OS: Arjun's Diary:- Beyond our imagination!

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Sakuu
Loved it! It was different and unique, really well written :)

o thank u dear that u lyk it😃

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@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

mummy please reply to zuby i am dying to read it 🤣

and i did what u say to me in PM abt sharing...lets see if they reply😉 though hope is zero from that🤢

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Payal_156

hmm 😆
here is my comment di
beautifully written
liza part was small bt cute n sweet- ab uske char ke accrg. yahi tha mere paas describe karne ko😆 😆
hmm false hope 😆
arjun bro pov abt sakshi so nyc
in btww end ho gya 🥱
ohk
hats off di 👏
lovely

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
mummy please reply to zuby i am dying to read it 🤣

and i did what u say to me in PM abt sharing...lets see if they reply😉 though hope is zero from that🤢

abi thodi der ke liye chup rahogi tum😆

good👍🏼

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: nicky13
Aww it's really very nice ... Arjun ki feelings for the rest of the team he is sweet inside but spicy outside ... Everyone was shocked after read the diary ... But what is this Liza end v ho giya... Chal koi na it's was really very-2 nice story and concept ... Thanks for giving us Arjun's Diary :)

andar se nariyal

bahar se karela nd bomb type na...😆

liza ke bare me ab aur isse jyada kya likhu??😕 😆

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..
wow...
i really liked it...!!!!
I liked the way u wrote Arjun's POV about everyone sooo nicely...in Arjun's style only...i mean the dialogues...
last lines about the secret not being leaked as it was in trusted hads...was well written...
I REALLY liked your poems...they were the best part !!!
😊

Arjun's style just awesome

have a little try dear😊

thanks for d praise of ds one😃

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: DesiiiDivaaa
Nice ending 😊

thank u so much😃

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Read all the parts just now...

Just awesome Priya..👏 But i can i ask one thing try to lessen ur hindi dialogues poor me had trouble reading but i got there in the end... Loved the ending⭐️⭐️

Deepz

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tintin0602

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

thanks for adding my name ... rofl...

u know i am there for you anytime dear...

waise yeh part bhi i read so many times...

its really beyond imagination...

i like the ending

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Waise "woh" log dikhte toh nai hai tere thread pe but I hope "silent read" zaroor kare😆 Can u believe darling just 140 viewers and reply 10 in 2 hours in 1st part of ds OS, hope u get it 😆

Kya sahi bayaan diya hai " a certain somebody" ke barre mein.Saare din rote rehte hai,"rude hai, indifferent hain "scene" nai milte, falana dalana falana dalana falana dalana🥱 jo mere paas likhne ko tha vo likh daala, aur isse jyada diya lekar bhi nahi milta, full swimming ki niche se uper tak , kuch hath ni aaya😆

This is what he thinks of her.No kami in appreciating what she does for the team.Acceptance of her jovial nature also👏👏👏 Cv's ki bate unhi pe chod dete hai yaar, sabka likhna tha herz just arjun's POV, now tell me how is it?? Arjun hai na sab kuch karne ke liye, aur kya chahiye??😃

Loved what he thinks of Liza🤣 Liza vale mein itni rofling?? samjh ni aai, aisa kya tha isme??😆

kamaal ki shayari❤️ sukriya-sukriya😉

Well done,Piya jee!👍🏼 🤗