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soni595

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

very beautiful Wafah 👏 I love the last part, when their locked, and Vidya rushes to him to ask him if he is hurt 😳

Keep smiling...
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Wafah

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Saagar played his guitar in the garden, as he watched the sun almost close to the horizon, painting the sky in an orangish hue.

It was the favorite of his day. The music he played came automatically, he didn't recognize the tune, but it felt familiar, like the presence of Vidya in his life.

He stopped playing as he realized that his thoughts had wandered to Vidya again. Her softspoken words to him still resonating in his mind.

"Aap galat hai. Maine jis Saagar ko apna maana hai, woh abhi bhi mujhe aap mein nazar aata hai. Woh abhi bhi mere saath hai. Shayad aapki yaadein, aapki baatein, ya phir aapki soch alag hai, lekin aapka mann nahi badla hai, aapka dil bhi nahi."

Her voice, it rang in his head with and odd sense of familiarity he couldn't explain. He hadn't been able to reply anything to her, as Sindoora had just walked in that moment questioning them why their room had been locked.

Saagar had been irked and told SIndoora that it was his personal matter. Vidya had said nothing, her steady quiet and patience bothering him even more than her politely soft-spoken words.

He shook his head, he wouldn't think about Vidya or what lay ahead. The guests would be arriving soon, so till then he would immerse himself in his music and relax.

He closed his eye playing the tune that came automatically to him.

"Yeh tumhaare liye hai, kyuki tum meri sabse acchi Best Friend hoon."

He played the tune and she danced slowly to the tune and he smiled.

"For you my best friend, my angel, my love & my wife....Vidya."

Saagar opened his eyes as he heard a voice whiper Vidya's name. He turned around to see if someone was beside him, then realized that the voice was his own.

"Mr. Ocean aap yahaan kya kar rahe hai. Abhi tak tayyar nahi hue. Already guests aana shoroo ho chuke hai. App jaldi tayyar ho kar aaiye."

Sagar just smiled then walked back into the house.

Back in his room he noticed that his clothes had been nicely ironed and laid out on the bed. His favorite black jacket, matched with a soft pink shirt and a slightly darker pink tie.

He smiled thinking that his mom might have pulled it out for him. He went into the bathroom to change and was out in ten minutes dressed and ready to go.

As he walked out he saw Vidya sitting on the bedding wearing a bright pink lengha, complimenting him. She sat faced away from him, her stance hesitant.

He quielty called her out name and she jumped turning towards him.

He looked at her and felt his breath catch in his throat. Her silver jewelry complimented he lengha, and her hair fell loose around her shoulders framing her face. Her lips...

He shook his head then noticed that she wasn't smiling. In fact he noticed that the her lips quivered slightly, and tears brimmed in her eyes.

She averted her gaze hiding her tears, then spoke softly, "Aap tayyar ho gaye hai? Bahaar sab woh aapka intezaar kar rahe hai."

"Vidya kya hua." Saagar asked wondering why she had been crying.

"Kuch nahin. Kuch bhi nahin."

"Phir tum ro kyu rahi thi." He touched her shoulder lightly

Vidya looked up surprised that he had noticed her tears, and smiled slightly at his concern.

"Woh aankhon main kuch..." She shook her head, her voice wavering. "Chaliye aapka sab intezaar kar rahe hai." Especially Surili, she thought but didn't say, but it broke her heart that Surili, the person Saagar truly loved. She again displayed a bright smile, then out of habit slipped her hand in the crook of his arm.

Saagar stared at her arm in his wondering why it felt so right. Vidya misunderstood his pause and quickly pulled out her hand looking startled.

"Sarry." She moved away from him then followed his lead as he walked out.

Edited by Wafah - 18 years ago

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Shazia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

awwww 😭 poor vidya 😭 😭 awww and poor saagar, bechara is so confused 😭

He closed his eye playing the tune that came automatically to him.

"Yeh tumhaare liye hai, kyuki tum meri sabse acchi Best Friend hoon."

He played the tune and she danced slowly to the tune and he smiled.

"For you my best friend, my angel, my love & my wife....Vidya."

Saagar opened his eyes as he heard a voice whiper Vidya's name. He turned around to see if someone was beside him, then realized that the voice was his own.

my fave part 😳 when he realizes that he said her name 😳 😳

wafah u write beautifully, i loveee this story!

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Wafah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Thanks shockalot...sorry I don't know your name...I'm just really glad that you like the story...
Thanks again so much...:)🤗

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Shazia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

👏 👏 no problme, you deserve all the praise you're getting! This story just rocks!
Lol and my name is Shazia, Shaz for short 😊

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Nabihah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

WOW! ur sooo oooooo oooo talented!!!!! ur story is tooo awesome! absoluetly love love love love it! 👏 👏 👏

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samie_190

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

please update soon i really love your fanfiction and don't forget to add some romantic scens. by the wy i love the fanfiction

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angad4life

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

wafah that was simply amazing, as usual. ufff... sagar tum itna slow kyon ho? just admit u got the hots for ur wife 😳 plz continue sooon!! 😃

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samie_190

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

please up date soon i really want to know who will he behave in the party when surilli is around any thing is possible

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CherryPrincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

wow! wafah that was awesome!!!!!!! u r master writer. I kept on hitting last button and then realized that i wud have to wait now to read rest of the story! i m simply impressed by BMTD, was busy in studies and in vacation my attention got captured by BMTD so much that just in 3 days, i watched all the episodes, and yday even slept at 6 am. This story is simply amazing and ur imagination is just like icing on the cake. Keep up the good work and please write soon.

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