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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
That was a superb update hunnie 😃
love the way Saloni keeps on missing things here n there 😆
n Rathore-Saloni's chemistry is just so beautiful😊
great update n thanks for the pm 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Nice part ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5
Rathod look back @ Shuarya. He is busy dng something. Rathod goes near to him , Shaurya drwaing smething in his drwaing book. Rathod pep in his book , he sees tht llittle one drawing family picture .
Rathod ask him , " Beta ye sab kon hai? "
"Pa ye humari family hai mai , mumma aur tum." (Shurya replied him)
Rathod : Dekho beta mai tumhara Pa nahi hue. mai shyad tumhare Pa jaisa dikhta hue. Par mai tumhari madad jarur karunga tumhare Pa ko dhune ne mai.
Shuarya : (Look @ Rathod with hard glare ) Aap hi mere Pa ho. Aur koi nahi ( he said & goes frm thr , seat besides Riya , who is wrking on files.)
Rathod : (Look helplessly @ Shuarya & turned towards Shree ) Shree pta lagao ki station mai kisi bacche ki gum hone ki report darj ki hai ya nahi. Aur agar hai to uski saari info mujhe chyie.
Rathod ordres Chotu to go again tht place whr he found Shaurya , & inquire abt him . Rathod also ordered Chotu to tke Shuarya wit him , so if thy got lead , r found his parents , Chotu handled thm thr child.
Chotu goes to Shaurya & tel him . "Chalo hum tumhara mummy ke pass chalte hai , "
Shaurya : Nahi. mujhe nahi jana.
Chotu : Par tumhari mummy tumhare wait kar rahi hongi.
Shuarya : Kar ne do , mai aaj Pa ke saath hi ghar jaaunga.
Chotu : (Whispers somthing in Shaurya's ear ) Shuarya look @ him frightnly & runs towards Rathod & hugs his legs agin , & closes his eyes. in a fear.
Rathod : (Bent little & took Shuarya in his arms ) Kya hua beta? (He ask worridly )
Shaurya : (Pointing towards Chotu) Pa vo kehete hai ki aap rakshs ho , raat mai aap ke bade bade daant nikal aate hai , aur aap bachho ko kha jaate ho. 😆
Rathod : (Look @ Chotu ) Chotu!!!!!!!!!!!! ( he yelled loudly on him)
Chotu : ( He jumps on his place & litterally run frm thr.)
Riya & Arjun try to supress thr smiles.
While Shuarya ask Rathod various questions & again irritates him .
Riya :Rathod Sir Mai try karu ?
Rathod : Theek hai .
Rathod leaves Shurya & seats on d chair & hold d glass to drink water, he abt to take a sip frm glass , whn suddenely he hears . " Mujhe bhi pyass lagi hai." Rathod forward his glass to Shurya , he try to hold glass wid one hand bt failed. Glass abt to fell on floor , whn Rathod held it & help Shuarya to drink water.
after drinking water Shuarya seats on Rathod's lap , Rathod irritates again.
He try to shift Shaurya on another chair bt d lilltle one dn't leave him.
Riya : Shaurya tum to mujhe jaante hi ho na .
S: Ha.
Riya : To tum bata sakte ho , ki tum kaha rehete ho?
S : Ha.
Arjun , Rathod & Riya felt happy , finally thy near to slove ths child case, who brought strom in thr life. Thy all listen him carefully nw.
Riya : Ha to batao Shurya , kaha rehete ho tum?
S : Ghar mai ... ( He calmly ans )
Trio look @ him angrily.
Riya : (calm down & again ask him ) ha beta , par aap ka ghar kaha pe hai?
S: Road pe..
before Riya ask her further questions Shuarya lean back on Rathod's body , his back now touches Rathod's chest. Rathod feels different . He feels like his own child is thr. Rathod signal Riya to stop her questions.
Shurya : ( Turn to Rathod 's chest & goes closer to him) Pa mujhe bhook lagi hai.
Rathod : (looked @ Arjun who observing thm.) Arjun tum yaha kya karne aye ho? kya tum meri help nahi karoge?
Arjun : ( Look @ Shurya who hold his best frnd tightly ) beta aap ke tiffin mai kya diya hai aaj.?
Shuarya : Bhendi ki sabzi aur roti. par mujhe vo nahi khana (& looking @ Rathod hopefully )
Riya : To aap ko kya khana hai?
S : Pizza..
Rathod : Bikul bhi nahi , jo tiffin mai aap ko diya hai , aap ko vahi khana padega.
Shuarya : (Look @ Rathod , Rathod give him do - u - understand look)
' Ye to bilkul Maa ki tarh bolte hai' + one. he thinks to himself.
Rathod : Jaao vaha table par baitho & apna tiffin pura finish karna hai , Shuarya climb down frm Rathod's lap & ask him abt wash-basin. Riya took him wid her. Aftersometime time Shaurya coimng & open his tiffin box. As soon as whn he starts to eat , rathod orderd him , "Pura tiffin finish karna hai , aur ha finish karna mujhe dikhna hai." Shuarya thinks + two.
Shuarya compete his parents . He matches Rathod's saying to his mother's saying & give him points. While Riya & Arjun look @ Rathod who behave like a father to Shuarya.
Shree calling Rathod & inform him tht thr is two cases of child missing bt none of thm name Shaurya.
While Arjun grab Shaurya's bag & try to find sumthing. He grab his books & he got Shaurya's school indentity card. He sees d name on tht & shocked . He looked @ Rathod , Rathod ask him what happened. Arjun handed him Shaurya's books & indentity card. Rathod read tht name . " Shaurya . S . Rathod. Rathod also shocked. Chotu cme in ofc & inform his Chief tht no-one recongnize Shaurya thr. Rathod sighs.
Arjun tell Rathod " Rathod ab hum ye DAV School mai jana hi padega. "
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
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aww such an emotional part😊
do continue soon dear.. would love to see more of it 😃

Edited by _mahi_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
rathore;- chotu...

and chotu......

bechara chotu...


the whole part is awesome...


i love this part awesome...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

awesome loving shaurya and his competing parentss aww soo cute..

lovely update
plzz cont son cant wait for next update yrr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

aww rathore is being so fatherly with saurya..very nice update..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

aww rathore being so fatherly with saurya..great update dear..love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
loved shaurya a lot, he's so funny and cutish 😆
N his and rathore's interactions are so cute😳
N poor chotu, Rathore ko rakshas banaya😆.
Please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
hahaha..ye chotu na..maraega kisi din 🤣 🤣
shaurya is sooo sweeet..ufff 😊
rathore abhi bhi samaj ni paya but loved his caring nature towards him 😊
do continue soon..
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

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