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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
both the parts were awesome and i felt like punching this abdul...
i hope arjun will be safe..
continue soon..
waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awww... my shrreee,,,
sikandarr!!! how dare u punch my shree???
mere hath lag ja beta...!!😡😡
nyc strt...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awsum...
getting interesting...
thnx 4 d pm...
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
bothe the parts were nice
payal and pari nice
i like it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Amazing dr
Claps 4 u
1st f all I like the title it touch the hrt
Superb dr
Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
woohoo!!

interesting...
very interesting...


haw!!!!! hamare Arjun ji,
oops. Aaqif miya eating a paan???

subhan Allah!!!
hum to luttgaye ji...

"Khai k paan Banaras wala
Arjun bane aaqif miya...
phir to aisan hua dhamal,
Sikandarwa pe bawal.
o chora,
o chora
Hotnez Marathi mulka!!"



Wah Pari bi aur payal Apa.
U kaa hai ki eey Sasura Arjunwa to dil chura lai gaya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hiee... me back... i had planned to post this part in the morning but was busy studying...so here i am with chapter 3:DUA
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"Rathod sir, kahin arjun sir ki jaan ko koi khatra to nahin hai na?"

Aisha was the only one who had got to know about the details of arjun's undercover mission. She was worried for him as well as for sameer. she had seen how sameer and Arjun were inseparable. All she wished was safe return of Arjun from the mission.

"khatra to hai Aisha. Par wo Arjun hai. I just hope that he says safe. He has already killed keshav, that too in public. Zaahir si baat hai ki uske aadmi Arjun ke peeche honge..."

"sir par roshni?does she know about the mission?"

"I have just briefed her about the developments Aisha. I can't hide this big thing from her..."

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"bhaijaan, ye aaqif hai. Rehman ke pehchaan ka hai. Issi ne us keshav ko udaaya hai" abdul finished his words and pointed to Arjun who stood there nonchalant.


Sikander lifted his gaze from the English magazine he was reading and faced Arjun.


"aaqif...accha naam hai.. kyun maara ussse?" he asked in cruelest voice he could muster so to scare the person infront of him.


"maarne ka bhoot sawar tha. So maar diya maine. Kyun?? Kaho to tujhe bhi uda dun kya?" aaqif said with a smirk.


"AAEE...SAALE...BHAIJAAN KO MARNE KI BAAT KARTA HAI TU...TERI TO..."abdul lept forward and held aaqif's color.


"abe chod... rehman bhai ke pehchan ke ho to chup hun warna... aur tu kya bolraha tha nke baare mein?? Yahan to ye English magazine pakadke baithe hai...ye jya bhala karenge humara?" he released himself from his grip and threw a weary glance to sikander.


Sikander got up from his seat and clapped.

"waah. Maan na padega. Himmat ki daat deni padegi teri. And yes. I am fully educated and I can very well converse in English. So can we come to the point aaqif?"


"yes sure. I had expected an illirate person in your place sikander miyan but I am surprised,on the otherhand, I think I should not be right??!!!."


"arre waah...aap aur English?!!! Kya baat hai? Ab seedhe seedhe batao ki kyun maara usse?why did you kill him? what had he done to you?"


"was he a friend of yours? If not just chill that he is dead. why do you bother about the reason for his death?!!huh?? He destroyed my family and I killed him. tit for tat. Simple."


"why are you here? You seem educated, sharp witted and an absolutely superb shooter... iss duniya mein kyuun aaye ho?"


"educated from London, trained to be a police officer but was never recruited. No money, so no job. Punjab waapas aaya tha kheti sambhalne. Magar ussne meri zindagi barbad kardi. Iss desh ki sarkar ne pehle jeena mushkil kiya hai, phir wo keshav."

Aaqif gritted his teeth. "Isiliye mujhe badla chahiye. Har uss shaqs se jo isski wajah hai."

He looked straight into sikander's eyes.

"accha hai. Kya tu hamare saath kaam karega? Paise milenge. Mauj bhi. Kaam khatarnaak hoga... your life will be at stake. Kya kehte ho?"

"mujhe bas kaam chahiye. Aur kuch nahin. Rahi baat jaan ki baazi lagane ki, mujhe meri zindagi ki koi parwah nahin hai. bas kaam karne mein maza aana chahiye"

"Thik hai. We will see your skills and then see what are you in real aaqif miya.. tab tak ke liye khuda haafis." He turned his back to sikander and followed his other men.

He turned to his follower to take them to their room

"kal taiyar rehna miya. Tasks mushkil hi honge"

"khatron se khelna meri aadat aur shauk dono hai. Khuda haafis"

As soon as he was out of the room, abdul started showering him with questions.

"bhaijaan wo aise kaise aapse aise baat kar sakta hai? Aur aap usse kaise humare saath mila sakte ho? Agar koi policewala nikla to?"

"shhh... itna bolke mere kaan kharab mat karo tum samjhe... hum aise hi usse apne saath nahin milane waale. Kal ka intezar karo abdul... kal ka..."

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Miles away in Mumbai

Next morning.

"bhagwan unke gaye hue itne din hogaye hai. Unki ek phone tak nahin aayi hai. Unki rakhsa karna... unpe koi museebat mat aane dena...main aapse yahin dua karti hun..."

She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned around. She saw her brother sameer and hugged him tight

"bhaisa wo theek to honge na?"

"haan roshni...wo theek hoga. Tum daro mat..."

"bhaaisa par"

"aur ha.. maine tai kiya hai iss baar jab wo waapas aayega to main tum donon ko as husband and wife media ke saamne pesh karoonga. Aaj tak uski baaton ko sun kar chup tha, aur tumhari safety ke liye bhi wohin accha tha. Par ab aur nahin..."

"bhaisa..." she hid her face in his chest.

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Delhi:

"Salaam Aaqif miyan..."

"Salaam sikander bhai.."

"raat ko acche se neend aayi ki nahin aapko?"

"bohut acche se soya main kal raat ko. Shukriya"

"taiyaar ho aapke tests ke liye?"

"ever ready. Lets go"

Arjun strode next to sikander with a gait which shocked every other person present except rehman and sikander.

They went to shooting range and sikander instructed him

"look. I ll give you different ranges and you will shoot. I don't think it is necessary but I want to console my brain that I have chosen the best."

"of course why not sikander bhai."

He went to the range and took the gun, loaded it with bullets and hit the target. Once, twice, thrice, not even once blinking his eyes or flinching when gun recoiled..

Everytime it hit the bull's eye. Not even a single target missed.

"shabhaash.. impressive. Abdul next.moving target laga"

Arjun being a pro hit the target efficiently. this repeated many times for short and long range shooting.


Sikander was already impressed with this man. Even then he called few wrestlers and asked them to knock him down.

Arjun aka aaqif being lean and quick managed to dodge death blows that those wrestlers were using against him, and brought them down.

Sikander stood and clapped.

"waah.. maan gaye. Zubaan to kainchi ki tarah tez hai hi, utni hi kaam mein bhi tez ho. Bomb banana aati hai?"

"no."

"koi baat nahin. Hum sikhadenge tumhe. Ek aakhri kaam hia."

"kya?"

"tumhe apni wafadaari prove karni hogi"

"kya karna hai mujhe?"

"chalo humare saath"


They went to another room where a person was tied and kept.

Arjun saw him and recognized him instantly.

(MV-ye to Shree hai...to iska matlab uss din ye sikander ke haath laga tha... kya haal banaya hai iska...)

"to suno. Ye police ka aadmi hai. Humara koi kaam ka nahin hai. Kamina muh hi nahin khola hai isne. Isse maardo. Phir tum humare saath hamesha ke liye."

"kya kiya hai isne?"

"hum pe nazar rakha tha. Range haatho pakdda gaya. Ab maardo sale ko.."

Arjun lifted his gun and looked straight in the eyes of Shree.

shree saw a similar pair of black eyes boring his eyes... same set of eyes which had glared him at his every mistake, that twinkled when he joked, same eyes that hadd held a brotherly pride...

Realizing it was Arjun Shree blinked his eyes in assurance.

*shot*

Bullet pierced Shree on his chest and blood oozed out. He laid there motionless. Sikander went near him and checked his pulse.

"margaya"

Aaqif(Arjun) turned to abdul and rehman

"iski laash ko door kahin phenkna. Police ka aadmi hai. Yahin kahin dafnane se accha hai unko iske laash ke zariye sandesha bhejo."

"sahi baat hai bhaijaan. Main jaata hun" abdul was on his heels.

"nahn abdul. Tu yahin rahega. Rehman, tum uski laash ko thikane lagaoge aur tum aaqif. Aaj se tum hamare saath ho. Welcome to our team"

"thank you sikander bhai"

Sikander and Arjun hugged each other and Arjun masked his hatred behind a fake smile he had mastered over years.

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to be continued...
hope you liked it!!
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Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
OMG!!!!!

Yaar Pari,
plz shree ko mat marna n plz re.
n thnx 4 Pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Pari...
Yaar,kya cheez likkhi hai.
Ma Sha Allah.
Bohut khoob.
I just loved it.
I know,Shree mara nahi hai.
Shree ne bullet proof jacket pehna hua hai.
Arjun usse zarur bacha lega.
Loved the whole update.
Sikander bhi kitna bewakoof hai.
Humare Arjun ko nahi pehchan saka...
Sikki ne apni shamat bulayi hai.
Hope the mission is successful.
Loved Roshni and Sameer's convo.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
intense story!
well planned plot.
Arjun was amazing...the way he came into the gang

Roshni is Sameer's sister...and what was that about their wedding being kept secret??
I am guessing this as the story which is before Sik became Arjun's enemy and this mission had made Sik kill Roshni...

And Shree? is he really dead for making Arjun a trust worthy person for Sik??

cont soon
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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