zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

thank you soo much people...
i dont really know how to describe romance so i make it cute and simple...
hope you all like cuteness and sweetness other than just romance...
the next part will be when they will reach shimla...
and i guess that you all would love it too...
here's the teaser:
aaliya and zain would reach shimla... there they would experience snowfall and other pleasures... but at the last they would experience harsh weather like heavy rainfall and scary thunder nights... due to the excessive snowfall and heavy rainfall they would have to stay there for a while... but their experience will be great... barkat will be planning to shoot osman at the other end with mir khan...
here's the teaser... but the actual will probably be out by tomorrow... and the twist will probably come in the 4th part... and dont worry about barkat... i wont let the story concentrate on barkat...
thanks...😃

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow u updated

Thanks a lot for this

uff ye ZaYa bhi na

kya hoga inka

both are adamant to confess first

typical ZaYa😆

love their car journey nad talk

Zain had 50 girlfriends😲

plz continue soon

so want to read more

Take care

PS: Nice teaser...plz continue soon

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

lovely teaser

continue soon

👍🏼

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Wow u updated
Thanks a lot for this
uff ye ZaYa bhi na
kya hoga inka
both are adamant to confess first
typical ZaYa😆
love their car journey nad talk
Zain had 50 girlfriends😲
plz continue soon
so want to read more
Take care

PS: Nice teaser...plz continue soon

Geet

just a guess...
i think he had 50...
but thanks a lot...
really motivating reply...
will surely continue by tomorrow...
thank you so so so much...
its bcoz of ppl like u tht i cn write so well...
thanks a lot for comments and likes...
keep commenting...
thanks...😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

HEY AND THANKS FOR ALL YOUR REPLIES...
HERE I AM WITH THE NEXT PART...
I DID THIS ONE EARLY NA..
SO HERE YOU GO...

PART-3
THIS CANT BE HAPPENING.

the car journey reached to the mountains... zain woke up and saw that they had already reached the mountains... it was an awesome view... the whole valley could be seen... then his eyes fall on aaliya who was sleeping on his lap... he gently pushed back the strand of hair which was disturbing her with his hand...
zain: aaliya... aaliya wake up... we have reached the hills...
aaliya stirred in sleep...
zain: aaliya... wake up... nahi toh motion sickness ho jayegi...
aaliya woke up...
aaliya: hmm?
zain: look outside the window...
aaliya looked outside it was an awesome view...
aaliya: its awesome... kitni der aur hai...
zain: we are about to reach... around 30-40 minutes more... kyun?
aaliya: kuch nhi... but its an awesome view...
the rest of the journey passed while looking outside amazed...

AT THE HOTEL...
they both came out and streched their legs... sitting for around 6-7 hours non-stop wasn't an easy job... but they did it anyways... they walked into the hotel and then into their room... it was an awesome room with heating... it was really cold outside... they took off their jackets and then started to look at the interiors... it was a superb suite... the bed was right in the middle... beside the window was a broad window sill on which anyone could sit on and admire the snow outside... suddenly aaliya noticed something... something admiring... she grabbed zain's hand and pulled him near the window...
aaliya: ZAIN IS THAT SNOWFALL?
zain was surprised with aaliya's craziness...
snowfall hi toh hai yeh mamu ki bhanji itna khush kyun ho rhi hai?
zain: snowfall hi toh hai...
aaliya: meine apni puri life mei kabhi snowfall nhi dekhi... omg... omg... its soo amazing...
zain: kabhi nahi?
aaliya: nahi...
zain: seriously?
aaliya: haan... kitkit tumhe seriously lagta hai ki mei kabhi bhopal se bahar gyi hongi?
zain: what????
aaliya: chalo i am going out... u cmg?
zain: akele akele maze lene ka irada hai kya?
aaliya smiled then grabbed some clothes and went straight to the bathroom...
and came out wearing boots and jeans... leaving zain's mouth wide open...
they went out and had a lot of fun...

AT NIGHT...
zain and aaliya were sleeping when they heard lightning... both woke up and saw that it was raining heavily... it thundered again and aaliya hugged zain tightly... scared... zain was taken aback by this sudden hug and then a while later hugged her back... assuring that she was safe... not hugged her back but kept a hand around her... aaliya closed her eyes tightly and grabbed zain's shirt in her hands as she was hell scared... zain also hugged her tighter... after a while when the storm was finally over zain made aaliya sleep assuring her again and again that she was safe... she held zain's hand tightly and slept... zain smiled and slept himself...

NEXT MORNING...
they both woke up and saw that they were sleeping in the same blanket very close to each other... probably last night was too cold for them to handle... so they came very close and hugged each other tightly... zain was the first one to break the embrace...
zain: umm... good morning...
aaliya: good morning... coffee?
zain: yup... sure...
aaliya got up and went to the bathroom and then to the kitchen...
she was back with two mugs of coffee... this was really needed in such a cold weather...
zain: hey thanks...
aaliya: ur welcum...
they switched on the tv... and then were shocked to see the latest news... it was covering every news channel...
the news was...
due to the harsh weather last night and constant rain and snow the flights have been cancelled... all the roads connecting to dehradun and back at shimla are blocked... people are afraid that at the time of tourists the roads have been blocked... the roads may not be cleared for a month or so... so lets show you some pics of the blocked roads...
the channel showed the way where they had come from... all the roads were covered with traffic and ice.. ice that could have melt and caused a huge destruction to the place... still they both were very fortunate to have not left early as they would have been stuck right now... now what to do?

TO BE CONTINUED...
PLS LEAVE YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS...
I AM MANAGING MANY FF's AT ONE TIME...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT...
THANKS..😃.

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Me love the update

Awwiiee ZaYa are so much comfortable with each other

U know,Meine bhi kabhi snowfall nahi dekhi

Mujhe bhi dekhna hai

Now ZaYa are stuck thee that too for whole 1 month

it would be interesting

plz continue soon

Take care

Geet

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Me love the update
Awwiiee ZaYa are so much comfortable with each other
U know,Meine bhi kabhi snowfall nahi dekhi
Mujhe bhi dekhna hai
Now ZaYa are stuck thee that too for whole 1 month
it would be interesting
plz continue soon
Take care

Geet

thank you geet...
yeah kinda... i have just seen last year at christmas...
i actually have never seen snowfall but settled snow...
thank you so much...😃

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mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

nice update.both are now stuck.waiting for next part.

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

HEY PEOPLE AND THANKS FOR ALL YOUR REPLIES...
HERE'S THE TEASER FOR PART-4...
AND HERE'S THE MYSTERY...
zain and aaliya get a call from osman and osman informed that he has arranged the stay for 1 month and the hotel... they both get shocked? one month how are they even gonna survive? one long month... 30 days... omg... they walk out of the room and see someone... someone who they thought they would never meet again in their life... or never want to meet again in their life... it was ---------... (sorry but i aint gonna tell you the name bcoz then what is the mystery)... will zain and aaliya be able to live with each other for 1 month? without anyone else... without being able to go out? keep reading to know...
so here's the teaser... but i aint gonna tell you the name till i finally write the main text... it is gonna be interesting... i guess many of you already have guessed who it is... but if you have pls dont share it...
part-4 up by tomorrow...
thanks...😊

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago