Ariya os : You r My Father (Part9/page 20)last - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
loved your update dear...
But it was kinda of short nah😳
Please update soon...
Poor Rathore😭
his kid is next to him, yet he doesnt know it😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
shaurya tooo cute
happy bday to ur dad
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
this was a bit emotional.😭 great update dear and continue soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Thx 4 ur wishes guys.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
rathore feels connected to shaurya 😊
and saloni is shaurya's mom!!
nice update...waiting for more..
and a very happy birthday to uncle 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice work

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
aww so sweet
kid is very cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue part...
Saloni nere forgot whn she met him , her soul , her Sameer. She closes d gate after coming in her house garden. Ys garden her mother's garden. her mother always love plants , flowers. So , she set up small garden arouund thr small home. Saloni look back to her frnd Sona , who drooped her homeafter clg. Sona is Saloni's best frnd , thy bth r vry vry talktive , thr gossip never end. Even somtimes Arjun also irritates . Saloni & Sona r always wit each other 24/7 . after whn thy come to home. thy touch through d phn. Saloni look back to her frnd , thy bth r talking to each other. Suddenely Saloni's gaze felt on her watch. " Hey bhagwan , kitni der ho gayi , ab to pakka Dada datnge , bechare bhuke baithe honge. chal bye bye Sona. baad mai cal karti hue. " Wit tht Saloni run to stairs. She hurridly climb staris & look @ watch repedetly. Suddnely she bumped into someone & also slipped. She frightened. " Aaj to mai gyi." bt one hand caught her & pull her . Saloni look @ person , who held her hand, bcoz in thr area nobody dare to hold her , even boys nt gng to talking to her, bcoz thy all knew her brother , angry young man Arjun Raute. Saloni look @ boy , who is 26th yrs old , she thinking, She look @ him carefully , fair skin , toned body , height abt 5"11 & d big dark brown eyes. His hairs comes to his forehead , his fregnace , his black shirt wit black pant give extra hotness to him . He held her frm his left hand covering her tiny waist & right hand supports on railing. She feel somthing , she nor protests him or blink her eyes. She just look @ him , thy bth lost in each other. She rested her one hand on his chest , & her body shiver , bcoz through fabric of his shirt she could touch his heart . she senses tht his heart beat also increases like her. She never goes to close to anyone. tht touch , tht closeness he give to her is a somthing new to her. Bt sudenely her phn buzzes , bt she totally lost in his eyes. she felt tht boy blink his eyes. she look @ him puzzled , he motion her through his eyes , tht pick d phn . Saloni's gaze fell on phn , who disturb thm , bt whn she sees her brother calling her , her mouth goes ' O ' shape & her big kohl black eyes goes bigger in worry , she immeadetly pick d phn . Tht boy stadies her , but still hold her.
Arjun : Kaha ho tum ? kitni der ho gyi hai ? aaj itni der kyu ho gyi?
Saloni : ( listens to her big brother while hold her lower lip through her teeth. )
Arjun : Hello , tum sun to rahi ho na ? kaha ho tum ?( He ask her angrily)
Saloni : Jee mai phn mai , mera matlab hai phn pe , mera matlab tha ki mai aapse baat kar rahi hue. Abhi 5 min mai aa jati hue. wit tht she bite her lower lip. & look a boy who enjy her conversation. she put d phn down. & look d his hand , who covered her waist . He removes his hand , & give her sme space so she cn go. She litterally run frm thr she look back & found tht boy staring @ her. tht boy again motion her somthing , bt she fail to understand wht he was saying & within a seconds she hits herself on d piller . Saloni cursed under her breath & rubbed her forehead. She again look @ tht boy who give her 'ouch expression' & smile to her . She felt happy & return her sweet smile to him . Suddenely she remeberd her bro ws waiting for her & she again ran frm thr.
In ths 4-5 days she is very disturb , she did small small mistakes . Once she gave Arjun namkin tea, instaed of suger she added salt on in his tea. Even Sona ask her wht happened bt she kept mum. In a day she frequently goes to stairs & look around & hoping tht he would come . bt he nerver comes.
Sunday Saloni's special day , bcoz she feels so happy on tht day , she inform her bro .
Saloni : Bhai aaj mai kuch special banati hue khane ke liye.
Arjun : Kyu aaj kuch spcial hai?
Saloni : Cheee , aap to bade boring ho , are aaj Sunday , Sunday kuch to acha khana hi chayie na..
Arjun : Tum aur tumhara Sunday. , ach suno aaj maine apne dost ko khane pe bulaya hai.
Saloni : k. boss. & goes to d kitchen.
She decided to prepare 'Gulab jamun , Paneer kadai & Roti , Jeera Rice , & Pinple Raita.
Saloni : hmmm ab aane do us bhai ke frnd ko , naam badal dungi agar na kahe ki khana bahut badiya hai. she said to herself & starts to preapare lunch. Saloni is very expert in cooking. tht skill inheriteded comes to her frm her mother. After thr parents deathSaloni have complete control on d kitchen.
She readies all food. She inform her brother tht food is ready. Arjun tld her wait for some time , his frnd is coming. Suddenely thr door bell rings & Arjun tld her to open d door. Saloni goes to hall & open d door. She found him, ys her boy , she observes him tod he wear blue & purple colour chx shirt. wit blue denim. Tht boy also shocked to see her in front of him. Thy again lost in each other's eyes.
"Are use andar to aane de "
Thy come out frm thr trance & look towarrds voice direction. Arjun comes in d hall & tld his little sis . Saloni immeadtely removes her hand frm door frame , so cn he come in. Arjun greets tht boy & hugs him .
Arjun : Thank god Sam tu aa gya , mjuhe laga ki tune mujhe tang dikha di.
Sameer : Kya tu bhi Saale tu bulaye aur mai na aau , aise kabhi hua hai kya?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww this is amazing dear...continue soon
Edited by funkylicious - 13 years ago

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