Phirse Hua Pyaar: SV FF Updated on Pg. 24 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWOSOME yaar its really great plez do continue SAP 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Never had Vidya seen so many people in one place. It felt like the entire population of Delhi was at the Thakur Pratap Singh residence.

Vidya scanned the crowd for a familiar face but saw none. She didn't even know where Chinu, Bharata or Shalu were.

Saagar, on the other hand had no problem mingling with the people at the party, and Vidya would have lost sight of him, if it hadn't been for Surili.

Surili as usual adept at making a loud entry, was practically hanging off of Saagar's arm, hugging him at every chance she got. As soon as she had come, she had latched on to Saagar, with crocodile tears in her eyes, exclaiming how happy she was that Saagar had regained his mental health.

She had greeted Saagar with their usual greeting...something along the lines of.."Bematlab ki buk-buk, Surili"..something..something "Saagar"

Vidya was too upset to pay attention to the whole greeting, and watched in quiet distaste as Surili walked along with Saagar introducing herself as Saagar's former fiance. Saagar himself was smiling cheerfully his arm tangled with Surili's.

Chinu & Bharat were also watching Surili and Saagar, their face twisted in disgust at the sight in front of them.

"Yeh Shalu kahaan chali gayi. Usne kaha tha ke ab tak to plan ki saari tayaari ho jayegi."

"Ho chuki." Shalu interrupted. "Ab humein sirf watch karna hoga. Lekin pehle mujhe bhook lagi hai. Subaah se kuch nahin khaaya hain is stupid si diet par."

Chinu smiled, some things never change.

Vidya in the crowd watched Saagar's every move. He was dancing with Surili on the dance floor holding her so close that it pained Vidya to even watch.

"Namaste Vidya Rani..."

Vidya knew that voice too well, from being the subject of its owner's harassment. She turned around to face Harsh, who was holding her pallo in his hand.

"Kitni afsos ki baat hai naa. Tumhaare pati ko hi tumhaari parwaah nahi. Tumhe yahaan akela chod ke kisi aur ke saath..."

Vidya didn't say anything, so Harsh continued to speak, "Mere saath hoti to main subah shaam sirf tumhaare saath hota." He reached out to touch her cheek and Vidya flinched moving away but Harsh held on to her hand, almost twisting it.

"Mere saath dance nahi karogi...?"

Vidya's eyes teared up, and she tried to free her hand, her eyes searching for Saagar.

"Aap Vidya Pratap Singh hai na?" Harsh let her go immediately, as a young man interrupted him.

Vidya nodded thankfully. "Ji, pur aap?"

"Oh how stupid of me. I'm Dev Mehta. I work in a partnering company."

"Ji humein kuch bhi nahi samajh aaya." Vidya smiles uncomfortably.

"Sorry. Mera naam Dev Mehta hai. Meri company Thakur Pratap Singh ke Industries ke saath kaam karti hai. Actually humari company bahut choti hai, aur hum Delhi main pehli baar aaye hain. Kya aap mere saath sirf ek minute ke liye aas sakti hain?"

Vidya looked back at Harsh who was standing at a polite distance then at the man that had introduced himself as Dev, and decided it would be safer to follow him.

Once away from Harsh, the man apologized. "Actually mujhe laga ki woh aadmi aapko pareshaan kar raha tha isliye maine..uh..."

"Thank oo" Vidya smiled

Saagar was annoyed. He didn't show it but he was getting tired of Surili hanging off his arm. He had tried on several occassions to politely move it but she kept looping it around his.

He looked around the party his eyes searching, he didn't know what till he spotted her. He had been looking for Vidya, and there she stood talking to someone he didn't recognize, and laughing gaily.

Seeing her laugh took his breath away, because in that moment he realized how beautiful she was. Her smile so innocent, completely natural, lit up her whole face. Her eyes twinkled too, in mirth.

"Don't you think so Honey?" Surili asked. Saagar didn't know what she was actually asking him, but just nodded still distracted by Vidya.

Who was the stranger she was with? For some reason he didn't like the guy.

"Excuse me." He pulled Surili's hand away from his, not so politely this time, and walked towards Vidya. Surili tried to protest and call him back but he ignored her.

"Hi." Both Vidya and the stranger turned towards Saagar with mild surprise.

"Mr. Saagar Pratap Singh, so glad to meet you. I'm Dev Mehta."

"Nice to meet you, now if you'll excuse us, I believe I owe my wife a dance for the night." He smiled at Vidya who looked completely surprised and at the same time slightly confused.

Saagar held out his hand to Vidya, "Kya tum mere saath nachogi."

Vidya stared at Saagar's hand with apparent disbelief visble in her eyes. She hesitantly placed her palm in Saagar's.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Thanks to all of you for your endearing comments....🤗

P.S. Nabihah & Soni..love your guys fanfic too...it's amazing...

Edited by Wafah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
oh wow wafah...i love it...especially the part where saagar was feeling slighyly jealous looking at vidya laughing with the other man..! 😆

do continue! cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
this harsh is a real pain n saagar jealous 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
thanx for the lovely part its really too good ya plez update the next part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
not too much detailed, little confusing but well done
Edited by sweet samie - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dude that was awesome!
sagar ko jaln hui!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Wafah

Thanks to all of you for your endearing comments....🤗

P.S. Nabihah & Soni..love your guys fanfic too...it's amazing...

thanks Wafah! I like the way you write too! I can't wait to see what happens next in your story! It's getting more and more interesting!

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
so good
wow you write really good wafha waiting for next writing

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