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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tintin0602

yaar i read this all again but starting me hi i had tears in my eyes... i cant handle this riya's matter yaar... she and arjun were good pair. her death is still unbelieveable for me.. i too wish she was here..

anyways...
i love ur writing as usual...


thanks for commted herz madam!😆 👏


ha mereko bi uski bahut yaad aati h
mai toh bahut roi thi uss dina
vo epis maine kabi dobaara ni dekha 😡 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
isha kahan se tapak pari?? and no PM to frnds wah...

and mummy who is tintin?? ur frnd from DDEJ forum??

and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
(Thanks for big help me tintin0602 aka Juhi from DDEJ forum bcz i missed many arakshi scene and Riya, who helped me for many other scene in this part , love u guys 🤗 )


Har baar uski aankho mein apne liye maine bahut se saval aur chinta dekhi hai, mujhse pucha bhi tha usne uss din ki mai thik hu ya nahi , tut chuka tha main, thoda sukun mila tha uss din usse sunkar... mujhe meri zindgi ki parvah nahi hain lekin abi mera ek mission adhura hain. jo mujhe kisi bhi haalat me pura karna hain.

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ETF ko ek acchi Forensic Doctor ki bhi bahut zarrorat thi, tab hume ek intelligent Dr. mili, Liza, she is very sincere, she is the part of etf, pahle din jab aai to sayad Shree ko janti thi...Shree ko specky bol rahi thi, acchi dost hai Shree ki... jaha girls jane me bhi darrti hai, waha ye diagnose karti hai dead bodies ko.
Zajjba jab dil me hota hain...
Manzil khud hi mil jaati hain...
Kasti paar ho hi jati hain...
Bas kinare ko dundna baki hain...


Aisha-Sakshi ke sath acchi bonding hai, kai baar inn teeno ko bate karte suna hain, dusro ko chuna lagane me bhi maheer hai, smile. kuch discussion chal raha tha aisha aur sakshi ke sath , pata nahi kya but jaise hi mujhe dekha , aisha ke sath bagh gai, aur sakshi ko vahi chod gai.

Ek aur new entry hui ETF mein wild card entry ki tarah, Sakshi, jabse aayi hai, dimag ki dahi kar rakhi hain isne.. kya pagal ladki hai, bas apni bakwass karni hai ise. kai baar meri samjh se bahar ho jati hain, this girl never listen to me, really sometimes i feel very disgusted, Case ke beech me bhi joke! Mujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai.. aur mai use bhi daant deta hu. but wo auro ki tarah nahi hai, wo wapas mujhe suna deti hai. Lekin vo apni jagah kuch hadd tak thik thi ab har koi mere najariye se thodi hi chalega,aakhir masti-majak sabko pasand hai, Starting mein mujhe lagta tha ki iski koi zarrorat nahi hain ETF mein.

But still she is very good crime reporter.. kai cases solve karne me bahut help bhi ki and i can feel that she is still hiding something from all of us.. may be the pain in her heart with her smile.many times i am angry with her , but she is calm even in storms.

Kuch Raste hain pathareele aur anjaan...
Kuch manzeele pana nahi hain itna aassaan...
Aise chahre par acchi lagti hai bas muskaan...
Samundar ke kinare ghar banana nahi hain itna aassan...

I still remember her words about eft member, she told me that i don't respect there feelings, wo mujhe respect karte hai or mai unhe torture karta hu. it hurted me that day. Chay pilane mein toh ustaad hain, raat ko thermos me bhi chay sath mein le ke aai, mujhe laga tha majak kar rahi hain, and i can't believe, ek din wo chai leke table pe rakh gayi, ek chit ke sath sorry bolke, use laga mujhe pata nahi chalega, i know wo window ke peeche thi. she care for me, aur ek police vala hone ke nate main chahta hu use kuch bhi na ho... She deserves a lovable, kind heart person, jo uska sath de, jise uski parvah ho...usse ye baat samjhni bahut zarrori hain ki pyar mein dard nahi diya ja sakta kisi ko...

Once she annoyed me so much that i send her out of etf, but she challenged me and according to what she said she came back. She was the first girl, in etf who does nothing but gives us so much valuable information, that is very helpful in case.
when she was injured, i was feeling guilty. she was working at night bt was adamant and not ready to come with me. she was right, meri wajah se hi to use injuries aayi thi. but i got so much disgusted when i came to know the real truth. Ab kya zarrorat thi usse apni chhot ka juttha bahana karne ki? I know she wanted to get my attention but aise bhi koi attention leta hai... But after that wo thoda sudhar gayi hai. I saw something in her eyes for me when she was reading a diary of a girl in love.. i know she likes me.. But Main kisi koi false hope nahi de sakta...aur kya mere dil mein aisa kuch hain?

(after listen that Sakshi a little nervous and then suddenly someone come in the cabin and everyone shocked... )

ye kya ho raha hai yaha??
Uff tumne toh dara hi diya tha , aao-aao Liza! said Aisha
what happen sakshi? said Liza, Are you upset??
Sakshi: nothing Liza, i am Ok!
Liza: vaise chal kya raha tha yaha, tum sab ek sath...Specky tum hi kuch bata do, ye kya hai chotu?? aur ye Diary! kiski hain??
Shree: Don't call me specky!! haa, aur tum chup hogi tabhi toh hum kuch batayege! Samjhye ya samjhaun...i mean Arjun sir ki hai,
Liza: what?? pagal ho kya, kuch bhi, kisi ki diary thodi hi padhte hai, tum log bhi na...vaise kya likha hai unhone?? lol, Liza murmured, Arjun Sir...(everyone shocked she tried to snatch it from Chotu's hand, because she was just kidding.)

But tabhi Arjun sach me vahi aa jata hai , ye kya party laga rakhi hai tum logo ne yaha?? said Arjun.
Kuch kaam-dham nahi hain kya?? lagta hai aajkal log sudharne lage hai, tabhi tum log itne free ho, right?( Now they were really tensed)

Chotu: S...s...s..Sir, k...k...k kuch bhi nahi, hum log bas aise hi...
Arjun: aise hi, aise hi kya???

(But suddenly Rathore came there and...)

Rathore: we got a case guys, let's go team! (everyone looked at each other and gave high5 look, bach gaye!!)

Aisha- chalo guys chalte hain...
Shree- diary?
Chotu- usse yahi pe hi pe rakh de.
Liza- i want to read it
Aisha- hum baad mein bata denge kya tha us mein...ab chalo guysss

They all left cabin, leaving behind lone diary on the table, holding many words from a man who is supposed to indifference to world. His secrets are open now, but its in trusted hands...they would not leak it ever.



The End.
Plz tell me how is it???😊

Edited by lizadavidmm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
reswa reee

unres.

ab apki tarif mein kya kahoon mata jee? shabd kam pad rahe hain😳

coming back to os, arjun's pov about saakshi and liza...well tumne bohot dikhaya abt liza, kash show mein bhi itna hi dikhate🤢

and about saakshi, u didnt miss anything...everything was there.

and in the last, mujhe to laga now they are gone, as sys aur dammit dono the waha...chalo bach gaye.

loved the three shot. and want more serious works from u
muaaah
Edited by riyasarkar007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😡
pm ni kiya
btaya ni
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Posted: 11 years ago
Liza Bada karna tha na itna chota sa update wo bhi the end No No I want more
But Beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

😡
pm ni kiya
btaya ni


maine abi tak kisi ko ni kiya pm😛
abi karugi😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abrol.gold

Liza Bada karna tha na itna chota sa update wo bhi the end No No I want more

But Beautiful

liza ka part bana karne ki liye show mein bada dikhana bhi to chahiye tha na😛 btw ur earlier account get blocked right?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

liza ka part bana karne ki liye show mein bada dikhana bhi to chahiye tha na😛 btw ur earlier account get blocked right?



i think vo mujhe Liza bol ri hai not her🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm



i think vo mujhe Liza bol ri hai not her🤣

🤣🤣🤣oops sorry (gopi style)

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