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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was gud
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesom awesom update 😊
loving thr past specially thr first meeting and at arjun's home 😊
itna sb khana bnega toh kon bura bolega 😉
update soon 😊
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wow

i like the last part ...

keep update i like this os...
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Poor saloni yaar...kya kya harkate krne lagi bechari
Now to dinner tyn..will b intrestinng
Update soon soon
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Hey it was awesome... more over i love stories on rathore... this one too...
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wow..rathore's past sounds interesting..update soon & thanks for the pm 😊
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amazing
loved it
pls update next part soon
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PART 4
Saloni cn't belive her eyes , she sees him again. woow he is Dada 's frnd. Dada omg dada will be killing me if he knows wht im thinking abt he , he , what his name ammm ya Sameer ya Sameer & Saloni. woo nyc pair na bth name starts frm 'S' Saloni talking to her mind. Suddenely she feels tht all buliding shaking she look around & find tht her Dada holding her bth arms & shouting @ her , she hold him tightly & says 'Dada chalo , varna ghar gir jaayega, ' Arjun & Sameer Rathod look @ her amusedly. Arjun check his little sis temputure ,
Arjun : "Tu theek to hai na , kya bol rahi hai , kis ka ghar gir jaayega? "
Saloni : Nahi mujhe laga ki eathquake ho gaya.
Arjun : Buddhu , earthquake nahi , mai tujhe kab se pukar rha tha tune aawaj nahi di , to mai tujhe hila rha tha.. " Tu kya soch rhi thi itna?
Saloni : Yahi ke naam bahut acha hai . ekdum matching matching ... ( She said & bite her lips..& look @ her brother worridly. & stole d glance on Sameer who enjying her behaviour.) (Uff Saloni ye tu kya kar rahi hai , vo sochega ki tu pagal hai. she said to herself.)
Arjun : Matching , kis ka naam ... kya... ( he confusedly ask her)
Saloni : jane do mai jake khana laga deti hue. aap aa jao. ( wit tht she goes to kitchen to avoid Sameer's gaze)
Saloni puts d plate & etc things on d table . Arjun & Sameer bth r tke opposite places. She abt to start to give thm food. whn Arjun's phn buzzes he execuses himself & goes frm thr.
Sameer : ye do hi plates kyu ? Aap nahi khana khane wali hamare saath ?
Saloni : Jiii... n..ahhi to , mai baad mai kha lungi , pehe le aap khana kha lo. (& smiles to him )
Arjun comes thr & inform thm " Sry Sam tu khana kha le mujhe kahi bahar jana padega , imergency hai .
Sameer : Mai saath chalu agar meri jarurat pade to...???
Arjun : Nahi , koi baat hogi to mai cal kar dunga tujhe.
Arjun to Saloni : Acha khayal rakh iska , samaz gayi ya...
Saloni : ( Cut him ) Ha Dada samaz gyi , aap fikr mat kaiji ye .
Arjun goes frm thr. Saloni takes Arjun's plate (tht she filled wit food)
Saloni : chaliye mai aap ko company deti hue. ( & smile @ Sameer . )
thy bth start to eat , Sameer Rathod really enjyng ths food , very delicious food , he remebered his mother's cooking . He abt to put morsel in his mouth , sudenely he feels tht sme soft thing touch his hand. he lift his gaze & found tht Saloni hold his his hand & look @ him scardly.
Sameer : Kya hua , kya baat hai? ( He ask him confusedly )
Saloni : Aaap vo vo aap , Salad mat khaayie na , plz ...
Sameer : par kyu ?
Saloni : vo usme na namak jyada gir gaya mere haath se , pta nahi aaj kal kya kya karti reheti hue , jab se aap mile hai na , tabhi se ye sab kuch chal raha hai ... (wit tht she look @ him with wide big eyes )
Sameer : Jeee (He felt vry astonished on tht , how can girl tell him like ths) ( He also felt vry happy frm his heart , bt he does nt show it ) its k.. ( He look in her eyes he sees lot of emotions r thr , worry , scareness , innocence . ) ( hw cn someone is so childish bt sweet also)
Saloni feels uncomrtable , & leave Sameer's hand , bth ate thr food in a silently. after food Saloni ask him " Aap ko khana kaise laga ?"
Sammer : Badiya tha . mujhe khana khakar meri Maa ki yaad aa gyi.
Saloni : Thx .
Saloni : Aap bhai ko kaise jaante ho ?
Sameer : Actually vo aur mai training mai saath hi hai , ek hi batch ke. ( Rathod & Arjun meet in police training & instatanly connected wit each other)
Saloni : Ohh i see.
Rathod nw sitting on Sofa , & Saloni on chair facing each other .
thy talk on several issues , thr frnds , thr families , thr aims . Rathod observes her closely , she is always chirpy , smiling , understanding , so childish bt also mature girl.he thinks to himself. After tt day he also want to meet her , dn't knw bt he want to see her , talk to her ..
Thy talked bt thy feel tht sme awkwards is still thr between thm . After somtime Sameer Rathod tld her tht he have to go
Saloni : Jee theek hai , par vapis aaye ga jarur , yaha aap ka intjar bhi karta hai . ( & bites her lip again , kya kya bole jaa rahi tu aaj , vo bhi usee she thinks to herself)
He is very astonished by ths girl , she did mistakes all d time & thinks ppl forgive her easily , bt he like d fact , somone waiting for him , he goes to d door , Saloni also goes after him suddenely he turned around , Saloni disbalance herself bcoz of sudden turning towards her & abt to fall , whn Sameer catches her , She hold his shirt , he goes to near her , he could feel her hot breath on his face. he goes vry close to her , her lips away frm him only few centimeters.
Saloni closes her eyes , her heartbeats r faster. Sameer Rathod just look d beauty in front of him . He turn his face towards her ear & whisper , " Vaise mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta kisi se intjaar kar wana , hum jald hi milege." Saloni shot open her eyes & see he smile @ her. Sameer steadies her & goes frm thr. Saloni put her hand on her chest to stop her increasing heartbeat , & watches his back. Sameer turn around & look @ her & sign her bye wit his fingers. Unknowlingly Saloni also does d sme.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahem ahem saloni-rathore 😉
saloni losing her control watching rathod 😉 😳
loving the flashback 😊
do update soon

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