OS: Arjun's Diary:- Beyond our imagination! - Page 14

Originally posted by: Sakuu

Loved it! It was different and unique, really well written :)

Originally posted by: Payal_156

hmm 😆
here is my comment di
beautifully written
liza part was small bt cute n sweet- ab uske char ke accrg. yahi tha mere paas describe karne ko😆 😆
hmm false hope 😆
arjun bro pov abt sakshi so nyc
in btww end ho gya 🥱
ohk
hats off di 👏
lovely

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

mummy please reply to zuby i am dying to read it 🤣

and i did what u say to me in PM abt sharing...lets see if they reply😉 though hope is zero from that🤢

Originally posted by: nicky13

Aww it's really very nice ... Arjun ki feelings for the rest of the team he is sweet inside but spicy outside ... Everyone was shocked after read the diary ... But what is this Liza end v ho giya... Chal koi na it's was really very-2 nice story and concept ... Thanks for giving us Arjun's Diary :)

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

wow...
i really liked it...!!!!
I liked the way u wrote Arjun's POV about everyone sooo nicely...in Arjun's style only...i mean the dialogues...
last lines about the secret not being leaked as it was in trusted hads...was well written...
I REALLY liked your poems...they were the best part !!!
😊

Originally posted by: DesiiiDivaaa

Nice ending 😊

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Waise "woh" log dikhte toh nai hai tere thread pe but I hope "silent read" zaroor kare😆 Can u believe darling just 140 viewers and reply 10 in 2 hours in 1st part of ds OS, hope u get it 😆

Kya sahi bayaan diya hai " a certain somebody" ke barre mein.Saare din rote rehte hai,"rude hai, indifferent hain "scene" nai milte, falana dalana falana dalana falana dalana🥱 jo mere paas likhne ko tha vo likh daala, aur isse jyada diya lekar bhi nahi milta, full swimming ki niche se uper tak , kuch hath ni aaya😆

This is what he thinks of her.No kami in appreciating what she does for the team.Acceptance of her jovial nature also👏👏👏 Cv's ki bate unhi pe chod dete hai yaar, sabka likhna tha herz just arjun's POV, now tell me how is it?? Arjun hai na sab kuch karne ke liye, aur kya chahiye??😃

Loved what he thinks of Liza🤣 Liza vale mein itni rofling?? samjh ni aai, aisa kya tha isme??😆

kamaal ki shayari❤️ sukriya-sukriya😉

Well done,Piya jee!👍🏼 🤗