Chandra,I will allot Malti to your room..and transfer her to some other wing"

" No no I have given her strict warning..we will consider her transfer later"

"Oh my poor love...how much you suffer by these inefficient menials"

" Shall I arrange your things in your room"

" No dear..don't bother..I will make this lady do the things properly..you carry on baby with your work..you.. what is your name Nandini..come and arrange the things in my room"

Even in that disturbed situation, Nandini with bemused looks , witnessed the drama enacted by Chandra and Mallika

" Why are you laughing at me"..once again he tried to sprang on her.

But she quickly vacated the place

Next day she met Ram

" Ram kaka who is that chubby boy Shravan..he addressed the chairman as uncle"

" Beti..I forgot to tell you..the chairman's sister has come to stay in the cottage.her husband has gone to German on business..so she will be here for about 10 days. You asked to see Bhavan..he is also with her"

" Who else with her kaka'"

" Only her maid, beti...wait I will take you to that cottage,if time permits"

On hearing Bhavan's name, she felt a mystical happiness in her

" OK kaka"

But the opportunity found its way in the form of Mallika

" Nandini, Chandra's sister Chaya is in cottage No 5..you take the evening tiffin and come there.She is waiting for me.Chandra is also there"

All her expectations came to a stand still hearing Chandra's name, but leaving all her apprehensions aside, she prepared the plates and went to the cottage accompanied by a maid.

She just changed to her favourite black colored salwar kameez ,powdered her face, put a small bindi,put her hair in a single plait, but her curls did not listen to her,prominently was playing on her forehead.

When she entered the cottage, Chandra was on his cell phone..seeing her, forget the whole world, for a second thought that his own Nandini was standing in front of her.

At the next second, came to his senses and a slight lump formed in his throat.

With out uttering a word, he gave her the way.

Mallika was conversing with Chaya..her dominance was evident and gave the appearance that she was the most intimate friend of Chaya..Chaya was merely nodding his head with a permanent smile

When Nandini placed the food trolly in front of them, mallika suddenly stretched her leg an toppled Nandini upside down.

She fell on a broken glass and had scratches all over left hand.Instantly Chandra knelt down beside her ,tried to clear the broken pieces from the wounds.

Mallika shouted " You wretched woman, don't know to behave in front of your chairman's family. I saw you wandering near liquor shops.Have you had any drinks?"

Her words struck her like an arrow, and she suffered so much of humiliation in front of Chaya.

But started cleaning the broken pieces of glass.

But Chandra stopped her

" stop it, the maid will clean it up"

" see blood is oozing out of the wounds, go to medical room and have your wounds bandaged"

" wait I will take you to medical room"

..with that tried to hold her hands and started.

But she pulled off her hands, with tears falling continuously from her eyes, started to run away from there

The whole evening was spoiled for Chandra..though he wanted to torture her and see her suffer in his hands...he doesn't know...he was waiting for her arrival eagerly and wanted her to see Bhavan

"papapa"..Bhavan tried and sat on his lap

After first aid, Nandini went to her cubicle and cried silently for her ill fate..by remembering her father and on her lost love.

Next morning, as she was proceeding for his morning shift,Chandra came along and enquired

" have you had titanux.. and medicines..how about the pain..you can take day off..see here we are also human beings..we have compassion ..won't trouble our employees unnecessarily ,understand"

She stared at him vehemently and started for her work. All these were noticed by Mallika from the window of her room

" why he shows so much concern on her always..so far I haven't seen him talking to any of the menials like this..on any account she should be chased away from the place "

In the suite, she was arranging the flower vase, he suddenly heard a noice and turned back

" what in insolence to me..I am trying to be nice to you and didn't even reply to me"

" sir, what to reply..it is a one way traffic..you can talk anything you like..but we menials..can we say a word"

" by the way where is your husband..can't I see him and we both can become friends you know"

With that, he suddenly hugged her...she struggled and tried vehemently to push him away..by that time, something pricked him on his chest and immediately released her

"hei what is it"

" it is my kavach, my shield..to safeguard me from people like you"

"you ask about my husband..no words to describe him..he is there in my mind, in my heart..in my veins instead of blood, his thoughts flow continuously..long .long ago he had engulped me with in himself"

"The demon recites poetry"

" what about...," he stopped in the mid sentence and said

" chee... it is a sin to talk people like you "

" then send me away...why are you keeping me here..i know your dirty play..you tricked my father, to bring me here"

His anger grew monumentally

" one word..one word further..I will kill you"

She could not bear his insults any more and requested Mallika to relieve her from serving him food.

Mallika readily accepted her request and allotted Payal to take food to him .

Nandini went to Ram and asked him

" Ram kaka, who else with the chairman other than his sister Chaya..what about his father and mother"

"His father is no more..a great man..his mother is in Ramnagar in their mansion"

" But only Chaya is here"

" madam is on pilgrimage ,she will be here in 15 to 20 days"

She was looking at the beautiful swimming pool..she had won many inter collegiate championships in swimming in her college days.

" beti..do you know swimming"

" kaka..I adore swimming and have won many medals in my college days"

"then why can't you go for swimming"

"me.. an employee"

" what is there..usually after 8 O clock no body will be there..in the anti room you can change your dresses...usually I lock it at 8 o clock ..you swim..I will be here..see that no body enters into there"

So she made a habit of swimming after her working hours Her swimming gave her a feeling of well being and the rhythmic strokes and sound of water made swimming much more relaxing

Two days passed.

Meantime, Chandra refused any other person other than Nandini.Silently she put the things and retreated and avoided coming in front of him

Mallika was fuming.

"What does this woman done to him...she is always in his room"..but she has no courage to raise the subject to him

On knowing Nandini's swimming schedule, she directly went to him and complained.

"Chandra..you see this girl, she daily swims there...it is a five star hotel all guests are the people in high society...what will they think of it"

Chandara " leave it Mallika, I will talk to her"

His looks were menacing like villain

Ram was outside the gates, and Nandini was enjoying her swimming( in her one piece swim suit)

Her mind was calm, but Chandra's memories hit her like needles, found herself crying while swimming.

She heard some rustling sound, suddenly came out of the pool and ran towards the dressing, two strong hands stopped her and hugged her tightly

She was in wet swim suite ,water dripping all over

A face came near her and tried to kiss on her mouth.

She immediately recognized him and his lust awakened,when he saw her swimming in the pool

" Chandra, what are you doing..plz leave..where is Ram kaka..what is this indecent behaviour"

" you dirty bitch..degraded me to this level..your passion..your body..burns me like hell"

While she was struggling, something pricked him on his chest and he came to his senses

" Ram where are...you could have told me, some lady is here..sorry madam"

He walked away.She certainly knew..he had come there, for her...

With that, her swimming sessions came to an end

She avoided him to the maximum possible, cleaned his room when he was not there, always accompanied a maid to bring his food

On that day, she completed her day's work, when passing thru Chandra's suit, she heard a baby crying

Instantly, with out any thought, entered and saw him holding a bay of one year

She stood there mesmerized by the scene, ineffable feelings ran thru her.

Involuntarily, she stretched her hands to take that beautiful baby.

" Bhavan..it is Bhavan..can I hold him"

(to be continued)

Edited by siva06 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superbbb just loved it ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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have you gone thru Chapter VI..plz post your comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Lalli,
A suspense filled update.
Until this update I thought it is just Nandhni who is surrounded with mystery but in this update it feels like the Devil Chandra is a facade put up by him, I guess it is written from Nandini's point of view but all that he wanted was to safe guard her, just because he cant imagine anyone else seeing her in the pool and by knowing her nature very well, a straight away warning won't work and such that he adapted the strategy no matter if it lands him to the bad books of her and the readers as well. It worked too, she stopped her swimming routine.

Her pricking shield also has become an equally important character of the story. I just guess that the shield of her serves the answer for the mystery surrounding her, of to where she vanished all of a sudden.
Will Chandra survive the moment he realises the truth?

If Nandini can go so poetic about her husband, then who else he can be? No I am not going to much guess works. I am guessing it too much I guess.

Finally Bindusar aka baby Bhavan arrived.. Waiting for Nandini's story to unveil.
Edited by alanta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Lalli,
A suspense filled update.
Until this update I thought it is just Nandhni who is surrounded with mystery but in this update it feels like the Devil Chandra is a facade put up by him, I guess it is written from Nandini's point of view but all that he wanted was to safe guard her, just because he cant imagine anyone else seeing her in the pool and by knowing her nature very well, a straight away warning won't work and such that he adapted the strategy no matter if it lands him to the bad books of her and the readers as well. It worked too, she stopped her swimming routine.

Her pricking shield also has become an equally important character of the story. I just guess that the shield of her serves the answer for the mystery surrounding her, of to where she vanished all of a sudden.
Will Chandra survive the moment he realises the truth?

If Nandini can go so poetic about her husband, then who else he can be? No I am not going to much guess works. I am guessing it too much I guess.

Finally Bindusar aka baby Bhavan arrived.. Waiting for Nandini's story to unveil.
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As early as possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow this is getting really interesting cant wait for the next update😳
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Originally posted by: Ilin

wow this is getting really interesting cant wait for the next update😳


The updates depend on our friends' comments..there are innumerable love stories and they always fascinate us..do they reflect our actual lives...often no..they are just imaginary fantasies , we want to indulge ourselves...why not ?...no harm in it
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CHANDRA'S NANDHINI

Chapter VII

Chandra gave her Bhavan, with out uttering a word..Nandini started pouring kisses on Bhavan and embraced him tightly and tears rolled down her cheeks. Chandra looked at the scene with unbelievable surprise and asked the maid to take the kid to Chaya

When the maid was gone, he slowly asked her

"for whom are those kisses, Nandini

" Chandra, you won't understand this

With that, she went in search of Ram

Mallika could not tolerate the above scene..Nandini handling Bhavan..she has tried to hold him many times, but the kid refused her vehemently

She felt frustrated and annoyed to witness the above. Mallika could not believe the reason for this favouritism

"she seems to be a golden lady from the beginning "

It was very maddening, she immediately invited her father to complete the marriage talks with Chandra's family, but Mounika Devi is on pilgrimage, she couldn't do any thing on the matter

Meantime in 305, the lodger Manoj,the newly married man, wanted to present his wife with some antique designed bangles.

He enquired about this with Mallika..She instantly absorbed the situation ,she could fight for her own idea to any extent... readily called Nandini ,and commanded her to accompany him .She tried to refuse and Mallika started to abuse her in swear words. These patterns clearly reflected their cultural differences

So she accompanied him for his shopping venture. Manoj had a BMW black car. She got in the back seat and Mallika dutifully pointed out that scene to Chandra

" Chandra, that customer was asking for direction for the antique jewellery shop, Nandini readily volunteered to help him. I thought of sending some male servant with him , but before that, she got in to the car."

Chandra knew, that Nandini was new to that place and knew no antique jewellery shop.

But he waited patiently.

In the shopping multiplex complex, it is not hard to find an antique jewellery shop.They had wide range of unique jewellary designs in diamonds, pearls, corals, jades etc. Nandini was quite artistic and selected a pair of diamond studded bangles for his wife.

Suddenly Manoj thrust a packet in her hands

" madam, thank you so much..plz accept this small gift from me..just a saree

Nandini, immediately thought of Chandra

" No sir..plz..take it back..my husband won't like it

He presumed her to be an ordinary employee of the hotel

" what is there,..madam..your husband won't say anything against it..come..I will talk to him

She decided to give that saree to Rani and returned to hotel.

When she got down from the car with the parcel, Chandra witnessed the scene from his window and retreated to his work

Mallika seeing her gloated " Hi Nandini, what is that gift..daily you can have such rides, I will arrange for you

" No thanks madam, Rani was mopping the floor, she called her Rani have this beautiful saree, it will be nice on you

Rani with all her teeth got the saree from her

Mallika, " you poor egoistical menial, you threw away the gift just like that. What an insolence to that customer,.I will show you my true colors

At 7o clock, Nandini brought dinner to Chandra.

Chandra was at his working table, called her " hi Nandini..wait..plz serve me the dinner

Suddenly he looked up, some uneasiness prevailed in her, but she remained standing there.

He started to take his dinner and said " why are you standing there, come and sit beside me,...you can earn more..rather by sweeping the floors..by the way ..what is your rate

He felt some ringing in his ears and understood that she had slapped him

" Mr Chandra Patel, how dare you to speak me like this...I cannot tolerate this insolence any more..I am leaving this place at any cost

His constant turmoil is constantly impacting his life and relationship and impairing his fair senses

He is in a form of denial, so much had happened in his life

Chandrara,knew..he was torturing her and as well as himself.

He came near her and holding her, said " sorry..sorry..plz excuse me..I should not have used those words..plz

"when I saw you with that customer in that car, I lost all my good senses..plz for give me and tried to console by caressing her face. But she pushed away his hands and ran to her room and cried her heart out.

" how dare you..Chandra..I am safeguarding my chastity all these years , for you alone..and you got married and enjoyed a family life and got a child too...I have no relations, down and out beggar, I am an orphan .ill fated woman..an outcast..

In the evening Chaya met her in the garden and invited her to her cottage Nandini readily accepted in the hope of seeing Bhavan. Chaya was a down to earth person

Shravan running there, got hold of Nandini's hands hi, Nandini aunty..come..i will show my helicopter and meantime, Bhavan hopped upon Nandini.

" Nandini..on that day..I know what happened..this Mallika..

"leave it madam, you are alone in the cottage with the children

"yes..but Chandra comes here often and two maids are there to help..amma will return with in 10 days

"do you know Chandra before..you seem to be a graduate..why this menial job

" no madam..I don' know anything about chairman prior..what to do..there is no vacancy to suit my education..I am a post graduate in IT..

"plz call me chaya..I will speak to Chandra about you

"Plz mam, it will be helpful, my debts will be repayed sooner

" what depts.?

Nandini was very brief in her descriptions and

Chaya listened to all carefully (but volunteered nothing)and treated her with strong tea and biscuits

There after, when ever she found time , came to cottage and spent time with Bhavan and Shravan

Mallika's complaints were in vain.

Finally on fifth day Gangathar came there and opened the topic of marriage with Chandra.Nandini was called to serve tea and snacks to them and Mallika tried to sit beside Chandra, but he placed a file sort of thing there and she has to sit in another sofa

" Chandra..it has been so long..why postponing the marriage ..shall I talk to your mother "

"Uncle..I have some matters to settle down..plz give me some time..Bhavan is there

Mallika cleverly intervened

" why Chandra we can appoint proper governess to look after him..see this girl Nandini can also be appointed. Nandini after our marriage will you come with us to look after Bhavan

Chandra thought " I need a real mother to my son, not a governess

When she came to clear the plates, Chandra stopped her

Oh my God..what a waste of life..if I marry Mallika..i will regain my lost happiness..what do you say lady,do you have any objection

"why sir, I am just a maid, how can I give any objection..you can marry any number of times you like..you rich, handsome and what not

" so you have no objection

"what question you are asking..can a mere toilet cleaner give her opinion?

" it was your fault, you discarded me like a waste paper and married that 2 lack person

She was shouting now

" what do you think..yes I married that Singapore IT professional, and I say it is none of your business

" are you a woman..you are a disgrace to all womanhood ..we spent the nights together..you were with me as my wife

" all are old stories..I don't remember any of the things you mentioned.

" get out of the place now..here after don't come in front of me

There are nobody to notice her tears, sadness and pain

Nandini was in intense mental agony and wanted to get over these torture and wanted to run to the end of the world.

"Chandra is going to marry again. She can't even see Bhavan here after

She chided herself

You fool ..in what line you are thinking..Chandra has completely changed..he is a different person now..somhow or other I have to vacate the place decently and officially.

In evening Chaya and Nandini were in the garden, Nandini holding Bhavan and Shravan catching butter flies here and there

" Chaya, our chairman is going to marry Mallika..when will it be

" No nandini, Chandra has no interest in marrying Mallika..even by mother's compulsion he married Durga..he loved a girl..what happened ..we don't know..he was not himself for a number of days..no body could console him..he was in a devastating position..it took about 2 months for him to come out of his bad memories. Then suddenly, one morning accepted to marry Durga, but afterwards, he was quite a good husband

She showed some of the wedding photos from the PC system

Nandini could not control herself, and asked when will be the arrangements possibly

" mom will be here by 10 days..then they will decide the dates..all depend on mom's arrival"

Next morning, while serving breakfast, she asked him

when your mother comes, your marriage will be fixed, can't you send me out from this hell

" did you say hell..madam you haven't seen the hell so far

Chandra continued,

" again I ask you, why did you cheat me..was I not enough for you..still the thoughts kill me like hell..tell me. He suddenly hugging her begged,

plz Nandini,tell me, why you dumped me

" Chandra..no use of talking about the past..I am a married woman

" damn it..whom did you marry..where is he now..have you ditched him or he..tell me

" No sir..no use..plz think over my release

Next two days, Chandra was not in his suite, even Chaya could not tell his whereabouts

Nandini became restless, and in the name of cleaning his room, visited there unnecessarily.

Noting her restiveness Mallika remarked,

oh rajkumari .why are you so restless..Chairman has gone to Singapore on business..he won't be here till next Tues day.How about the news "

On the third day, when she was tucking his bed, the telephone zingled . With out a second thought she attended the phone

" hello

" Is it you cleaning lady,,ah what is your name?

Nandini felt so relievd and with tears, she answered

" sir, I am Nandini,cleaning your room

" Oh..do it perfectly,when I come there, the room should sparkle

" I will do it sir,shall i know your returning date

" hmmm.. why you bother..

" why should I, if I know the date I will extra clean your room

After that, what they talked? Who knows? they themselves did not know.

She had buried her feelings into the depth of her heart, but they refused to die, now they have come forth ..but suddenly it dawned on her that he is going to marry Mallika

(to be continued)

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