Tistaa's FF:Chalte Chalte(02/12/12 on page 8) - Page 3

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Anandi wakes up and find that the bus is standing near a small tea shop.The journey is long so the Manager decides to give a small relaxation break.Anandi get down from the bus and become lost in the beauty of the nature.She finds herself surrouned by green Pyne trees…………the breez is cold but it's chilling her heart and soul………she closes her eyes for sometime to feel the satisfaction.Then again she opens her eyes and move little forward and see the great Himalayan Mountain Range in front of her……….she was so much impressed to see the Himalaya that see forgets to take the picture.

Suddenly she hears some giggling from little far.She follows the voices and finds some little children are standing in a row and that strange co-passenger is taking their snaps.Both the children and that man looks equally happy and excited during the photo session.Anandi become lost in the innocence of the incident.The purity of the nature and the purity of smile in the face of that man are complementing each other and that brings smile on her lips also without knowing.This is first time anandi watching him standing.He is very tall more or less 6' of height and with well maintained body.He is wearing a black jeans with sky blue T shirt.He is looking like the son of nature.Anandi was totally mesmerised by his looks and personality.

Suddenly the Bus's horns honk and breaks Anandi's trance.She comes back into reality which makes her upset because as soon as she comes into the reality the flashback of her past comes into in front of her eyes which has changed her totally and made her believe that there is no place of innocence,trust,love in this World.She ashmed as well as disgusted of herself.How could she forgets those incidents of last month?How could she forgets What life has given her in return of her innocence?

She shackes her head in disgust.Her eyes suddenly become teary.She turn back and start walking quickly towards the bus because that honk makes that man looks towards the bus and she does not want to let him know about her presence about her weakness."No Andy not again…………you can't show your emotions to a man again.You know what will be the result……..theses men can never understand the feeling of any girls….let them think that you are a only proudy and spoilt and selfish girl because you have experienced that how nasty game they can play with somebody's love and emotions…. "Anandi says this in mind while walking.She wipes her tear and again cover herself with the naakchaadi avatar.

Then she hears the voices of that stranger and those little childern …………

"………..Bye my little friends"

"………………Bye Shiv bhaiya…………aap bohut ache ho………..humme bhul maat janaa"

"……….kabhi nahi bhulunga………..promise"

Anandi gets up on the bus and sits on her own seat.

"…………so 'Shiv'……….this is what his name………..pata nahin is akhdu naam Shiv kisne raakh diya………..huh………..kaha Mahadev aur kaha yeh…………."she talks in her mind by making face while watching him getting on the bus.

Shiv sits on his seat and again close his eyes without even looking at her.One thing she doesn't understand about herself why does his coldness towards her make her so restless.She doesn't know him totally and according to her, he is a very proudy person whome she can't even tolerate.But again something in him makes her curious to know more about Shiv.Her mind splits into two different personality during the jouney …………….one personality refrain her from Shiv and another personality is pushing her towards Shiv…………making her desparate to tell him everything about herself……….to hear something more about him by his own mouth.She becomes totally helpless as her two minds are batteling constantly within her.

She talks herself in mind,"Oh Andy yeh tere sath ho kya raha hay?tu yahan aiethi shanti dhundne……shanti to dur tu to pagal hoti dikh rahi hay.Oh God whyare you so crue with mel?"The mental trauma keeps her restless through out the jouney and atlast they reach at Darjeeling.The Manager takes them to their hotel and gives the keys of their room and remind everybody about the next day's sight seeings.

Anandi enters into the room.She was both physically and mentally tired.She seats near the window and keeps staring outside with her hurted mind………….

Precape(Anandi and Shiv's first open conversation)your comments needed.

Piyuu_SRK thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww tista...its so fresh and lovely 😳 just like you 🤗
Update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
its so cute
update soon😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
its very interesting, pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
OH MY GOD! Your precap is outstanding! I am dying to read d next part!
Hmmm... So an idiot man had hurt her a month ago.. Maybe that jagat...just guessing. Loved your update. Especially the part where Anandi is noticing Shiv with the children.
And the precap... I just can't wait to know the next!!
Thanks 4 d pm and your FF is AWESOME! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Thank you all for your sweet comments😳...love you all🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Lovely update Tistaa...loved the developments! Do continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pinki, I had told you I'd be in here tomorrow ... but got waylaid on the way😭

Your FF is wonderful and developing so well!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Vedo and Gina Thank you so much for your sweet comments🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls update soon pls update soon.
I can't wait anymore to read the open talk between Shiv and Anandi. 😃
Just loving your ff. 😊
And again my song goes on- plsss updateee sooon 😆

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