Ariya os : You r My Father (Part9/page 20)last

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He open his liitle eyes & found his mother all time smiling face. He immedatly goes to her & hug her "Gud Mrng Mumma" She lift him him in her one hand & sildes d curtains , so sunrays come inside. He instatly hiode his face in his mother's neck. " Oh mumma , your too bad" She smile @ him & ruffles his hairs. She take him a bathroom & brush his teeth, bath him . After bath she covers him in his Harry Poter towl & getv ready him for school. "Oh mumma ab mai bada ho chuka hua, mai khud bhi ready ho skata hue.. aap jaao yaha se " She placed a kiss on his red cheek & goes frm thr to ready his breakfast. He hold his towel with his tiny hands tht his moyher placed around his liitle waist & jumps frm bed. He dragged stool near cupboard & stand on it. thn he slowly opens his mothers cupboard & startes to search something & found wht he want , He take a snap in his hand & look @ him " Pa plz come fast , i need u. " He wips his moist eyes & placed d snap on his place & close d cupboard . He also kept stool on his place , so his mother nt doubted him. He wears his uniform & goes to table. & seat on his chair & start to eat his brekfast. " Shourya plz hurry beta , otherwise w 'll late." He finishes all his breakfast & goes to his mother . his mother ask him " beta bappa ko prnam kiya ? " Shourya runs to small mandir @ thr home. " Bappa plz aaj to unhe mile do ns , pta nahi kaha ghum ho gaye? agar tum mujhe unse mila doge to mai tumhe har roj 5 rs dounga meri pokctmoney se " He heard his mother calling for him. he get ready & goes to school wit his mother. Mid way his mother meetb her frnd. She hold little Shuarya's finger tightly & talk to her frnd. While Shaurya busy in watching rally . tht day sme big political leaders bdy. so . all city enjyng rallys & all. little Shourya laves his mother hand & goes to wit d rally. His mother did nt notice ths. he walk aolng wit rally , he facinated wit clours tht ppl used in a rally to play wit . Suddenely he felt his legs r paining. & looked around bt did nt find his mother , he started to crying loudly. One taal well built man comes to him & ask him what happened & little Shourya is only 5 yrs old , he only wants his mother , no matter what. So , tht man pick him up& goes frm thr. He placed Shurya in his car's front seat & sit on driving seat. he is abt to start d car whn his phn a buzzes he received it " Chotu whr r u?" d person over d phn ask man. " Sir abhi 10 min mai aaya" d man replied.
After 40 mins thy reach d place. Chotu look @ little Shaurya who cried continously . Chotu thinks to himself " kya karu , is andar leke jaau ya.. ha leke jaata hue , iss yaha chod bhi to nahi sakta." he lifts Shaurya in his arms & goes inside of d building. He goes to conferance room. he looked @ his boss. who is writing somthing on a white board wit marker. while his all collgues listens to him. Shrre is first who noticied d small child in Chotu's arms " Are ye kis ka baccha uhta ke llya hai tu ?" Wit tht all looked @ Chotu & liitle Shuarya. Little Shuraya looked @ d whole team in scary & watry eyes & started crying more loudly. He looked @ each & every member. & clingned on to Chotu , bt whn he see him in front of hin he stop crying he started to willing here & there uncomfortably. "Chotu chodo use" one girl ordred him . Chotu leave him , as soon as Chotu keep him on d floor he look here & there statrs running towards man who standing thr , & who placed his hands on his hips. Little Shaurya come running towards him, he stops near to him & litterally hug his legs. & cal him ' Pa ' . D person is in utter shock & look @ his team in a disbelif. Nw all team look & Chotu , thn Rathod & Shauyra who hugged Rathod's legs.
Hey guys plz tell me shold i continue ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's nice. so, shaurya is rathode's son?! Waiting to know more about the story. Please continue. And please add me in ur pm list.
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Originally posted by: abhi_arshilover

It's nice. so, shaurya is rathode's son?! Waiting to know more about the story. Please continue. And please add me in ur pm list.

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Continue...samje ya smjau..

Ys boss samaj gayi.😊
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very nice plzz update soon
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wow shaurya is rathore's son..sounds like interesting..carry on n thanks for the pm 👍🏼
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shaurya rathore's son!!!
who is his mother??!!!suspense-suspense..!!
but shaurya is soo sweet 😊
hez so obedient and the way he told his mother that he is grown up is so adorable
do continue and thanks for the pm
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wahhh

kya concept hai...tum ek story khatm karke dusari nayi story ke saath tayar ho...awesome dear

shoury itna cute hai ... uska harry potter wala towel hmmm bahot bada fan hai lagta hai...ohh when he say that he'll be ready by himself i feel like give kiss on his cheek same as his mother give him...5rs old young man...

jab beta ita cute hai...usake papa itane handsome hai...to muma kitani beautiful hogi...by the way when u r going revel the truth of his mother ?


love it ...thank you so much for the pm



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Originally posted by: priya00147

shaurya rathore's son!!!
who is his mother??!!!suspense-suspense..!!
but shaurya is soo sweet 😊
hez so obedient and the way he told his mother that he is grown up is so adorable
do continue and thanks for the pm

Mystry unfold soon.
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wahhh


kya concept hai...tum ek story khatm karke dusari nayi story ke saath tayar ho...awesome dear

shoury itna cute hai ... uska harry potter wala towel hmmm bahot bada fan hai lagta hai...ohh when he say that he'll be ready by himself i feel like give kiss on his cheek same as his mother give him...5rs old young man...

jab beta ita cute hai...usake papa itane handsome hai...to muma kitani beautiful hogi...by the way when u r going revel the truth of his mother ?


love it ...thank you so much for the pm



Hmmm kash mai uski Maa hti.. 😆
mystery unfolds soon dear..

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