Tistaa's FF:Chalte Chalte(02/12/12 on page 8) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Very Nice!😃 Do Continue.😊 I know who is this Mysterious Man...😆
Very eager to know what will happen next and what was the incident that had happened a month ago. And about your writing style - It's very good👍🏼

By d way, do continue and pm me whenever you update... I am so much curious to read next part.
And for this part - It's really very very very good⭐️
God Bless.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: faith_hope

Very Nice!😃 Do Continue.😊 I know who is this Mysterious Man...😆

Very eager to know what will happen next and what was the incident that had happened a month ago. And about your writing style - It's very good👍🏼

By d way, do continue and pm me whenever you update... I am so much curious to read next part.
And for this part - It's really very very very good⭐️
God Bless.

Oh my God Anjaani your comments make me Blush😳thank you so much.I'll definatly PM you whenever I'll update and wait darling this 1 month mistry is very important part so wait for little😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys……..here is the new updates……….

Anandi is so much shocked that she has lost the words.She just stands with her rolled eyes.But the Man is still calm and watching her without any type of reaction.It's irritating her so much.Now the poor tour manager comes near to them and request her to settle down as the bus is running and she could fall down any time.But Anandi has already taken this as a matter of her ego so she says that she is not going to sit anywhere if she could not get that seat………she will travel all the way by standing……..this statement make the manager more hopeless and he request the Man to cooperate but the man is also reluctant to compromise and says very calmly and quietly"I have told her earlier that I am ready to move if she asks me gently and normally without her unwanted attitude."

The manager comes to conclusion that this dispute is unsettleable by him and he moves away.Anandi is standing by the side of the man and making face towards him as she can't find any other way to show her anger because he is closing his eyes.Suddenly "OOUUCCHH"Anandi screams……….

The bus takes a 'U' turn and jerks so heavily.Anandi losts her balance and fall down.She closes her eyes as she is definite that she is going to get hurt so badly and that'll leads to the Satyanash of her journey.But when she opens her eyes she found herself at the Lap of that irritating man.After getting rid of her fear she looks at the face of that man and sees that his face hasn't changed much but she"s found a little "HOPELESS WITH THE SITUATION" kind of expression.Then she looks at the other passengers.They all are gawnking at them.Because the scene is totally filmy.Two so beautifull persons……..soo close……..uuufff.

Some of the backside and cornerside passengers stand up to see the whole scene because from their seat they can only see TWO FINE PEDICURED LEGS OF ANANDI because she was wearing a shortskrit.The manager rush towards them and then ask her if she is OK or not.Anand again starts shouting at him……telling that it is his fault as he does not give her that seat.Then suddenly that man opens his mouth and says something and that makes Anandi's mouth shut……………

That Man:"Hey Ms Attitude why are you scolding that Bechara Manager?Your stupid desperation for the seat make you fall.So stop making the passenger including me unconfortable and seat on your place because next time you may not be as fortunate as this time because this is not nescessary that every time you'll going to fall on my lap."

Some teenager boys and girls are teasing her by saying" what is the desperation for?is it for the seat or for the greed for sitting on a hunk's lap…………what a fortune"and blah blah……

Anandi is totally tired, pissed and embarrassed with the situation she bangs her leg at the floor,Kicks the seat…….and sits on her seat which is beside that man.Very soon she falls asleep…………(Precape:Anandi is lost in the beauty of nature)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Since everybody's mood including mine also is off so I think to update my story😊for give you guys some chill...it's a small attempt...but now you guys can make my mood happy by commenting on it...plz do comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Anandi falling on d lap of Shiv, ehem ehem, I mean d mysterious man. Wow.
And I think that bus seat is related to her past very closely. Just guessing.
BTW thanks for the pm. And yeah, pls, pyar mohabbat jaldi lao kya karen AnSh k pyar se Jo obsessed hu... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Awesome update Tistaa! 👏 I am enjoying your plot line a lot!
Do continue soon! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
@Myra,Anjaani,Vedo Thanx for your comments🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Super storyline...a desirable change ans seeinh aggressive Anandi is atreat to mind and heart :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Wow ! Its realy different tista ! 👏 👏

Loved it ! 😳 This Anandi is like saanchi 😆 😆
Do continue soon... 😉

And sowiee...im late
love you dear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
ohho..where was this thread..y i didnt notice it..i love AnSh nokjhok...umm u put anandi in shiv's lap 😆

update soon

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