A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 7

Originally posted by: sania_12

Omg, I love this chapter! It was awesome! 😃

thank you so much!😛

Originally posted by: sum2005

it was very nice soniji. 👏 please do continue ur updates regularly. relly relly nice one.once again 👏 👏

aww thank you so much! I will try and write the next part tonight!

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

You know...the whole carrying part reminded me of the bridge scene in Veer Zaara. And I am the biggest fan of Srk-Pz so obviously seeing SV like this would be dream come true.

I love the "burning" imagery!!! Very effective!

Soniji thanks so much for writing this FF, it brought back my A-level English days....used to love it so much!

you like the imagery? I always think imagery brings a story alive..

thank you for enjoying it, I love writing, and where S-V is concerned, it makes it more enjoyable to write imagining them...😳 SRK carried PZ? when did that happen? I think I've forgotten some of the scenes in Veer Zaara...my poor memory..

This one Sizzles! Are you talking about the scene when they are in the fields?😕