collab SS: Dua-last part pg 10

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Ahann...
I m loving this SS...
Arjun as Aaqif Miyaan.
Wah Wah...
SuBhanAllah...
Marhaba.
Ma Sha Allah.
Humein toh Aaqif Miyaan bohut pasand aaye hai.
Whhat????
Aaqif Miyaan aka Arjun is eating a Paan???
Seriously cant believe this.
The story is getting interesting.
Sikander itna ghatiya kisim ka aadmi hai.
Wak... Thooo...
Allah Miyaan usse Jahannum bhi naseeb na kare.
That guy living with Arjun aka Aaqif Miyaan is helping Arjun...
I hope yeh Sikki jaldi se pakra jaaye.
Love it.
Continue please.

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

nice update... Loved the progress in the story... Thanks for pms..

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice update

continue soon

thnx for pm dear

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

ohh wow..
Awesome update..
Arjun as aaqif..
Nw maza aye ga...
Continue soon .)

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

amazing start girls :) loved it

concept is super interesting

arjun is going on a undercover mission

and shree is missing

sikander punched shree 😭 poor guy

awww roshni was so angry

oh so arjun's new name is aaqif

love the way arjun was talking to rehman

arjun was eating pan :) interesting

thanks for the pm

can't wait to read more

continue soon

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Just read it..
It was awesome..
Loved it..

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

roshni loved it

shree dialg superb

supers payal and pari

thanks for pm😃

continue

loved it😉

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Nice start Payal and Pari

loved the first few lines...

looks like a real intense and emotional story!

Hope Arjun will be safe and successful in the mission!

Roshni's state is understandable..

cont soon!

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

superb yaar

eagerly waiitng for arjun and sikanders first meeting

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Awssm concept.
And all of diff one.
Actually i wanna know how arjun n sik became enemy n this the very clear image of that.

Payal di ,pari thank u so much fr giving us such story.