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22 years of Hungama
Rate episode 62: "Officer Purvi's Narrow Escape"
Part Eight ā Two Lonely Hearts
(Kuch tum kaho, kuch hum kahe, khamoshi se..khamoshi tak..baat karne do..)
"Are you okay?" As if life was poured back into her, she flinched when she heard the familiar sound, and relief flooded inside of herā¦.He gently stroked her head and then slowly carried her in his arms, careful not to let her leg hit any treeā¦with half shut eyes, she peeped into his eyesā¦care and concern illuminated in his eyes, and for the first time she felt the gentle side of himā¦He caught her looking at him, and for a moment they both gazed at one another, and she couldn't help but let her heart beat faster, but then he shifted his gaze back up and never looked down at her the entire wayā¦.but it was so comfortable in his strong arms...and so warmā¦(sa re sa re e e...)
She noticed they were coming to a clearing from her side view, but knew this wasn't the palace. He carried her inside a gate, and that is where she saw where he was taking her toā¦It was this double story mansion, that was fashioned in a V shape in the front, and a beautiful swan shaped fountain stood in the front of the mansionā¦the sound of the water in the fountain sounded like music so melodious and peaceful...She once again turned back her attention to him, he never once grumbled or sighed whilst carrying her, was she that light? Or was he that kind?
Finally, he took inside of the mansion, and her eyes popped open at the elegant and trendy interior decorationsā¦He then placed her down onto a soft cushiony white sofaā¦her head felt relaxed, and even though the pain in her ankle hadn't subsided a bit, she felt calmā¦He went into another room, to get some medicinesā¦whilst she just let her eyes roam around her surroundingsā¦the furniture in the living room was either black, grey or whiteā¦from the coffee tables to the curtains everything seemed relatively newā¦she wondered if he had just moved inā¦
After a few minutes he came back, her heart just melted seeing the concern reflected clearly in his eyesā¦He gently rubbed the cotton wool against her ankleā¦she flinched every time he pressed a little too hardā¦and he worriedly stammered "I'm soo ..sor..ry, I didn't mean to.." After cleaning her wounds, he applied medicine to it, and then bandaged her ankleā¦
He then went closer to her, and knelt down on the floor right beside her head and then sat on the edge of itā¦caressing her soft silky hairā¦and intently gazing into her eyesā¦there was this electric current that passed through themā¦she looked back at him with such passion and innocence, that on impulse he leant in closer, and grabbed her shoulders, and kissed her passionatelyā¦
"arrrrrrrrrrrrrrghhh" the loud scream jolted him out of his fantasiesā¦he mentally chided himself for letting suchā¦such stupid thoughts enter his mind⦠He realized, he had accidentally hit his arm on her ankleā¦so he rubbed it ever so gently⦠"I'm so sorry, I didn't realize.." "it's ok, but where were you lost?" He just shruggedā¦"So youā¦want to eat something?" Vidya's eyes now sparkled "You know how to cook?" He stood up and boldly said "of course I can cook" Then he mentally kicked himself, how the hell was he supposed to cook, when he had never ever switched on a stove before..? And his servants were on leave tooā¦what a fool he was going to look in front of herā¦
To Be Continuedā¦
PS: I was contemplating making Vidya illiterate? What do you guys think? Would this fit into the story?
Keep smilingā¦
Love
Soni
well, i don't know what would be better whether to have vidya litterate or illeterate. But this english speaking vidya and illiterate!!!!!!!! i m not sure if this sinks well in the story.
Honestly, i have full faith in ur suspense and imagination and hence I know whatever direction u give ur story it would be great. Even though u made a story totally different from BMTD, this is so fresh, vibrant, thrilling, exciting. i dont even have words. Ultimately, i wud suggest now that u sudnt make vidya illiterate just to stay a little bit in track. as i feel ur story is really new and let ur creative mind write whatever it wants to.
btw, i just hate u................. š” u know why? i wish that u had written a novel already and i was reading it. coming everyday to BMTD to check ur forum and not seeing new page is frustating. and even though u have posted sth, i get angry as i know that just in next 5 mins it wud b finished š³
i m amazed why i like ur story so much? š² it's not that i haven't read any good stories before š³ š³ still!!!!!!!!!!!!! i m amazed. i just wish that i had studied in english medium as now neither my gujarati is that good nor english. even though i feel tempted to write like u, i cant as i want enriched story with real emotions and rich words. may be for now let me satisfy myself just by reading....... š