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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Loved it! It was different and unique, really well written :)

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

maine abi tak kisi ko ni kiya pm😛
abi karugi😆

hmm 😆
here is my comment di
beautifully written
liza part was small bt cute n sweet
hmm false hope 😆
arjun bro pov abt sakshi so nyc
in btww end ho gya 🥱
ohk
hats off di 👏
lovely

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nicky13

@nicky13

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Aww it's really very nice ... Arjun ki feelings for the rest of the team he is sweet inside but spicy outside ... Everyone was shocked after read the diary ... But what is this Liza end v ho giya... Chal koi na it's was really very-2 nice story and concept ... Thanks for giving us Arjun's Diary :)

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

wow...
i really liked it...!!!!
I liked the way u wrote Arjun's POV about everyone sooo nicely...in Arjun's style only...i mean the dialogues...
last lines about the secret not being leaked as it was in trusted hads...was well written...
I REALLY liked your poems...they were the best part !!!
😊

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Waise "woh" log dikhte toh nai hai tere thread pe but I hope "silent read" zaroor kare😆

Kya sahi bayaan diya hai " a certain somebody" ke barre mein.Saare din rote rehte hai,"rude hai, indifferent hain "scene" nai milte, falana dalana falana dalana falana dalana🥱

This is what he thinks of her.No kami in appreciating what she does for the team.Acceptance of her jovial nature also👏👏👏

Loved what he thinks of Liza🤣

kamaal ki shayari❤️

Well done,Piya jee!👍🏼

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

@zuby 🤣🤣🤣 ur first line

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Sakuu
Loved it! It was different and unique, really well written :)

thanks dear😊

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: abrol.gold
Liza Bada karna tha na itna chota sa update wo bhi the end No No I want more
But Beautiful

itna bada OS ka chota sa mat bol yaar

os mean one shot 😆 😆 herz 3!

dil tod diya😆 😆

btw thanks 4 liking ds😊

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
reswa reee

unres.

ab apki tarif mein kya kahoon mata jee? shabd kam pad rahe hain😳 sukariya-sukariya😃

coming back to os, arjun's pov about saakshi and liza...well tumne bohot dikhaya abt liza, kash show mein bhi itna hi dikhate🤢= 🤣

and about saakshi, u didnt miss anything...everything was there.= yes , isse jyada kuch mila hi ni😃

and in the last, mujhe to laga now they are gone, as sys aur dammit dono the waha...chalo bach gaye.= ab kya marvayegi baccho ko, secret rakhege , vo kam h kya?😆

loved the three shot. and want more serious works from u= now stop it all
muaaah