Phirse Hua Pyaar: SV FF Updated on Pg. 24 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wafah, you have abandoned your story? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry....I haven't abandoned it..just been a little busy...will post an update today....or latest tomorrow...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww take your time hun 😳 , lol i hope you don't feel forced to update today caue of my complaining
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Posted: 18 years ago
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*The song is from Phir Milenge.This is from Vidya's point of view. The song is in bold..and the flashbacks are in blue.*

The beginning notes of the music began to play as Saagar lead Vidya to the dance floor.

Vidya placed her hand gingerly in Saagar's still a little surprised that he'd asked her to dance. She blushed slightly, her heart racing a little, as his hand made contact with her skin at her waist. She sneaked a glance upwards only to meet his in an intent stare.

Yaad hai woh pehli mulaaqaat yaad hai...

Saagar comes out of the water, and smiles at Vidya pulling the towel away from her. Vidya is unable to hold on to the towel, and just watches Saagar swimming away.

Yaad hai mujhe teri har ek baat yaad hai....

Vidya lowers her gaze focusing it towards his shoulders. She has never danced before but somehow in Saagar's arms, him leading her...it feels so natural, and she closes her eyes to savor the moment.

Woh mehki raatein, saari saugaatein...

"Promise...Tum mera saath kabhi nahin chodogi...Raat ko main apni aakhein tumhare chehra dekh kar band karna chahta hoon..aur subah, tumhare chehre ko dekhkar kholna chahta hoon."

Vidya put her hand in Saagar's..."Promise."


Bheegi meri aankhon se aansu beh chale....

Vidya opens her eyes as a single tear finds its way to the bottom of her cheek. She finds Saagar still staring at her, a slight anger visible in his eyes, she doesn't know why. He takes her hands and wraps it around his shoulders, pulling her more closer, surprising her even more. She tenatively rests her head against his shoulders, barely touching him. The tears, her now constant companions, fall freely, a result of her old memories of happy times spent with him.

Kisse kuch puraane mil gaye...Rone ke bahaane mil gaye...
Kisse kuch puraane mil gaye...Rone ke bahaane mil gaye...


"She can't be my wife... I don't know her...I don't remember her...how can papa just decide for me? I mean she can't even read or write...how can..? Saagar ranted in frustration as Vidya watched heart broken.

Mere toote dil mein koi khwaahish na rahi...Armaanon ke sab raaste soone pade...

"Woh jaise bhi hain...humare dil main ab sirf unka pyaar basta hai. Unka bholapan...chahe ya na chahe...hum unse bahut pyaar karte hain."

Vidya remebered telling her mom, that the only thing she wished for now, was his happiness and his health. He had begun to mean everthing to her...

Kyoon dua bhi meri bani aaj bad-dua...Yeh ehsaas chaahat ke sabhi chubhne lage...

"Tum meri wife ho...meri sabse best friend...my angel...meri sab kuch..."

Kisse kuch puraane mil gaye...Rone ke bahaane mil gaye...
Kisse kuch puraane mil gaye...Rone ke bahaane mil gaye...


What was she supposed to do now? He obviously didn't want her as his wife, but for her, he'd always been her husband, he was apart of her...how could she leave him...leave a part of her heart?

Tujhe bhoole na bhi chaahoon to na bhula sakoon...Tu hi bata tere bina kaise rahoon...

How could she make him understand that the story of her life started with him..and ended with him. For him she could go against everyone else...but when he didn't want her to be on her side...

Tu jaane na sanam gham maine kya saha...Bikhre mere sapne zameen pe tootke...

Vidya felt Saagar's arms tighten around her, and this time she buried her face in his shirt hiding her tears against him...her fingers tightening their hold on his shirt...

Yaad hai voh pehli mulaaqaat yaad hai
Yaad hai mujhe teri har ek baat yaad hai
Woh maheki raatein, saari saugaatein
Bheegi meri aankhon se aansu beh chale
Kisse kuch puraane mil gaye...Rone ke bahaane mil gaye...
Kisse kuch puraane mil gaye...rone ke bahaane mil gaye...


"Vidya..." She hears him whisper in her ears softly...


*Sorry for the sadness...It's just for a few more parts...next part it will be a different song...Saagar's point of view...it isn't much...but hope you like it...and hopefully it isn't confusing.*
Edited by Wafah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Excellent!!! Iluv this fan fic ur really great
i love it countinue soon!!!

Rabiah
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
oh wow!
dude i love it!!!!!
can you make it a little bit longer??
pwease
pwetty pwease
please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Wow! Great chapter! Hope you continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
WOWWW great chapter awwww it's soo saddd 😭 😭 Amazing update!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
that was sooo good your an amazing writer.. I loved how there were flashbacks and everything I could totally picture that!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
thnx 4 updatin hun nice part plz cntinu

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