Tistaa's FF:Chalte Chalte(02/12/12 on page 8)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hj, Guys it's my first attempt for a FF please tolerate the mistakes because my hindi and English sucks.Now the story begins'''''

It's the story of 21 years old a girl named Anandi Singh the only daughter of a sweet upper middle class family.She is a laadli of her family.She lives with her parents and with her old Dadi. She is the most beautifull as well as quite intelligent girl of the city.They have their own small but very nice bunglow at Mount Abu.Mountain is weakness of Anandi.her dream is someday she will treck at the top of a mountain and will see whole Himalayan Range with her dream boy.She is little spoilt but she has a golden heart with lots of love within it.But a suddeny a incident has happeneded in Anandi's life Which has chaged a lot of things within 1 month''''.

NOW the story take 1 month leap and we have found our Anandi at the Bus Stop of NGP(NGP stands for New Jalpai Guri the main gateway to reach for Darjeeling situated in West Bengal a Awesome dreamland for any Mountain lover) .The Bus is about to leave and our Anandi rushes towards the Bus and somehow manage to catch it.But she is very angry because Travel Manager does not give her Window side seat.How could he do that ?after all she is Andy''' the ultimate heroin of Mount Abu! She is creating a horrible scene with the Manager by shouting at him as soon as she gets up to the bus.Poor Manager is sooo fed up and then he gives up and say go and ask that man if he his ready to exchange the seat as he's got the Favourite seat of our Anandi and seat is just beside her's.Anandi looks at the man and thinks 'Now who is this moron''Aaarrgghh'..God I cant believe that I have to request a man for a seat Huh !.I am not going to request him just command him and he will be ready'.Now she reaches towards the man and stand by his side and says' with full attitude ''Hey Mister'..come on move'''. this is my favourite seat so you move to my seat and let me sit on yours'.The man gives no answer and Anandi cant see his expression as he covers his face with a cowboy like hat.Anandi asks him again but no answer.Then again and again'''.now this is the limit how could he ignore her?Anandi 's become red with anger and shouts-"Are you deaf?cant you hear what I am saying.Dekho Achhi tarike se bol rahu hoon ye seat mujhe de do nahi to bohot pachtaogay''.I am warming you''Tum jante nahi main kaun hoon''."At that time that stranger removes his Hat and says with a very cold but firm voice '"is it a Dhamki?beside whatever it is I don't bother .If you need something which is technically others then you should request them not to order to give that."Anandi is soo much shocked as she cant believe that someone could talk to her like that.Her jaws are drpped with anger.Then the stranger again says "if you need this seat you have to request me and I'll leave the seat happily.Now tell me are you ready?"

As I think you Guys already have gussed who is this Misterious Man.Now Plz tell me if you guys like it or not then I'll update it.OMG I am so much tensed but tell the truth only.

INDEX:PART 1-Page 1 PART 5-Page 8
PART 2-Page 2
PART 3-Page 3
PART 4-Page 5
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SujaK thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start Tistaa!! Please continue soon..
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Great start Tistaa 👏 do continue soon..

I loved the fact that u r story is completely different from BV 😳 and also I imagined Pratzii actually being the nakchadi Ms. Mount Abu 😆 Shiv ka entry bhi zordaar tha 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its nice..n different...so full on fighting mode...both!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its really very nycc..do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow its nice and different !!! i liked it tistaa are u a bengali kya ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice storyline and a nice start Tistaa...Go ahead with the FF...Eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Tistaa, awesome start! 👏
I am loving the plot, do continue soon! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was good start.. jaldi se update karo..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all for reading the story😳I am overwhelmed by your sweet comments.😊

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