collab SS: Dua-last part pg 10

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hi friends...
its me pari along with our dear payal di, presenting a serious story...
phew... intro hi mushkil hai yaar...


oki...
you all know ki payal di ArNi pankha and me...mešŸ˜†koi bhi ho chalega... i love arjun and sameer...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
oki.

payal di gave me idea day before y'day, we discussed long hours yesterday and i wrote it today.😊

she was with me in every step, overlooking my work, helping me, bearing my confused state of mind😊

this is entirely payal di's concept, o i can say one of her dream concept outlined by me😃
i proudly say that my first ever collab work is with my dear payal di...😳
if it wasnt her i would not be able to write it...😊

as i said earlier its ArNi story, so no other girls...(i mean for arjun)šŸ˜‰
hum dono, arjun ki behanon ne milke ke ek complete case ke baare mein likha hai. its intense drama, purely fictional and emotional.
chahiye to tissues rakhlo saath mein...
note: if i have hurt anyone's feeling i am sorry...
nothing intentionally done😳


so presenting collab work 'DUA'


please hum donon ki koshish ke liye likes to banta hai na...no force...😊
comments bhi dher saare kijiye...😊😊

i ll update all the parts...
zyada lamba nahin hai...
pms after i update 1st part



helping hand:
chapter 1: page 1 (next post)
chapter 2: page 3
chapter 3: page 6
chapter 4: page 8
chapter 5(last): page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 1:

DUA

Zindagi... pal mein hasa de, aur doosre pal rulade...

Sukh shaanti se bhare zindagi mein pal mein hi museebaton ka toofaan uthta hai..

Bas zindagi ke utaar-chadav mein yahin dua hai hai ki jo bhi zindagi hum guzare wo desh ke kaam aaye...

***********

Sun rays peeped from the window...first rays of sun, always gave him new boost to work for nation...everytime, he saw these rays it reminded him that he was given another day to serve his country, save lives and punish criminals...


He was Arjun Suryakant Rawte, a super cop, for whom his work was always first.

He felt a soft body snuggling to him, he knew who it was.

It was roshni, his roshni...his love...his wife..

He was lost in her serene beauty which was broken by the beep of his mobile phone. He disentangled himself from her and received the call. He quickly showered and came out in his work dress. He grabbed a bag and stuffed few cloths and other necessities and pecked roshni's forehead and left house with a note on pillow.

******************

ETF

Everyone in ETF was tensed.

Arjun entered and saw his friend- saale sahib cum boss sameer Rathod, pacing up and down. The rest team seemed worried too.

"kya hua sameer?"

"Shree is missing Arjun. We are not able to track him now"

"but Shree kaise??"

"jab wo last time humse baat kar raha tha that time he was being followed. Pata nahin ab wo kis haal mein hai..."

"kuch nahin hua hoga usse..."

**

At that time commissioner entered the office.

"sorry to call you all this early. But emergency hai. Delhi mein bomb alert diya gaya hai. Aur humare sources ke hisaab se ye sikander ka kaam hai..."

"sikiander... ye to wahi hai na jiske baare mein Shree hume information nikal ke de raha tha? The same person after whom Shree was?"

"yes and now that Shree is been abducted, I think we have to take drastic measures. I want Arjun to go on undercover mission."

"but sir, undercover mission??" Sameer was very much tensed knowing the fact that sikander was a monster in disguise.


"haan. We don't have any choice Rathod. Home ministry se special orders aaye hai. We don't know anything about these blasts. Kab? Kahan- kaise??? Kuch nahin pata. Isiliye we have decided ki Arjun sikander ke gang mein shamil hoga aur ll give us details"


"yes sir. I am ready"

"par Arjun roshni...

"roshni will understand sameer. par usse zyada details mat dena. Main aaj hi delhi ke liye nikalta hoon."


"good. Ye lo Arjun. Ye papers. Agar cover blow hua and police grabs you, we will be there but you ll need written proofs. Iss copy ko sambhal ke rakhna apne paas..."

"yes sir. Jai hind"

Arjun hugged sameer and left office with his bag.

**********************

The previous evening, some where else...

"sir...haan ek bada dhamaka plan kiya hai.. nahin...shayad mumbai ya delhi or even bangalore. Poora info nahin mila hai. Bas aap jaldi iss ilakhe mein...aaahhh" his phone was snatched and a block of wood hit his head from behind.

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"hum mein se koi hai jo hume dhoka de raha hai...ya koi to hai jo humare baare isi aur ko information de raha hai.."

"sikander miyan, koi kuch bhi kar le.. humara mission khuda ke mehr se zaroor kamyaab hoga"

"aisa hi ho..."

"bhaijaan..." came a voice from across the room

"kya hai? Aisa kyun chilla rahe ho tum abdul? Hum behre nahin hue hai. Ab bako"

"bhaijaan wo, pata nahin koi aadmi humare ladkon ke haath laga hai. Bohut akad raha hai wo..."

"kaun hai?"

"uske jacket se ye mila hai bhaijaan" he handed him a id

"Shreekant sen, ETF..ye to wahi hai na wo sameer rathod ka chela"

"haan bhaijaan. Aap chaliye mere saath"

**

They reached a dimly lit room. Smell of alcohol and cigarette reached out as soon as the room was opened.

Shree was tied on a chair in the middle of the room. He was badly beaten and was nearly unconscious.

Sikander went to him and laughed out loud seeing a young man who was barely 25.

"ye...ye hai rathod ka aadmi???i chota baccha??hahaha"

Shree just glared sikander hard and said

"baccha ho ya budha. Desh ke liye jaan dene waalon ki koi umr nahin hoti hai sikander. Desh ke liye mar mitne ka jazba har chote bacche maein bhi hai...tum jaise ghlilone insane kko kya pata ki desh prem aaahh" Shree was punched by sikander


"tameez se baat karo humse. Bhulo mat ki hum kitne takatwar hai Shreekant. Tumhare desh mein humare ek ishare se dhamake hote hai. Samjhe?"


"hota hoga. Par ab nahin. Maine tumhare baare mein sab mere team ko bata diya hai. Wo tumhare kisi bhi plan ko kamiyab nahin hone denge"


He was punched again and soon Shree fell unconscious.

"ispe nazar rakho be. Jab hosh mein aaye to unke plan ke baare mein pata karo"

He went out to watch mujra performed by one of the girl who was trafficked by his men.

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Roshni was livid.

It was not new for her to see er husband leaving her with just a note. But this morning she felt it odd. An uneasiness feeling creeping in her. Unknown fear gripping her heart. She tried calling Arjun but could not get through him.

"bhagwan, aap unki raksha karna.. unhe sahi salamat waapas lana"

****

to be continued...

will be eagerly waiting for your likes and comments...😊


Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME start
thanks for PM!
Payali di i expected arni ss from youšŸ˜‰
even i love arni pair:)
continue soon!
Edited by aliya_begh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Awesome SS!!!

Fantastic start!!
Loved it..

Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one dear. Update . And pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept pari n payal di..
First arni ss..
Best of luck.
And the story is super intresting.
Shree's dialouges were awesome...
Do continue..
Thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very goood and realistic concept... :)
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start... Thanks for pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start..
Nyc update..
Hop shree nd arjun will b safe..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh man...my shree is kidnapped...

shree's dialogue was fav...so proud of him.

and that sik...no words to describe him...poor ex of a homo sapience,

pls update soon.

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