zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

HEY PEOPLE...
SO SORRY FOR THE DELAY...
I KNOW I AM AM SUPER LATE...
BUT I AM WRITING SO MANY THINGS AT THE SAME TIME...
SOO SORRY...
HERE'S THE NEXT PART...

PART-4

zain and aaliya were shocked to hear the news they couldnt imagine what had happened.. the snowfall had covered the whole area... just then they got a call from osman on aaliya's phone... she picked it mamu...
aaliya: aslam valekum mamu...
osman: valekum aslam... meine abhi abhi dekha tv pe ki raaste jam ho chuke hai... tum dono theek ho na?
aaliya: haan mamu hum bilkul theek hai...
osman: allah ka lakh lakh shukar hai... tum dono ko kam se kam 1 mahine ke liye uss hotel me rehna padega...
aaliya: ek mahina?
osman: haan... apna khayal rkhna... khuda afiz...
aaliya: khuda afiz...
zain: kya kaha dad ne?
aaliya: hume yaha 1 mahine ke liye rukna padega...
zain: what?????
aaliya: ese bol rhe ho jaise meri galti hai...
zain: par hum iss tarah se ek mahine tak kese reh sakte hai...
aaliya: mujhe kaha pta hai?
she started shivering... zain noticed it and got tensed... but tried to hide his concern...
zain: tum theek toh ho na?
aaliya: haan.. bas todhi thand lag rhi hai...
zain: jao so jao...
aaliya: hmm...
she went and slept down on the bed... after a while zain also felt a bit dizzy and went and slept next to aaliya... aaliya felt a little cold so she shifted a bit near zain... zain also shifted a bit near her... she shifted a bit more... now he finally kept his hand over her waist... aaliya nuzzled close to his chest... now they finally felt a bit warm...
A/N:
sorry the update was too short... but i am having no time to write too long updates... have to go study... pls try to coorperate... will surely update by tomorrow... as per the PM i wont be able to send PM's to members.. i will only be able to send PM's to people in my Buddy List... pls do leave ur comments and likes... and if i get time i will surely PM to the people who are not in my buddy list too... pls add in ur comment that you want to receive a PM... will surely if i get time... thanks...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE..
IT TAKES A LOT OF TIME TO WRITE AN UPDATE...
CRITICISATION WILL BE MORE THAN WELCOME...
SO SORRY FOR THE SHORT UPDATE...
HOPE MY APOLOGY IS ACCEPTED...
THANK YOU SOO MUCH...😃

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

lovely update

loved it 👍🏼

continue soon

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Humzy
lovely update
loved it 👍🏼
continue soon

thanks...
it was a bit short...
but i am sure you are gonna like the next one...
the next one i will try to make a bit longer...
thank you soo much...😃

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crazygurl1

@crazygurl1

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

lovely update👍🏼
continue soon😊

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: crazygurl1
lovely update👍🏼
continue soon😊

thank you sooo much...
glad u liked it...
will surely continue by tomorrow...
sorry the update was too short...
but what can I do I had to study...
coaching classes...
but will surely update by tomorrow...
that too a long one...
thank you soo much... 😃

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katmaan

@katmaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Nice updates dear do update soon

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awwiiee

chotu part tha but loved it

ZaYa stuck with each other that too for 1 month

can't wait to read more

so plz continue soon

Geet

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Awwiiee
chotu part tha but loved it
ZaYa stuck with each other that too for 1 month
can't wait to read more
so plz continue soon

Geet

thank you sooo much dear...
glad to know that u liked it...
sorry it was too short...
but i promise once my syllabus gets complete i will write long updates...
till then chhotu updates se kaam chala lo...
soo sorry...
thanks...😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

HEYA PEOPLE I AM BACK WITH ANOTHER PART...
NOW I PROMISE I WILL MAKE THE NEXT PART A BIT LONG...
SO HERE YOU GO...

PART-5

in the evening they woke up and saw themselves in a really awkward situation... they had slept hugging each other... they shared a quick eye-lock and then broke the hug... they quickly got up and looked everywhere but not at each other... they were feeling a bit hungry too since they had not ate at all...
zain: kuch khale...
aaliya: umm sure...
zain: chalo...
aaliya went to the washroom while zain sat near the window staring at the snow-covered mountains... they really seemed heart warming but since they were blocking their way to mumbai they still seemed annoying... he waited and waited but aaliya didnt come out... so he walked up to the bathroom...
zain: ohh mamu ki bhanji... todha jaldi karo...i dont have time..
aaliya: kya hai tumhe kitkit... mei subah se nahiyi nhi hoon... naha rhi hoon...
zain: tum pagal ho kya itni thand mei koi nahata hai...
she just then walked out of the bathroom wearing a shirt and jeans...
aaliya: mei nahati hoon... problem?
zain had his mouth open... he didnt knew at all that his mkb could look soo amazing...
aaliya: kya hua? mujhe pta hai mei bahaut acchi lag rhi hoon.. but stare toh mat kro kam se kam... tumhare ego ka bartha ban jayega...
zain stopped staring at the minute...
zain: mei... mei todhi na stare kr rha tha...
aaliya: haan haan... kyun nhi...
she said as she walked towards the dressing table... to his surprise she didnt wear any earrings and just wore her boots and jacket... and then walked up to him...
aaliya: chale...
zain: ruko mei abhi aaya tayeeyar hoke...
he walked inside the room and came out within 3 minutes...
zain: chalo...
as they walked out they stopped in their tracks... aaliya held zain's arm as she was scared by the look the person before them gave... zain kept his other hand above aaliya's hand making her feel safe... he then turned to the person and glared with all the anger he had... it was ZEESHAN...
SORRY I THINK THIS UPDATE WAS SHORT TOO...
WILL PAKKA UPDATE BY TODAY...
AND I WILL ADD ANOTHER PART TO THE STORY...
SORRY AGAIN...
HOPE MY APOLOGY IS ACCEPTED...
THANK YOU SOO MUCH...